My own song

[guitarsix6]

Nice original song. Steve

[kulairock]

Typical.

[sweetemilysinger]

realy good

[ItStartsWithMusic]

You did a great job :)

[Noobfedy]

Good work=)

[kaelynn3113]

my fav part was at 3:32 best best best part watch it and u'll see

[Rockchick1902]

@kaelynn3113 your a bit'ch that can get lost, she's an amzing singer and you're probably no match for her. So shut up and get a life instead of critizing others.

[Caboose87cbs]

I really liked your song.

What are the chords?

[justinbieberissafe]

what is it called make another song

[mhilliar1]

great song you deserve more attention that that rebecca black chick i would much rather listen to you.

[hahayesflowers]

You are extremely talented x

[booboo2sexi]

someone elses lyrics just in a diffrent order sry like but noooooooo ya fail

[IZZYcoble]

good guitar playing

[budgies121]

cool

[MyShadowIsGone]

Awesomeness :D

5 Stars! And You Deserve A Subscribe(:

[shatterglassprincess]

Really nice song! I love the guitar part especially

[mGProductions989]

really good

move over miley/hannah

she is so stupid miley weatever her name is

no offense to the people who like her

[geassguy9]

i cant believe their putting stupid,slutty,blondes on stage to sing instead of you

[guitar999able]

One of the best songs Ive heard for a long time x I love your Tom Waits cover too x

[sexibi89]

very beautiful!you and the song!go girl

[xoTearsinheavenox]

amazingg lyricsss and you got a good voice too

[wegowill]

you are very good , keep on singing.

[smjcheer1203]

That's awsome!

[JoeBez23]

what chicken123yes said is what i said on my other account that i was accidently on... i said that. you truly did an amazing job with the lyrics and you have a beautiful voice.... you look so calm too!

[chicken123yes]

wow... i write a lot of lyrics and i am actually pretty good at coming up with stuff. and i know how tough it is. you really did a nice job. the lyrics really touched me and you sang it beautifully. the guitar part is nice and sweet too

[realmclennyd]

you have a beautiful voice and you sing liike an angel . I think your video is wonderful and I thank you for singing it , your song is a beautiful song and youe beautiful voice and your wonderful guitar playing style complement the beautiful song beautifully .

[xxxMSFPRODUCTIONSxxx]

WoW. your great. excellent song and lyrics. Great voice. You should try to make a career out of this. Keep it up.

[metalxguitar]

ur good ur guitar is lioke mine which is blue and acoustic unlike my other one whick is red and electric and a huge x shape LOL

[DeathDealerXIII]

Your voice is beautiful, I wanted to let you know. But be careful about vibratos, but other that that, if you add more love and passion, fire and strength into your voice, you could go far. ^_^

[PopcornGal222]

WOW!!! im a singer my self and well WOW!

[williewill420]

Oh wow thanks! Im gonna use this song and claim it as my own! Nah im just kidding you, but you should be careful about posting original songs on youtube if you are serious about persuing a singing/song writing career. Oh btw,,,,good song tho

[TheExpert125]

Keep writing songs!

[sivas030]

mader fuckerssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[MARLEYFIVOS]

This is A huge soNg. Ty 4 posting. Oh and one advice it would be better if u cut it when u say eternity with ur sweet voice ty .

Also cute ; )

[Katsmeow7]

All i have to say is WOW!!!! Keep righting songs.

[kissme4love]

U better on you gaiter playing I mean I saw all you song.. u don't look down anymore....hahaha... OH!!btw your song was really good ....thu... peace..yo

[kmnitz]

@ IchigoUchiha7

YOU SUCK

She is great.

Ya got a few stones m8? well. share 'um. Otherwise piss off and get bent.

Ling

[maacasey]

it's very good! I like the guitar and the song and the voice, all 5 star

[kashabr]

good lord..... this song is very beautiful... i love it..

have some mp3 for us??

kisses

[Mmmm01think]

I want this in my mind forever because it is a beautiful song with wonderful lyrics sang by a lovely woman

[Crashps10]

you are amazing!!!!

