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  • Yeah I'm here

  • Problem... i can't make videos... but i have an idea... we could communicate through channel messages... you leave a comment on my channel and then i'll reply with one on your's. sound good?

  • Are you on?

  • @23traves

    I'm on now. I'm sorry. I kinda left an assignment till the last minute. not on purpose of corse. I catch you later tomorrow. I think we should chat on a private video. only because we are cluttering up the episode and giving anyone that looks a huge spoiler. what cha think?

  • I figured out the exact time i can catch ya... the time for me is at least 2 or 3:00 in the afternoon here... and i found out the perfect song when Kanora releases his ultimate jutsu and the name for that jutsu as well

  • Sorry about earlier... i had to go... i'm not allowed to charge the computer since that is what caused it to break so how about we just chat like this and check every couple of hours before we reply. anyway how is the episode coming along?

  • GOt it.

  • @23traves

    Oh. Your on now? I still have some time before I have to go!

  • Sorry, but i can't stay on for more than an hour and i have to tell you since school is goin to be starting soon, i won't be able to catch you till the weekends. I can only stay on till 10:00 pm my time and that is it on the week days. so we'll have to send each other at least one message a day until the weekends. anyway how much more do you have to do on the episode?

  • @23traves Thats fine. I'm busy with school anyway. I'll try and get as much schoolwork done in the week as possible and free up the weekend.

  • Can you make more pls. This is so unique no one has a series like this. And its super good too.Can you tell me when the next one is out pls? :)

  • @cutieangelloll

    As soon as I have a brake in this massive amount of schoolwork I'm getting, I'll give you a heads up! Thanks for watching ^.^

  • @cutieangelloll

    Sorry about the loooong wait, it'll be out, hopefully on the 23rd

  • (One more thing i think that we should have the episode be finished after Magu reveals his true hair color)

  • @23traves

    Sorry but you caught me wen I was a school... are you still on?

  • (I'm on but only for an hour. How close are you to completing the episode?)

  • (Sorry but i won't be on for a while until i fix my computer.)

  • @23traves

    (oh. Well when you get this, i'm better now. I just caught the flu from my mum.)

  • @23traves

    (did you fix it??? btw, if you came one before and I wasn't tere it was because I hurt my ankle. It is really swollen and I can walk on it and My computer is upstairs. My laptop was broken but just now the new hard drive finished installing. If your not on tonight I have all day tommrow since i'm off school. oh and the next episode will also be delayed cuz of that)

  • (Its okay... i'm sure you'll be able to get on tomorrow and we have all weekend after that.)

  • When they get downstairs, Magu then sees Satoru's spirit... "Ah... i see... the Gorilla.... now he is lucky..."

  • @23traves

    (Hey, I don't know when I'l be on next cuz I'm really sick right now and I'm going go to bed for a bit. Sorry.)

  • (Are you on?)

  • Tori looks at him and then Magu decides to keep his hair the way it is from now on. "Anyway we'd better get downstairs... my mom has just finished the ramen."

  • (Okay... Pick it up tomorrow?)

  • "Its a bit embarassing, my hair was white originally, but when i got bitten by a wolf, it changed color, so i dyed it red..."

  • @23traves

    (I gotta go...)

  • "Well this is my true hair color... my parents don't even know..." Magu says... "And no... going into animal form is too dangerous without the proper training... besides... only Shamans are able to do it without getting killed."

  • @23traves

    "How could your parents not know your true hair color and why don't you have it all the time?"

  • (Okay) "Well want me to show you something?" Magu says... concentrating his chakra a bit... "Spirit of the Wolf..." The color of his hair drips to the floor and in its place are violet hairs with white stripes.

  • @23traves

    "Woah, you have to teach me how to turn into a fox spirit, its cool!"

  • "Courage... Leadership... Fatherly instincts... and the pure instinct to protect... The tiger spirit i used earlier wasn't my true spirit..."

  • @23traves

    (I'll be slow answering from now on, doing assignment)

    Tori smile, "Suits you" she said.

