Puddles rough cut

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[MattMead]

yo lemme know what you think. i'm thinking about taking out the last shot and just ending on the fruit. the fact that he goes for the orange instead of the banana signifies the change in character (orange you glad i didn't say banana lolz), while at the same time leaving the ending somewhat ambiguous, which i like. i just feel like going to ashcock's door is too abrupt.

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[anskykids]

yoo already talked to you bout this and i agree ending too abrupt but i do love the music at the end...is that witfist? kind of sounds like fort minor

[IcePotato]

yo i think the ending came out really well actually, i was glad you showed him at the door. i think any less would have been a bit too ambigious and any more would have been too explicit. it's a good balance.

also, dude, the fruit bowl is kind of, um... phallic. you stroking that banana made me giggle like a little girl