Good idea. Loved the long rambling list of names and "telephone game" style shifting.
However, it would have been must more humorous if the lines had been delivered a tad faster and we can gotten to the point a minute earlier. As it stands, what started out as really funny became less so.
Also, the first Scripture mentioned while they played catch didn't fit very well into the overall piece. Keep the Scripture references really focused and they will carry more weight.
Good idea. Loved the long rambling list of names and "telephone game" style shifting.
However, it would have been must more humorous if the lines had been delivered a tad faster and we can gotten to the point a minute earlier. As it stands, what started out as really funny became less so.
Also, the first Scripture mentioned while they played catch didn't fit very well into the overall piece. Keep the Scripture references really focused and they will carry more weight.
Keep it up! ~Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
ITS AMY i LOVED the video..nice!!!
<3's
JCFanaticDoode 4 years ago