Spartans (Short episode) "pilot"

[humerro]

HURRYYY!!!!! dont waste your time and get a life before its to late you fucking nerd

[The3AmigoProductions]

they make a caputre card for 50 bucks

i got mine at best buy

its called Dazzzle

[Constar93]

this is kinda stupid but its a pilot episode

[iTocheniuk]

wow. so boring.

[igooog]

U might need a Video Capture card... not the cheapest things, but they work really good.

[xXxShadowAxelxXx]

It may waste your time but shit like you is a waste of space.

[MarksmanODST]

True this. Your mother made a mistake about you.

[Pshnookems]

its like he's a hypochondriac and he thinks he will die any second so he's worried about wasting 8 minutes

by the way i liked this

[rocket278]

cool vid

[bobman1011]

a minuste and 17 seconds of credits... in the begining

[gopats2011]

i do understand that it may be because your using a camera but dont worry ive been making a machinima to put on youtube and all i have to use is a vid camera so i understand your not the only one

[gopats2011]

is the reason u have there heads moving when there not talking because u recorded the video and then did the vioce over or something and u changed the lines. Also not very good camera work

[Loosebrickwork]

Oh,the other 3 episodes dude are great compared to this one,i actually lost faith in the series till episode 3.

[mangajock]

....not to be rude or anything but....it wasn't very good...you had their heads moveing whaen they werent even talking..work on that

[44Yuri444444444]

we has 3 more episodes that are improved

[mangajock]

k i was just saying you might want to fix this one...

[ScopeStudios]

why did you tape it with a video camera?

[44Yuri444444444]

Yeah,we have one.But it doesn't capture halo 3,so we use a camera insted.

[Gman40k]

dude pretty good vid ;) just 1 tip ok try to use camera veiws instead of following guys adds dramatic effect and helps spruce it up

[rockingspartan555]

Spartarn, why the fuck are you call him an idiot you cant even spell spartan for god sakes which means you clearly dont play halo so you just stumbled upon this because (like he said) you have no life and have nothing better to do so shut the fuck up before you open your god damn mouth you little prick

[Loosebrickwork]

That is kinda slack guy whom posted just below me,And kinda hypocrytical We havent seen your vids so How would we belive you.And great job on the vid for a starter machinma.Keep on working hard and yes,Maybe write a script.

[Maddisser101]

this needs sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oo much work first of all delete this vid from youtube, second wait for 3 months and save up all your money to buy a capture card, third dont eat while your trying to make this, fourth gat a much better map chioce and a much better script thats not laggy ill help you im a filming epert ive helped peeps with vids i just dont have any cuz i dont have any money for a capture card

[Spartarn]

Right, and I'm Han Solo

[44Yuri444444444]

wtf who are you?

[Maddisser101]

just to tell you i didnt mean that to be a harmful comment if your wondering i was being sarcastic you tried and im what my screename says i am

[Maddisser101]

wat the hell??

[Spartarn]

-_-

Good god, I have to break it up for idiots like you.

He said: ill help you im a filming epert ive helped peeps with vids i just dont have any cuz i dont have any money for a capture card

And I didn't believe him so I said something that isn't true and the Star Wars music threw Han Solo into my head.

[Maddisser101]

im an idiot! its aim language for normal people unlike you you prolly stay on youtube and do nothing else all day cuz you have no life i dont really think saying "ya and im han solo" makes you not an idiot especially when i was offering to help him wit his film and you really have no contact with the outside world because capture cards do cost money and i help my friends with thier vids cuz i have friends (unlike you)

[Shelby8Mustang]

great job, it would be better if you had different voices in there, its a good video tho!

[44Yuri444444444]

thanks its good to see some positive comments

[jellybelyboy]

you should have made more cut scenes check out my machinimas. they suck but im new to them.

[xSpartan109x]

the title goes for 40 seconds,,

[44Yuri444444444]

i know that but uh can you tell us how to maek it better because we are low on producers and its really hard to get out capture card running so we need you to tell us how to maek it better, i know that the title went for too long

but in the next episode it only goes for 18 sseconds and it has a song written by meh called across the desert so just tell us apart from video quality what can make this better

[xSpartan109x]

ok ok..

take starwars music out make the starting music go for about 10 secs or something.. even though u said u shake and thats why u move ur head up and dpwn when ur not talking viewers won't know that so don't so it.. don't have parts where there is a silence where no one is talking for some reason.. and thats about it..

[halochamp159]

CAN YOU DOWNLOAD THIS VIDEO

[Arvron]

Can only get better from here on out, few things need abit of touching up but overall GJ.

[44Yuri444444444]

and if your wondering why Blueberries came with him on the mission its because we deleted a scene which fit in theto the plot line it will appear on youtube later