This reminds me of A Tale of Two Sisters, a Korean Horror movie (2003), remade into the American version called The Uninvited. Same sister kind of theme. Really good video though.
That's sad : ( I don't know what I'd do if I lost my brother. When you lose a sibling, it's a lot like being torn apart. I wouldn't know how to react in a situation like that. It was a very good short, but very sad.
no one knows how Erin died. I was in this video and i don't even know. It just happened. Showing a child's view of death. By the way, Erin is Katie's sister, to anyone who thought she was her friend.
I really enjoyed your short. Great story idea but I didn't like the car scene when they were leaving the house to go to the church. I didn't really feel like they went anywhere, maybe you should have an empty street and then the car comes in to the scene rather than have the car driving then stop all of a sudden. I cant explain it better but you probably get what i mean.
I have watched this til 4:11 and I have something to say before I continue watching this: I am guessing or feeling that the girl (the tall one) with the black jacket is imaginary, she is just in the little girls head.. let's see if that is true...
the whole beginning (everything before katie sees anna in the coffin) is katie imagining anna playing w/ her. she's already dead in the beginning. get it?
in the beginning everyone is alive, then erin dies and we come back the day of her funeral. katie is hiding in the closet because that is where erin hid when they played hide and seek.
I wasn't a huge fan of how this was filmed. It looks too much like a soap opera. If that's what they were going for, then they nailed it, but I didn't quite get the same feeling I do with some other VFS films; others feel much more cinematic. Good story, though.
good film. that said, has anyone else noticed that many VFS films have sketchy sound quality? Are they not using industry standard mics?? i can barely hear and when i can it makes the films seem home videoish and takes away from the cinematic quality that is almost reached in other areas.
it was her sister. They had the same hair style and sat at the same breakfast table and the parents were involved in the game. And in the car her older sister is buckling her up. And like only a sister can, when Katie is woken by her mother, her sister wiggles her fingers in her ears in the doorway.
i liked it... but theres an awkward air to it... i noticed that similar air in a couple of vfs films. i wonder if they teach it to them in that way. or they all adapted to that type of flavour. err its intangible can't really explain.
when i become a father i need to have a strong american accent, it would be awesome
i know these films from the college are supposed to be short but if it were longer i may be more attached to it, i didnt really feel anything till the girl shut herself in the cuboard, that was really good
That was so sad... :( It was so good! I don't understand, so the girl fell asleep while playing tag, and then she slept long enough for her friend to die. When the girl came to her friend's funeral, she was dead. And that's it?
i think the game of "hide and seek" was a dream at the beginning. she just woke up on the funeral day. but how do you forget that your friend is dead?
i think the game of "hide and seek" was a dream at the beginning. she just woke up on the funeral day. but how do you forget that your friend is dead?
I nearly cried. It's beautifully directed. :] By the way, the little girl who played Katie was really pretty. I don't mean that in a weird way or anything. xD
i think erin died due to suffocation. coz they were playing tag on that day katie was wearing red and erin was wearing that blue dress. she must have hidden in that closet where katie was sleeping. that's why the mom opened the door. erin must have hidden somewhere and was found too late. there was a real life story i saw before on the telly where two girls decided to sleep inside the filing cabinets and they died. they were found hours after they already suffocated.
That was amazing (I know everyone says that) Its very professional and it looks great. The story is fantastic and quite sad, but VFS and Lisa Whitten did a top notch job. More PLEASE :)
will you please go die in a hole? I mean if you have your head stuck so flipping far up you ass to relize moving this is then you need some flipping help.
at first u think she has an imaginary friend and it take awhile to understand what really happens.. but it's really good and it made me cry.. especially at the part where she finds Ann.
This could have been done better. The transitions between scenes were a bit sloppy, especially the car scene for example, driving away and then parking within 2 seconds? A younger child might have been more convincing and given a stronger effect, and the ending felt weak. It's a good idea, however.