    "Thanks"

  • "Well the fox represents wisdom and craftiness, while the crane represents purity and grace..."

  • @23traves

    Tori blushed "What are you then?"

    "The wolf."

    "What dose that represent?"

  • "Let me see..." Magu says, flipping through the pages, "Here it is... Your main totem is the Fox, while your secondary totem is the Crane!"

  • @23traves

    "Cool!" she got out he sketch pad "I'm really good at drawing foxs." inside were beatufily drawn animals of all kind, a red fox was in the middle of them all.

    "Wow." he said "Thats awesome, I didn't know you were an artist!"

    "Thanks" she said.

  • Magu then turns to his book... "Hey i got an idea! Tell me your personality!"

  • @23traves

    "oh, uh I dunno. Cheerful uh, positive."

    "Kind." he smiled

    She smile back.

  • Magu then gets the hint and then walks to his room, he finds that a few of his things were there, especially his book on spirits... "Now where was I on this book... oh yes... The Spirit of the Wolf, My Main Totem...!"

  • @23traves

    Tori comes in smiling!

    "Hey! I was so excited when I heard that you were living here!"

    "I just hope I can survive your brothers death glares"

  • Magu walks in and then his mother smiles... "Hey! This will be our place to stay for a while... we already set up your room, it is in between Tori's room and Satoru's... and mind your manners around Sakura."

  • @23traves

    "Why specifically her?" Magu asked

    His mum grins, "You'll find out if you annoy her."

  • Magu walks to the adress to his temporary home and notices that it is in the UCHIHA RESIDENTS!

  • @23traves

    "Well this is good." thinks of tori "and bad." thinks of Satoru

  • "What the hell, Kanora! Why did you rip me away from Hikari!?!?! What the...?" Kuro kyuubi says, noticing six tails. (Let's stop on that for now.... and head back to before the exams)

  • @23traves

    (kay sure...)

  • His skin starts to peel away and two more tails come out, Naruto is trembling with fear as Kanora takes his flute and plays. "I Call on the power Of the KURO KYUUBI!"

  • @23traves

    Hikari screams then feints at the kuroi kyuubi is ripped from her. Naruto catches her before she can fall.

  • "This is the last mistake you'll ever make, you stupid Uchiha brat! I hate you!!!!!!"

  • @23traves

    "But Kanora-" She begins to say but she has to douge a swing of Kanors fist, which was unseeable behind all of the kyuubi chakura.

    "Kanora stop, I-" she screams as a kyuubi tail hits her and sends her into a building.

  • (That would be good) Kanora sees Magu lying on the ground, blood streaming from his mouth... "No... my only son...! Izani!!!!!" He yells, four tails of chakra flowing from behind him.

  • @23traves

    The beast roars and Izani know that theres no point talking to it no, he can't hear her...

  • Well then let's get what we can done

  • @23traves

    Okay, I read the kanora's rage thing... we going to rp it?

  • (Are you on?)

  • @23traves

    I was still at school... I'm on now, won't be here for long cuz I got an english assignment to do...

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  • (Heyo! I'm back.... my sister was able to get rid of a few things to make the computer functional, i'll see you when you get on)

  • (Sorry i might not be on today, the computer is having trouble with viruses and i'm using my mom's computer, which this will be the only time i will. So i don't know if i'll be on tonight.)

  • "Alright!" Magu says. He leads them to his house and after they eat, everyone leaves. The next day is their first mission, a D-rank, and the mission is to guide a group of construction workers to their construction site in the land of iron, and also to protect them before and during the construction.

  • (If you're wondering why i'm not on is because you kept me waiting... i'll try and catch you again tomorrow)

  • (Where are you? I've been waiting all night?)

  • @23traves

    (Hey, I'm sorry, I had a busy day today... I had school then A LOT of homework then tennis lessons then dinner, and, well, Monday just isn't my day I guess... I'll see you tomorrow...)