[god988]

i like her a lot

[dcgymnast]

cute! i liked it

[cesco44]

your doing an awesome job keep it up

[jayceeproductions]

wow, i cant believe some of these comments. I think this is a very beautiful song and i would deffanitly listen to thiss (: very good job!!!!

[IchigoUchiha7]

boring!!!boooo

[50calcanuck]

Mona Lisa with a guitar Beautiful

[taylo12345678910]

im sorry but i really dont like it

[GrabeelGirl4Lyfe]

BEAUTIFUL! I agree with whoever said you should audition for American Idol! By the way, what's this song called? I want to download it and put it on my iPod because it's soooo beautiful!

[xloverxsinnerx]

OMGG..this is amazing!!You have a wonderufl voice.

[awesomecoolsweet]

that was awesome! You are a great singer, and the lyrics are really good!

[xxMonsterGuitarxx]

wow!!!! go audition for american idol!!

[aisyah1995]

speechless............BRAVO!!

[MusicxNeverxDies]

wow.

i loved it.

your very talented.

=]

[50calcanuck]

One month since a comment?You are a angel.Love the words and you buitiful beyond words.

God bless you and your child.

clarence Its a wonderful world.

[sweetYessiMaus]

wow you´ve a great voice! ;)

[KellyandTyannashow]

i listen to this everyday.

i love it.

im a true fan.

good luck with yer pregnacy!

[Lemonngrasss]

What are the chords? plz send them

BTW I LOVED IT

[VanyJ9615]

wow, it's really good, i like it =)

[Simonmcaboy]

it was ok. I was bored listening to this. there is no wow or ah. it just was.

[flameskull1995]

wow, your voice is really good... you should get a record label.

[aloue0gaara]

sorry for my bad english :S

can you send me the chord, please? (on guitar)

LOVED IT!

[nickmilk123]

u r so awesome!!!! i hope my voice was on

a bit like urs so i culd sing my song tooo !!

plz put the tabs so i will be able to play ur song plz plz plz

[JonasSistas4eva]

that's so beautiful.....you can be a singer =)

[nameneame]

Love it.

[NiknJaps]

nice song

[johnsenpai]

this girl is awesome !! s2 from venezuela

[monkeyming60]

what the ? that was strange i didnt get it?

[maplegirl32]

SO NICE!!

YOU CAN BE A SINGER!

[VeniBeatz]

i like it alott! :) guitar melodies rule, n the singin..wow! love itt :) "u make me wanna be better" :D

[snoboardingchick]

Kool, i wish i can write and sing that good.

like sersioly. it was awesome...

btw: i loved it!

[Pgaolls]

Very good ! U sing beatifull..

[1overdrive1]

Please, everyone!!! Go on my youtubepage and listen to my own 2 songs!!! Subscribe to me if you like them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You cant loose nothing!!!!!!!

[KateLavy]

LOVE THIS SONG!!!! Great Voice!!!

[musicschokofreak]

wow....

incredible :D

i`m not able to write songs like that :(

nice greets fronm austria

[mizzpipa]

BEAUTIFUL! Great Job!

[cseasprks]

Damn, Im in love!!!

[MagnusRulerHardt]

One last breath

[pandosky55]

juju i think you have a lot of fans rigth now.. dont take it like a hobby , think big..

[monty0169]

i`m spanish,,,,but,,, you`re beatifull girl

[cocacolalighsugar]

your really good! ;D

[SniperSaft]

New superstar on youtube.

[KatNipNess]

I love your lyrics!! Do you have any tips on writing songs? 5/5

[GH3andFC]

WOW!

Great song, nicely sung and played ;] 5/5

[castleinthecloudsxx]

Wow Great song nd great playing !!

loved it x

[shooterofboring]

good singing,fine playing, nice face ,big earrings !!!