I dunno, the only problem that I have with this is that the girl playing the part seemed too old for that kind of reaction. I mean, I can see it from a five year old... but the girl's about seven, eight? Especially with the coffin scene.
wow that hit a nerve i cant really relate to the girl katie cuz ive never lost a sibling but i have lost a child and i know the hurt the parents must be going through
hey the mum in this movie looks alot like my lecturer Dr Gill Venn from Kingston Uni PRMB. anyways. I really like my lecturer, she is a nice person....
good, but the foreshadowing was overdone. you understand that the sister is dead the instant you see the mother wake the girl up. that part needs to be more subtle, and then the rest of the foreshadowing will work to provide that little twist.
its not supposed to show how she died it just showed that her and that girl were good friends maybe it was a flash back or something and it just showed her going to her funeral it was good but sad
katie is in denial. denial is what humans do when they are not ready to accept death. the parents know she is in denial and are helpless to reach her. the predictability of the plot allows us to understand the denial right away and it allows us to identify with katie. to feel what she is feeling or will soon feel.
Oh... I see. Then this video lacks originality, to be honest. This theme is way too overused and the use of children is kinda stereotyped in my opinion. I mean... I see similar videos all the time which communicate the exact same theme. No offence. There could have been better actors too, but this wasn't very bad. It's not that bad, really, but I've seen way better before ^^
it's not important how she died. we don't know how she died. it is important to understand katie the live girl is in denial. denial is what a person does when they are unable to accept death. we see the dead girl only in katie's dream and imagination. the parents know she is in denial but are unable to reach her.
Cute concept, but the acting wasn't great, and because of this, it wasn't believable, and thus, didn't connect emotionally. The audio was distracting and the levels seemed off between dialogue and background noise. I wouldn't go so far as to say it was bad, but due to the awkward acting and the predictable and poorly written script paired with the really nice photography and colour, I think it's completely mediocre. Nothing special. Oh well.
Cute concept, but the acting wasn't great, and because of this, it wasn't believable, and thus, didn't connect emotionally. The audio was distracting and the levels seemed off between dialogue and background noise. I wouldn't go so far as to say it was bad, but due to the awkward acting and the predictable and poorly written script paired with the really nice photography and colour, I think it's completely mediocre. Nothing special. Oh well.
This reminds me of A Tale of Two Sisters, a Korean Horror movie (2003), remade into the American version called The Uninvited. Same sister kind of theme. Really good video though.
baubrey1001 2 weeks ago
I do believe the game was hide and seek, not tag. But nice video anyway
TwistedRainbowSock 1 year ago
That's sad : ( I don't know what I'd do if I lost my brother. When you lose a sibling, it's a lot like being torn apart. I wouldn't know how to react in a situation like that. It was a very good short, but very sad.
Winchester85 2 years ago
WOW
peacefulshades 2 years ago
i saw this 2 years ago and it made me cry ive been looking for it since then i saw a vid made by a dif person and i found it
wpolarbear224 2 years ago
no one knows how Erin died. I was in this video and i don't even know. It just happened. Showing a child's view of death. By the way, Erin is Katie's sister, to anyone who thought she was her friend.
cutttieeeluvsmusik 2 years ago
wow! this is gr8 film i mean so sad but great i dont know how somone wouldnt like it!
lifeisgr8inscg8s3 2 years ago
I'm sorry, but this just isn't very good.
It needs a number of things:
Good acting.
Cinematic filters.
Better lighting.
An original storyline.
There are so many stories with this same idea. Me and Emma, Invisible, the end is almost the same as my girl.
cutaxelem 2 years ago
It's a student film I believe.
baycrum267 2 years ago
well done. very sad, but amazingly done.