  • "Whoa...! I see, well i think i might as well head on home... mom is cooking making the clan famous Uzumaki Ramen, and i don't want to miss it... Would you guys like to come along?" Magu asks.

  • @23traves

    "That would be awesome!" said Tori,

    Ichiro smiled "Sounds good!"

  • (I'm on, are you?)

  • (I'll be on at around 8:30 my time)

  • (THat is why i didn't answer... to your last two replies.)

  • (Sorry about yesterday... battery died on me and wouldn't charge...)

  • (Please hurry back....)

  • @23traves

    (Back, you still there?)

  • @23traves

    (Well, I'll be on after school tomorrow. I've been trying to make some edits of Magu and Ichiro in the meantime... It's probably really late there isn't it, I'm sorry if I'm keeping you up a lot)

  • "But how? We didn't even get the bells... and i didn't even back up my warning..." Magu says, sitting down in an emo-like state...

  • @23traves

    "You all passed because you worked together as a team especially in that last part. That was a great combo."

    "Magu, don't need to be the strong man all the time, trust and work together with your teammates and you'll go far."

    "Tori... You were the one who was most concerned about the others safety and thats good but if you don't focus on your own situation, it might get you killed"

  • @23traves"Lastly, Ichiro, you have exelent leadership skills and can think of a plan quickly but you need to be more forcefull and not let your teammates do reckless things like running into battle with no plan and no help."

    "Ultimately you all have a long way to go but you exceeded my expectations so you pass!"

  • "Well at least we tried our best.... that should at least put our spirits to rest..." Magu says, trying to stay positive..."I messed up.... i didn't even back up my own words..."

  • @23traves

    (BRB dinner time)

  • "Wind-Style... Kotetsu Tiger Claw Jutsu!"

  • @23traves

    After all that Sasuke was no where to be seen, all that was left was a wooden training dummy that was singed, half torn apart and a note saying, 'Nice try, kids but the timer has gone off, meet me back at the three logs. signed Sasuke.'

    Magu grabbed the note angrily and tour it apart.

    "Thats it." he said "We lost."

    "Theres no way dad would be so harsh! I just now this can't be over" she said stubbornly "Come on" she said walking towards where the stumps were.

  • @23traves

    When they got there Sasuke was waiting for them.

    "You know whats coming now, don't you."

    "Don't bother saying it! God damn it! I'll kill you!" he ran towards him, but he was careless with rage and Sasuke caught him, put both hands behind his back and a kunai to his neck.

    "You didn't let me finnish." he said "I was going to say That you three, Pass!"

    "Dad this is so un fair, wait... did you just say???"

    "Yup." he smiled, let go of Magu and ruffled his hair "You pass!"

  • "Now for the final touch...!" Magu says, running into the fireball.

  • "Ready Dog-Breath!?! When i give the signal hit it hard!" Magu yells

  • @23traves

    Magu concentrated then gave the signal "NOW!" he said

    "Gatsuga!" yelled Ichiro and him and his dog turned into twin, giant black tornados aimed at Sasuke, who dogged it simply. only to find a huge fireball aimed at him accompanied by a gust of wind that made it much bigger...

  • "My teamates are counting on me to get them through this mission... and so...!" Magu then channels his chakra rapidly... "Demon Beast...! Seal.... Released!" Sasuke, in the real world is sent flying and then finds that Magu has turned into a creature half-human, half tiger.

  • @23traves

    *He broke me genjutsu? But he's just a genin!* sasuke thought

    "Magu! What are you doing?" Tori could see the the form Magu was in couldn't last long. Magu had a lot of chakura but this form was eating away at it fast.

    *This form won't last long, I have to finish this!* Magu thought

    Tori quickly explained this to Ichiro.

    "While he's in that form, we may aswell use it. I can smell that he has wind chakura and you have fire, you two can use those in a combo move. I'll distract him!"

  • Magu turns around and in less than a nanosecond is in front of Sasuke, eyes glowing red... "I gave you only one warning...." he punches a hole in Sasuke's shoulder, "And you didn't listen!"

