This is what's wrong with America today. All we have is unsubstantiated hope and the expectations of something free. Poetry, song, and dance will never change our country. What we should be looking for is strong leadership and values with emphasis on restoring our family structure.
Really? The poem doesn't suggest song and dance will change our country, rather, because a change is already underway, the poem encourages us as a nation to supply our country with support by all creative means, by all physical means. The poem suggests that for anything to actually be heard/understood it first must internalized an accepted. I agree, America's success will come in strong leadership and values with emphasis on restoring the family structure. This poem is applauding exactly that!
lol, you are SO awesome! I JUST uploaded this! But you should enter something on the refresheverything channel Too! (I didn't know it was a contest until now) But submit something! it'll be SO cool!
I HEAR HIM TOO!!
grego828 3 years ago
That was amazing! you have such a special way with words!!!!
KiddStar69 3 years ago
Your very intellegent and have pretty teeth. That's HOT!
SexyBlackTopForU 3 years ago
This is hot man!
TopFlight8257 3 years ago
Amen i say to you Amen
aajunior 3 years ago
i loved that poem! its soo cute! haha! i love poems! great job!
HeyArianaHey 3 years ago
Awesome job..love the poem and your editing skill are to applauded too.
--London ;)
SpiritedAquarius 3 years ago
You always make me smile deeply, sigh restoratively, cry faithfully or just give me the chills. Bless ya my sweet & creative friend.
Hugz! C a l v i n
Ciao bello
sfcalvinaz 3 years ago
well Hallelujah! Bless you too!
williamkroberts 3 years ago
Excellent dude!!! Between you & Chanel (Mutha), I love this day more than ever now!!! Thanks for helping keep the dream out there dude!!!
thruthealcove 3 years ago
WOW! This was simply fantastic! And you recited this with style and grace! GREAT job!
jlucky419 3 years ago
youre fantastic i love this
akeemonale 3 years ago
This is what's wrong with America today. All we have is unsubstantiated hope and the expectations of something free. Poetry, song, and dance will never change our country. What we should be looking for is strong leadership and values with emphasis on restoring our family structure.
messenger4truth 3 years ago
Really? The poem doesn't suggest song and dance will change our country, rather, because a change is already underway, the poem encourages us as a nation to supply our country with support by all creative means, by all physical means. The poem suggests that for anything to actually be heard/understood it first must internalized an accepted. I agree, America's success will come in strong leadership and values with emphasis on restoring the family structure. This poem is applauding exactly that!
williamkroberts 3 years ago
I guess we just applaud in differant ways.
messenger4truth 3 years ago
...just like we live different lives. Yes! I think you got it. As long as we applaud.
williamkroberts 3 years ago
This was very good. Wow.
Loved it
bullabelly 3 years ago
This was absolutely beautiful. You already know how I feel about you. This was quite the moving piece.
FAVORITED.
tssexychanel 3 years ago
this is beautiful bruh! wish i had it on a tee shirt to wear on Tuesday....
nonpareil313 3 years ago
You betta speak them words as the day of overcometh nears!!
H8RbyN8URE 3 years ago
dopeness.
hight0wertv 3 years ago
YESSS..come on spoken word! I got chills watching this one.
anotharemix 3 years ago
lol, you are SO awesome! I JUST uploaded this! But you should enter something on the refresheverything channel Too! (I didn't know it was a contest until now) But submit something! it'll be SO cool!
williamkroberts 3 years ago
I'll start working on that now.
anotharemix 3 years ago