What happened to the girl in the end when she closed the closet door? And did her sister die because she was in the closet??
simply4savannah 2 years ago
it made me cry. so well done.
oOguineapigOo 2 years ago
I really enjoyed your short. Great story idea but I didn't like the car scene when they were leaving the house to go to the church. I didn't really feel like they went anywhere, maybe you should have an empty street and then the car comes in to the scene rather than have the car driving then stop all of a sudden. I cant explain it better but you probably get what i mean.
Aimenzeenni 2 years ago 3
Very well done, thanks alot :)
TheMesh 2 years ago
I didn't know what was going on until I saw the coffin :'( very well done.
RainREM 3 years ago
T_T
it made me feel sad.. such a nice film.. T_T
xxhristxx 3 years ago
At 2:18 I was crying!
This was wonderfully made.
saruhara 3 years ago
I have watched this til 4:11 and I have something to say before I continue watching this: I am guessing or feeling that the girl (the tall one) with the black jacket is imaginary, she is just in the little girls head.. let's see if that is true...
idiotkrati 3 years ago
Yes, it was a true statement. The girl was dead... oh my God, so sad..
idiotkrati 3 years ago
Sarcastically? I just wanted to make sure.
Arun1080 3 years ago
No, absolutely not sarcasticallt!
idiotkrati 3 years ago
how did erin die?
matalentroks 3 years ago
Aaaaw that was so sweet and sad D:
feligirl01 3 years ago
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wtf dis shit vfs mkes itself out 2 be all pro and good but all there films are borin as fuk
Zman462 3 years ago
wow this film i can relate to. it actaully made me cry cuz of memories. good film.
AmatureChicanoking 3 years ago
wow... thats a confusing flim.. i dont get it..
anybody care to explain??
jessepoo82 3 years ago
the whole beginning (everything before katie sees anna in the coffin) is katie imagining anna playing w/ her. she's already dead in the beginning. get it?
danceinthemoonlight 3 years ago
umm i get that part but like at the end when katie goes in the closest and closes the door..?
thats the part that i dont get lol
jessepoo82 3 years ago
Perhaps she's hiding from reality. At the beginning she didn't want to remember. This is another way of doing so.
K4hl4n4mnell 3 years ago
Or upon further thinking, she's waiting for Erin to come tag her, since Erin is "sleeping."
K4hl4n4mnell 3 years ago
Because when the door is open she cant hide and Erin will find her. In her world shes still playing hide and seek
Sinsoftheheart 3 years ago 3
in the beginning everyone is alive, then erin dies and we come back the day of her funeral. katie is hiding in the closet because that is where erin hid when they played hide and seek.
eolhC 3 years ago
how....did Erin die?
AkanemaruNayuchi 3 years ago
knew the end before it started, lol
ReesesMonkeyXP 3 years ago
I wasn't a huge fan of how this was filmed. It looks too much like a soap opera. If that's what they were going for, then they nailed it, but I didn't quite get the same feeling I do with some other VFS films; others feel much more cinematic. Good story, though.
jabraulter 3 years ago
this is a cool zombie movie
rubberbuttbuster 3 years ago
i do not get this video and is the film school acting or like directing and shooting?
candyisbetternyou 3 years ago
good film. that said, has anyone else noticed that many VFS films have sketchy sound quality? Are they not using industry standard mics?? i can barely hear and when i can it makes the films seem home videoish and takes away from the cinematic quality that is almost reached in other areas.
slowave 3 years ago
Omg,
Thats so sad.
;[
Plus that mom is rude
eevm94 3 years ago
how is the mom rude??
Oakaloke 3 years ago
this movie scared the s***t out of me...
ArchangelLilith 3 years ago
I didn't like how the mother said exactly what a mother in a bad movie is supposed to say.
FierceRodents 3 years ago
Now that was really not very surprising. Still nice work.
FierceRodents 3 years ago
omg! great job!
belbel94 3 years ago
it was her sister. They had the same hair style and sat at the same breakfast table and the parents were involved in the game. And in the car her older sister is buckling her up. And like only a sister can, when Katie is woken by her mother, her sister wiggles her fingers in her ears in the doorway.
fterbirth 3 years ago
Erin should have come back in her dream and said, "Tag!" and run away laughing, and leaving her behind. That would have been even more moving.
