sum of ur notes can be extended for effect..ur singing sort have a disconnected feel from note to note...it can be a good thing and ppl do that occasional to acheive acoustic effects..but u did it thruout the song which is not good.. and if you could have add sum vibrato to ur singing it could sound more professional and u will be able to mix in more emotion..and this song is a bit low for girls to sing.. try raising 2 or 3 keys so u can sing in ur more powerful vocal range
The beginning, I'll say sounds better than the music video of the person. The more exasperated parts, you need more power. Like it overall thou, nice to see you singing again.
you never showed me stuff =\
LOV3loveLOV3 2 years ago
sum of ur notes can be extended for effect..ur singing sort have a disconnected feel from note to note...it can be a good thing and ppl do that occasional to acheive acoustic effects..but u did it thruout the song which is not good.. and if you could have add sum vibrato to ur singing it could sound more professional and u will be able to mix in more emotion..and this song is a bit low for girls to sing.. try raising 2 or 3 keys so u can sing in ur more powerful vocal range
onllm 2 years ago
thnx for the feedback~!
lilayu2 2 years ago
The beginning, I'll say sounds better than the music video of the person. The more exasperated parts, you need more power. Like it overall thou, nice to see you singing again.
jincongz 2 years ago