  • @23traves

    Sasuke's figure suddenly melted to the ground.

    "Wha-??" started Magu but then the floor disappeared and he was falling. All of Magus comrades had disappeared.

    "Whats going on??!!" He shouted

    "You got trapped in my genjutsu." Sasuke appeared Next to Magu. Magu tried to punch him but his hand went right through like a ghost.

    "I admire your courage, boy, but you can't do it all on your own..."

  • A giant mass of chakra forms around Magu and then golden eyes form in the back. "Spirit of the Tiger!!!" a tiger shaped mass flies out and then gives Sasuke massive gashes on his arms, nearly ripping them off.

  • @23traves

    "Humph, should've listen to your teammate Baka." Sasuke dissappeared in a cloud of smoke then kicked Magu into a tree from behind. Tori cried out "Magu!" she started to run towards him but Ichiro stoped her "Tori! You have bigger problems!" and sure enough Sasuke was behind them both

    "Hello," he smirked

  • "We can worry about that later.... right now we need to get the bells..." Magu says... They find Sasuke and Magu jumps in... "You ready? I'll show you the power that gave me tha alias.... "The Tiger's Claw!" (I understand)

  • @23traves

    "Woah! Your just going to jump in there without a plan???" Shouted Ichiro

    "Don't worry so much dog breath!"

  • "Ichiro.... use your nose... we can track him down and then i'll distract him... while that is done go for the bells."

  • @23traves

    (PS, My sister needs to use the mac (Which is the comp that I'm making the next episode on) so i'll still be able to talk using the PC but I can't continue making the episode, just sayin)

    "No I meant, who's going back to the academy?"

  • Magu steps up... "I'm not going to let that happen... send me back... but leave my team alone..." Magu says, his eyes turning red, "That is your only warning...!"

  • @23traves

    "Magu, don't say that! I'm not going to let you do that!"

    Sasuke walked over to the timer sitting on a tree stump.

    "Are you three ready or what?" he asked "I don't have all day, work something out" he said

    "I Told you we're not doing this! It's not fair with only two-"

    "Ready, start" Sasuke said ignoring Magu. Then he disappeared and watched them from afar.

    "What are we going to do then?" asked Tori.

  • "That is the test... now you can either work as a team, or on your own... it is your decision..." Sasuke says...

  • @23traves

    "But thats not fair!" said Ichiro "If we work as a team one of us is going to miss out anyway!"

    Sasuke grinned.

    "Better work out something, you have till noon or you fail the test." he smirked "And if you fail, you can go back to the academy"

  • (YEAH!!! Glad i caught you...! I was about to go all emo)

  • (You didn't, my sister had the computer.)

  • @23traves

    (I'm back again, you still there?)

  • (Just hurry back... or i'll fall asleep)

  • @23traves

    (I'm here)

  • @23traves

    (I guess I missed you, sorry...)

  • (Hurry back)

  • @23traves

    (yah, sorry about that there was a movie on tv and I totally 4got and I'm going bike riding now. I'm really sorry I forgot I'll try to be back later.)

  • (Oh yeah...) "Your objective is to obtain these bells." Sasuke says, taking them to the training field.

  • @23traves

    "But Sensei, there are 3 of us and only two bells, why?"

  • (Sasuke) "Now that i have heard a few things about you... i want to give you guys a test..." Sasuke says, bringing out three bells.

  • @23traves

    (BRB lunch time... Oh, and isn't it 2 bells?)

  • "Heh... always said to him... 'Never be a wolf hiding among sheep as a guard dog.'"

  • @23traves

    (Uh, who said that exactly???)

  • Sasuke looks up surprised and then looks down gently, making sure he doesn't give away any bad motives... "And you dog-breath, as Magu called you"

  • @23traves

    Ichiro shot a death glare at Magu.

    "My name is Ichiro Inuzuka, My hobbies are training with Kage, my dog and hanging out with friends... I guess my goal would be to become a great Inuzuka like my dad..."