I almost cried. I'm such a sap.
ttlyunique 3 years ago
THis video affected me so much. It's something everyone can relate to.
101100 3 years ago
i liked it, even though it was sad :(. just oone thing, was anna her sister or friend?
irisleaa 3 years ago
i think its erin
and im quite sure it was her sister. i wish i knew how she died...
very sad, but very good; i agree
SpotlightChick3000 3 years ago
wait im kinda confused ...how did the little girl die??and this is really sad
chrisbrwnsbabe8 3 years ago
i liked it... but theres an awkward air to it... i noticed that similar air in a couple of vfs films. i wonder if they teach it to them in that way. or they all adapted to that type of flavour. err its intangible can't really explain.
jan1cia 3 years ago 8
i sensed it too, i guess that what makes VFS films unique and great.
jenpai 2 years ago
i liked it.
liverpoolsamurai 3 years ago
Great job! But its so sad! :(
brittlubbers 3 years ago
My friend passed away last year from cancer she was just 11, this video is so sad
kaylasinger21 3 years ago
the dad has such an amazing accent.
when i become a father i need to have a strong american accent, it would be awesome
i know these films from the college are supposed to be short but if it were longer i may be more attached to it, i didnt really feel anything till the girl shut herself in the cuboard, that was really good
KaiDarkSnake 3 years ago
how did the girl die?
IfAnyoneCared 3 years ago
How doesn't matter. Peace.
ivoman7 3 years ago
That was so sad... :( It was so good! I don't understand, so the girl fell asleep while playing tag, and then she slept long enough for her friend to die. When the girl came to her friend's funeral, she was dead. And that's it?
krw239 3 years ago
i think the game of "hide and seek" was a dream at the beginning. she just woke up on the funeral day. but how do you forget that your friend is dead?
jj11895 3 years ago
just the plain shock of that at shuch a young age was probly very VERY hard, I doubt that she wanted to rember her friend was dead. I wouldnt.
BloomingWithJoy1 3 years ago
my last coment was a reply to someone elses
BloomingWithJoy1 3 years ago
i think the game of "hide and seek" was a dream at the beginning. she just woke up on the funeral day. but how do you forget that your friend is dead?
jj11895 3 years ago
maybe just an illusion from shock that your friend has died would send you into a false state of believing their death wasnt real?
or something
KaiDarkSnake 3 years ago
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the film work could be better.
smileytoesyourmom 3 years ago
it's a child's understanding of death
smileytoesyourmom 3 years ago 10
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I didn't really get it
and I don't kno who thught th acting was good, I think it's was awful.:S
Cherinbrook 3 years ago
uh, it was ok, like a underfunded 6th sense
terminatorgir 3 years ago
Nice work , thanks
quicklooks 3 years ago 2
that was so sad and well acted.
prettynpunk117 4 years ago 4
That was really sad.
ananabob007 4 years ago 2
great job on the movie, this was rly touching and beatiful...
cinny108 4 years ago
Brilliant! Nice!
What a good film! Good Job VFS's guys.
Good luck!
daam37 4 years ago
I nearly cried. It's beautifully directed. :] By the way, the little girl who played Katie was really pretty. I don't mean that in a weird way or anything. xD
glitchkillgasmx 4 years ago
really beatifull
agentpf1101 4 years ago
nice!
btw:
how do you get the "more from: vancouverFilmSchool"-column open ?
i cant find it in the options.
ty
Aleteuk 4 years ago
i am crying!!!
duvee425 4 years ago
i think erin died due to suffocation. coz they were playing tag on that day katie was wearing red and erin was wearing that blue dress. she must have hidden in that closet where katie was sleeping. that's why the mom opened the door. erin must have hidden somewhere and was found too late. there was a real life story i saw before on the telly where two girls decided to sleep inside the filing cabinets and they died. they were found hours after they already suffocated.
