@shastra1986 jab aap apna pata bataate hain, to kya bataatey hain? Ghar ka number ya saath mei ye bhi bataatye hain ki aao ghar ke kis kamrey mein rehte hain? Ya ye bhi bataatey hain ki aap ghar ke kaun se prani hain, pati, bhai, pita, putra, putri, chachi? ghar ko ghar batana hi kafi nahin hai kya? Is se ghar ke kis kamrey ki izzat nahin hoti?
नमस्ते त्ज्स्कुल्ल जी| हिंदी अपनी मात्रभाषा है परन्तु भारत में और भी भाषाएँ है और उसकी इज्जत करनी चाहिए| और इसलिए मेरा मानना है की भारतीय लोगों को हिंदी के अलावा और भी भाषाएँ बोलनी आना चाहिए|
waah waah Archana ji, sahi baat kahi hai. 10/10. parantu Archana ji Bhaaratiya logon sirf Hindi hii nahin aana chahiye, kyunki Bhaarat mein aur bhi bhaashayein hain, sabhi Bhaaratiya ko Bhaarat ka kamsekam do teen bhaashayein aana chahiye. Jai Bhaarat, Jai shakti
bahut badiya! wish i could write such beautiful hindi...
dhwani182 4 months ago
archana ji aap kis school main aap sekhathe hoon
krishronale 7 months ago
hi....hello
Naveenug 8 months ago
umda geetka hai
kamleshkumardiwan 1 year ago
maan gaye
MrDhamaal 1 year ago
archana ji kya bat hai kavita ko ek naya jivan dan hai
sachan1971 1 year ago
bahut khoob !
rohitkhuranadce 2 years ago
namaste tjskull ji, hindi humaari maatrabhaasha hai parantu Bhaarat mein aur bhi bhaashayein hai aur humein uski ijjat karni chahiye. Jai Bhaarat.
shastra1986 3 years ago
@shastra1986 jab aap apna pata bataate hain, to kya bataatey hain? Ghar ka number ya saath mei ye bhi bataatye hain ki aao ghar ke kis kamrey mein rehte hain? Ya ye bhi bataatey hain ki aap ghar ke kaun se prani hain, pati, bhai, pita, putra, putri, chachi? ghar ko ghar batana hi kafi nahin hai kya? Is se ghar ke kis kamrey ki izzat nahin hoti?
aparaajita10 3 months ago
@aparaajita10 yaar aap bolna kya chahte ho? specifically bolo. ye ghar whar kya hai?
jinimol1997 3 months ago
नमस्ते त्ज्स्कुल्ल जी| हिंदी अपनी मात्रभाषा है परन्तु भारत में और भी भाषाएँ है और उसकी इज्जत करनी चाहिए| और इसलिए मेरा मानना है की भारतीय लोगों को हिंदी के अलावा और भी भाषाएँ बोलनी आना चाहिए|
shastra1986 3 years ago
Hi,
Are u the same Arachana as the one on DesiBoyzMasala ?? If yes, I need one of your ghazals.
DrDhakna 3 years ago
waah waah Archana ji, sahi baat kahi hai. 10/10. parantu Archana ji Bhaaratiya logon sirf Hindi hii nahin aana chahiye, kyunki Bhaarat mein aur bhi bhaashayein hain, sabhi Bhaaratiya ko Bhaarat ka kamsekam do teen bhaashayein aana chahiye. Jai Bhaarat, Jai shakti
shastra1986 3 years ago
Hindi Is Our National Language :)
So Its A Must
TJSKULL52 3 years ago
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Very nice..
I suggest you upload the same in 'Dynamycdesi'.It is a online talent contest site for people.
sdhanyam 3 years ago
A beautiful lady......, But her poem is more beautiful,
Maan he apna hi legi- heart touching lines.., Good thought.
mayanku499 3 years ago
Archana ji aap bahut achi kavita bolti hain. aapki dono hi kavitaon ne sochne par majboor kiya, acha laga, maja aaya!
pranavmungre 3 years ago 4
Dil khush hogeya aapeki Kavita sun ke, aise he nazuk vishayoo (topics) pe kikhete rehe aur wah wahi paate reh!!!
Excellently written! Keep up the good work.
Vikas2203 4 years ago
Great Poem with a important lesson for kids and parents. "Bindi Hindi" that was a catchy phrase. Keep up the good work. bye vivek
viv765 4 years ago