  • "My name is Magu Namikaze.... my favorite hobbies include dowsing, fortune telling, and contacting spirits for jutsu... my best spirit is one of the legendary beasts, the White Tiger.... My future goal is to help my father reunite the Uzumaki clan..."

  • @23traves

    "Okay, next..." Sasuke looked at Tori who was siting in the middle

    "I'm Tori Uchiha... my hobbies include drawing and training my sharingan... My future goal is to achieve the mangekyo sharingan and to become one of the strongest Uchihas of my clan."

  • Sasuke smiles slighttly.... "Well this seems to be a good place to start.... now come with me to the balcony... i would like to answer some questions..."

  • @23traves

    "Hai!" they all say.

    They go to that balcony,

    "Now, why don't you all introduce yourself, starting with your name, hobbies and goals for the future" says sasuke sitting on the balcony rail.

  • (Oh...! The time for the attack on Konoha is at the very end of the Chunin exams, when Naruto announces that the Exams are over for the year.)

  • @23traves

    (Okay, that sounds good...)

  • Sasuke enters and finds that Magu smiles... "Pay up, dog-breath!"

  • @23traves

    "Damn it." he says "I'll pay you later, don't have any money on me." he mumbled

    "Hey dad!" says Tori

  • (Back) Magu sits in a meditative stance and his shadow seems to start to shift into a different form. "I hope we get someone from the current Sanin... i have my money it is Hokage Naruto... since he achieved Sanin rank before the last war started..."

    "Twenty yen that it is Lord Sasuke..." Magu says.

  • @23traves

    (Oh heh, sorry I didn't even relize you were back... and the page took a while to load on my slow computer, anyways)

    "You're on" Said Ichiro putting his feet up on the desk in front"

  • (BRB... dinner time)

  • @23traves

    (K. I'll be here.)

  • (Magu, Ichiro, and Tori. We'll have th others be a surprise later, near the begining of the Konoha attack... and i selected a time for the attack as well)

  • @23traves

    (Cool. I've just started making the episode.)

    Team 7 went to their assigned room to wait.

    "I wonder who we'll get," Tori thought out loud.

  • Where are you?

  • Are you on?

  • (Well i'm heading to bed... you can continue if you want and i'll catch up in the morning.)

  • (Are you back?)

  • (Are you back?)

  • (Got it! Hurry back!)

  • The team all grunts and then looks away... "Now for everyone... you will meet in these rooms and wait for your sensei... dismissed..."

  • @23traves

    (I'm back. Who's team are we rping waiting for their sensei?)

  • "And the reason why i put Tori with Ichiro and Magu... is because Magu's skill level is on par to a mix of both Kazu and Satoru... Tori has the know how of several things, including Kekkei Genkai, and Ichiro has skills in Leadership, and is one of the fastest of the students..."

  • @23traves

    "Anyway, lets move on the next team, team 10 is... Lei Rock, Seiji Hyuuga and Kono Amasawa"

    "Score!" Said Lei a little too loudly, she then blushed and looked at seiji who was looking the other way"

    *Ugh, I bet she'll get on my nerves* Seiji thought

    "And next team 11, Asuka Nara, Dan Rock and Mushi Aburame"

    (I'm going out for a bit now, I don't know when i'll get back but when I do i'll start making this episode...)

  • "Because it since you two are always going at each other's throats... i thought that Satoru would at least put a leash on the two of you, because you two act like a pack of rabid DOGS!!!!"

  • @23traves

    "And besides, The teams were chosen to have a mix of skill levels and you, Hikari, are at the bottom while Satoru has some of the best scores. Now sit down, Uzumaki."

    Hikari's eyes widened then they narrowed and she sat down, ignoring the laughing class.

    "Try not to get in my way, blondie" Satoru said

    "WHAT WAS THAT?"

    "Shut up, Hikari, your so embarrassing" sighed Kazu

  • Magu looks at Kage and smiles as well... "Glad you agree as well!"

  • @23traves

    *Aw, man, I'm not with Tori.* Kazu thought.