sabaw22 4 years ago
i don't think so...i think Katie was dreaming when they were playing tag. SO nobody knows how erin died.
cinny108 4 years ago
Not very original. It was like watching The 6th sense. But keep practising.
vbacova 4 years ago
yup. predictable. stiff acting. its not that bad tho.
precursor 4 years ago
That was amazing (I know everyone says that) Its very professional and it looks great. The story is fantastic and quite sad, but VFS and Lisa Whitten did a top notch job. More PLEASE :)
Denis619 4 years ago
bravo!
cabooseey 4 years ago
vfs rocks
erimtuna 4 years ago 2
wow!!!! i cried!!! i relly do! I would like to know the whole story, I mean, how did she died and everything...
Princess7Aleth 4 years ago 2
same
pkgini 4 years ago 2
MEE TOO !
cabooseey 4 years ago
that was so sad...
does anyone know what exactly caused erin to die?
buttMunch31 4 years ago 2
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Probably suffocation.
From your fat fucking ass.
get up and do something instead of crying over a shitty ass video.
HamSTARx3 3 years ago
will you please go die in a hole? I mean if you have your head stuck so flipping far up you ass to relize moving this is then you need some flipping help.
BloomingWithJoy1 3 years ago
Well done! Well done!
cpcollantes 4 years ago 2
gr8
bartmanxoxo 4 years ago 2
Very well done!
gregmgm06 4 years ago 3
at first u think she has an imaginary friend and it take awhile to understand what really happens.. but it's really good and it made me cry.. especially at the part where she finds Ann.
spslaveonline 4 years ago
I cried, it was a great short. poor Katie, I'll play tag with you :D
sonnythestuntman 4 years ago 2
nice short
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ArtoSarri27 4 years ago
how the hell did she die????
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boxybrown44 4 years ago
Well, concidering it was made from someone still in film school, I'd say it was really good.
xxkuroxaixx 4 years ago 4
This could have been done better. The transitions between scenes were a bit sloppy, especially the car scene for example, driving away and then parking within 2 seconds? A younger child might have been more convincing and given a stronger effect, and the ending felt weak. It's a good idea, however.
Conner999 4 years ago 8
nice feed back
35t4R 4 years ago
I still say I'd love to see this as a full length feature. :)
chaoticpix93 4 years ago 2
esta bien loco carnal
elipidem 4 years ago
she it's join to angel ... love this film :'(
zizka77 4 years ago
please please wake up... so sad ._.
Fischlaender 4 years ago
so sad. Very well done.
LizzyDel 4 years ago 2
BORING!!!
rocolicious 4 years ago
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its not boring.....like your gay page
platapussman 4 years ago
... :( ...
mmmd2 4 years ago
I dunno, the only problem that I have with this is that the girl playing the part seemed too old for that kind of reaction. I mean, I can see it from a five year old... but the girl's about seven, eight? Especially with the coffin scene.
chaoticpix93 4 years ago 5
I tjought that in the dream, Erin should be the one who's hiding, and Katie should have been looking for her.
ELMandtheGriffinetts 4 years ago
she was simply dreaming that she was playing again.
PrincessKyan 4 years ago
im so sad now...........
free2bdaydreaming 4 years ago
that was like sooo sad. i didn't get it at first because they were playing tag and then the alive one was asleep. but that was really sad!
avril19rox 4 years ago
wow that hit a nerve i cant really relate to the girl katie cuz ive never lost a sibling but i have lost a child and i know the hurt the parents must be going through
evintari 4 years ago
hey the mum in this movie looks alot like my lecturer Dr Gill Venn from Kingston Uni PRMB. anyways. I really like my lecturer, she is a nice person....
zeb120 4 years ago
omg this is really depressing stuff like this really gets to me
SupadupaNats123 4 years ago
the film is about 2 sisters, one died, but the other one sees her in her fantasy
When shes by the chest she realised her sister was just a fantasy.. her sister is dead.
lakasana 4 years ago
i DONT GET IT! some one please tell m,e what this means
helly028 4 years ago
SO good.