    *Hmmm, I can live with anyone as long as I'm not with the Uchiha brat, Satoru.* Hikari thought

    *I don't like that guy, Tori, I think, likes him too much* Satoru thought

    "and the next team, team 9, is: Uchiha Satoru, Uzumaki Kazu and Uzumaki Hikari"

    *Just great, I'll never have a moments peace with those two in my group!* Thought Kazu as his sister stood up.

    "But sensei! Why dose an awesome ninja like me have to be with Uchiha brat???"

  • (Yeah...) Magu comes in and sits down next to Tori and Ichiro... and they are announced to be a team.

  • @23traves

    "Alright!" Says Magu

    Tori looks over at Magu and smiles "Cool!" she says

    Ichiro smiles and Kage (His dog) barks

  • Karin comes in breathing hard... "Magu...Namikaze!!! You are in serious trouble now!"

    "Uh oh... on second thought i'll see you tomorrow...!" Magu says, running off.

  • @23traves

    Tori couldn't help but giggle "Bye Magu!" she yelled after him.

    (Then maybe I could skip to the next day?)

  • Konohamaru talks to them and thinks of making things interesting... "Come back tomorrow... i'll give you your team at seven."

  • @23traves

    "Hai, sensei!" Magu says gleefully "What do you wana do now, Tori san?"

  • "Thanks... that would be nice..." Magu says, "Iku ze!"

  • @23traves

    "See ya, Satoru." Tori said.

    "Tsh, whatever, I'm going home."

  • "I don't have a home village... i've been living with my father and the Uzumaki and Namikaze clan for a while now..."

  • @23traves

    "Well then," Said Tori smiling "You can go ask Konohamaru Sensei to go to the explanatory meeting tomorrow. There we'll be put into teams. He should be in the academy, I can show you the way if you want."

  • "Well i've been a genin for a whole year now... there is no need for me..."

  • @23traves

    "Where are you from then?" asked Satoru

  • Magu smiles... then looks at him with an uneasy look... "Well if i had to guess, you guys just graduated from the academy..."

  • @23traves

    "Yeah." said Tori. " You'll need to go there first, if you want to become a ninja."

  • "Hello... my name is Magu Namikaze... It is very nice to meet you...!"

  • @23traves

    Satoru walks out.

    "Um, this is my brother, Satoru Uchiha... Brother, this is Magu, he just moved here."

    Satoru regarded him "Nice to meat you, Magu."

  • (Nice timing) Magu has wondered off into Konoha and has run into Tori, who had just left the hospital.

  • @23traves

    "Hey I'm Magu, Namikaze. I just moved to Konoha!"

    Tori blushed, Magu's yellow eyes gave him a demotic look but it also made him look quite handsome.

    "Yeah, I am, well, as soon as I get assigned to a group tommorow."

  • @23traves

    "Oh and My name is Tori Uchiha."

  • (Hurry back... i have to leave for a while in a half an hour) "Fine... hey... where'd Magu go?"

  • @23traves

    (I'm back...)

  • "Kanora is feeling kind of down since he had to hurt Hikari to get the Demon Crystal..."

  • @23traves

    "Oh," he said "Well, I guess it's up to my daughter if she wants to forgive him"

    Hikari blinked. "Uh, I guess so, I mean, if he's that down about it I can't just tell him to shove off"

    (Lunch time, BRB!)

  • "They've been assigned as Kanora's personal guard..." Karin says... "Though Suigetsu does go nuts with his new sword..."

  • @23traves

    "Hah," Sasuke said, "All those threats from the akatsuki and they don't even manage to kill one of us."

    "Karin, where is Kanora now? Why don't they all come back?" Naruto askes seriously.

  • "Kanora says that something is up and has sent me and magu to live in Konoha for the time being..."

  • @23traves

    "And, what of suigetsu and Juugo?" he asked "Are they alive?"

  • She smiles... "i had other things to take care of... like kanora's son, Magu..."

  • @23traves

    "Oh. Well, what brings you here now?" he asked