AshGurl2897 4 years ago
depressing... but so good
WACKYteenLIFE 4 years ago
ya that was prettie sad.
pilotnicco 4 years ago
That was so sad. It's really good though.
MissKassylou 4 years ago
i was laughing cause i tho theired be a twist and she would jump up form the dead and yell ur it lmao
machineanimalhit 4 years ago
this is sad...
PaulaCute229 4 years ago
this is so good :'(
meghansmith2006 4 years ago
This is so sad T_T
NarutoDude134 4 years ago
This Brecks my heart so sad T_T
NarutoDude134 4 years ago
that kid was fucking numb :p
anticommon 4 years ago
desolee moi c frenchy :)
au debut décue d'avoir trop tot "compris" que l'enfant était morte, mais totalement reconquise par la suite..
quel dommage qu'elle ait fermé la porte..
Super taf, Merci ..
sicette 4 years ago
That was so sad. Brilliant job.
LJacks37 4 years ago
Not bad. Keep learning!
LORDBOJANGLES 4 years ago
omg, that's so sad. now I wonder if kids really do undestand the concept of death..
lil2kool 4 years ago 2
i mean... what? that's not even how you play tag!
doctorwhoallsorts 4 years ago
Hide and go seek tag
dustin12388 4 years ago
just PERFECT! but sad!
guimori 4 years ago 2
this is really sad!!!!!!!
soccerslush300 4 years ago
this is so good
JPau216 4 years ago
pretty good, be more amazing to show more flashbacks about how her sister died.
holachickens 4 years ago
i love the way she loves her sister like that and i thought it was just so cute... OMG depressing often heh heh
Britt3333 4 years ago
Excellent script, screenplay, camera movements etc.
Acting - fake crying/grief and when the dad says "Come on katie lets go" Acting needs to be done way better.
Xuvius52 4 years ago 2
Ghosts don't exist. Katie was merely imagining that her sister was still alive.
TheMathGuy 4 years ago 3
Lisa has a lot of talent, and I hope she moves on to bigger things with this.
BDWFilms115 4 years ago
i think she's not in denial, she's just playing with her sister in spirit
dabruddas 4 years ago
how do you understand the coffin scene without denial. your words "just playing with her sister in spirit" are very true with or without denial.
flggd 4 years ago
good, but the foreshadowing was overdone. you understand that the sister is dead the instant you see the mother wake the girl up. that part needs to be more subtle, and then the rest of the foreshadowing will work to provide that little twist.
rufsketch1 4 years ago 5
Indeed, it coudlve been done better. But hey thats why were studying ;)
W4RW017 4 years ago
I agree But it is a good peice, it just needs a few revisions
ShuiShindou 4 years ago
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yuck. yucky acting. sorry. good effort though.
Voltechs 4 years ago
That was really well done :), amazing piece of work
GambitsBane 4 years ago
wow, thats so amazingly beautiful :''(
butterflydudette 4 years ago 2
This was so cliché it made my toes curl.
"She's asleep"
"When's she going to wake up?"
Give me a break.
Fucking Media Students.
Tom46664 4 years ago
try the truth. if you had told the truth your comment would have been " i am a heartless soulless troll who cannot understand a sensitive film.
flggd 4 years ago
then why the fuck do you post this shit?
screw you.
8B6EB8 4 years ago
aww........... =[
xMcrfan4everx 4 years ago
WOW...
yup that about sums it up.
jsparhwk 4 years ago
it made me cry - just a little...
13saskia13 4 years ago
absolutely beautiful piece of work!
rrraawwwkk50 4 years ago 4
I don't think it's confusing in the slightest. It's remarkably simple, but at the same time it's captured the essence of confusion in a young mind.
This is an utterly beautiful piece - and it goes to show that you don't need millions to make a story that can touch you.
malgrimace 4 years ago
Utterly beautiful piece is, in my opinion, overrated. Honestly, I've seen this plot so many times before, and the acting could have been better.
Plus, saying that you enjoy a piece simply because it makes you look smart is somewhat ridiculous if you ask me.
Oh god, I already feel those -1's coming, even if I'm not a troll. People merely cannot accept negative comments nowadays.
Desu666 4 years ago 2
its not supposed to show how she died it just showed that her and that girl were good friends maybe it was a flash back or something and it just showed her going to her funeral it was good but sad
CuteLittleRazorBlade 4 years ago
It was really confusing.. and I agree with nabmab
Desu666 4 years ago
katie is in denial. denial is what humans do when they are not ready to accept death. the parents know she is in denial and are helpless to reach her. the predictability of the plot allows us to understand the denial right away and it allows us to identify with katie. to feel what she is feeling or will soon feel.
flggd 4 years ago
Oh... I see. Then this video lacks originality, to be honest. This theme is way too overused and the use of children is kinda stereotyped in my opinion. I mean... I see similar videos all the time which communicate the exact same theme. No offence. There could have been better actors too, but this wasn't very bad. It's not that bad, really, but I've seen way better before ^^
Desu666 4 years ago
how did she die
jen2234 4 years ago
so wait.... what happened 2 the other little girl how did she die ????? i am sooooo confused !!!!!
jes753 4 years ago
it's not important how she died. we don't know how she died. it is important to understand katie the live girl is in denial. denial is what a person does when they are unable to accept death. we see the dead girl only in katie's dream and imagination. the parents know she is in denial but are unable to reach her.
flggd 4 years ago 2
that was so sad.
XtbsxloveX 4 years ago
yes I really think it is good - best of luck!
8nutzinabox 4 years ago 2
Incredibly touching, reminded me of similar personal experience. Well done Lisa, no doubt we will be seeing more of your work. What a gift you have!
coppermoth 4 years ago 3
very sad....
monsterbob25 4 years ago 2
it was a little confusing but i really liked it
phatchic2516676 4 years ago
Looked like they drove about 5 ft...
other than that, really good for a student and short film. 4 stars. =]
JTJproduction 4 years ago 2
Cute concept, but the acting wasn't great, and because of this, it wasn't believable, and thus, didn't connect emotionally. The audio was distracting and the levels seemed off between dialogue and background noise. I wouldn't go so far as to say it was bad, but due to the awkward acting and the predictable and poorly written script paired with the really nice photography and colour, I think it's completely mediocre. Nothing special. Oh well.
nabmab 4 years ago
Cute concept, but the acting wasn't great, and because of this, it wasn't believable, and thus, didn't connect emotionally. The audio was distracting and the levels seemed off between dialogue and background noise. I wouldn't go so far as to say it was bad, but due to the awkward acting and the predictable and poorly written script paired with the really nice photography and colour, I think it's completely mediocre. Nothing special. Oh well.
nabmab 4 years ago
wow... i feel sry for the kid she imaged her next to her the all time then baam i feel really sry for her sad.
wheniwas13 4 years ago
Original thoguhts - lame
But now I understand it I realise it's pretty darn good! Well done, love the beginning style credits.
satrap654 4 years ago
very good, a bit sad tho
zezima1075 4 years ago
that is absolutely amasing
everyone who says this is 'lame' is completely blinf
that was a masterpeice.
i hope one day i can direct like that
sophminx 4 years ago 3
babe girl grrr i hate wen people say that amercans are so lame
xtoiletxflushx 4 years ago
That was pretty good. a little predictable but i did like it.
boxosharpobjects1 4 years ago