[greentomato555]

wow, this is really good. im trying out some of my own songs- but i cant get em right- u have any advice?

[boastudios]

cool lol but 5 stars even though i listen to screamo and slipknot and stuff and yea me and my mates got a band =) ur good

[rtrockz]

wow, you're amzing

[blitzvicious]

Keep up the good work. You've got real talent.

[userc33]

i love your lyrics! Your lucking being able to sing and play an instrument. Your vocal chords are really good too! Keep it up :) x

[cckpstrecz]

I LIKE IT!!! wat is the title of the song????? it is soo nice!!!!! ur voice is cool too!!!!

[GuitaristWanaB]

u've got a beautiful voice and da song waz lovely!stick wif it!

[xxlent]

very good keep on singing

[ledzeppelingirl10]

omg u r awesome every one get some one 2 watch to get it popular and if it gets SOOOO popular they could interview u on like cnn or watevs and mayb a real music person would see u and consider u cause i totaly would so every one get someone to watch this and get that someone to get a someone else to watch it so it gets a bunch of views!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[darkdreamer63]

I think I'm in love!^^ lol

Check my videos and post some comments please!!

[MarleenAmica]

Very good :)

[asiunia0911]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

[TinaR96]

this isn't mia rose !!

[alynsasha]

go miA ROSE!!

[imgunnabeastar]

nevermind!!! its perfect

[imgunnabeastar]

wow. this is such a beautiful song. my advice to you is to just cut the guitar solo in the front a little short

[thisgirl44]

this would be great if you could make it in MP3!!;)

[TanyaAza]

THis is a great song. Very simple and crisp and beautiful. thanks for sharing!

[shoppingluver77]

i wish my crush sent this to me and meant it!

[marythefairyx]

orrr this is well good :)

can i buy it please!

[vickish666]

i love it

[Honeysweet94]

omG thats to gooood!!! I would buy that song, if it would be for sale! =))

[redhotchilidogs]

good song, good voice, good looks (:

only thing i have to say is watch your pitch changes, they are coming off a bit voice crackish

[MyGuy96]

♥wow!you sing amazing u shiould keep on writing songs♥

[Safounox]

Fantastic,you should give a name for this song. im was just O.O about your song

[thedogs5526]

Wow that was realy good. Love the song. Keep it up!

[TerryCole1986]

nice song love ur voice keep it up best of luck to ya xxx

[Webersnack]

Nice song :)

I've allways wanted to make my own song, but the lyrics never come's as i want them :P:P

[trocket1721]

sweet song i like it

[bedfunkv]

awsome song i love it (:

[1straycat99]

awsome and writing great on doing you sounf like a klittle avril at time awsome vocie and liitle county to at the highs awsome song i love it and building the dynamics and bringint back great on it awsome i love it 5 allways.and like you vocie just being you sounds great

[guitarlegend1221]

all i can say is beautiful

[trooeen]

oh my god! you are fantastic. that's all i can say

[nancy9009]

famous right here .. baaby your going to go far .

[icanttellmyname]

Wow! Great song!!

[LittleKid100]

BEAST 5/5 STARS!

[mknmv]

YOU ARE TALENTED

[crusade4love]

i love the lyrics !! <3

and your guitar playing and your voice too of course XD

[THxBiLLx]

You are a star!

I love you, You're voice,You're song!Everyting !

ByeeByee!

[pkf0rever]

ahhhh nice song nice voise to;) like it ur going to be a star

[wii0101]

ur good

[karanbball]

nice voice girrrllll............ u're good.....

[greenday8992]

what are u doin in da house???... go to sum recording house.....u'll be a big star one day...i assure u dat.....ur voice has cuteness and sweetness.....i am a fan of urs noww

[Gr1mGaMeRs]

ur really good

[ishehaxor]

its good.

[doglovingirl]

OMG i love this song!!!!! when ur famous, remember the fans who liked u b4 u were a big star :-)

[dotm477]

wow this is a REALLY good song^^ it's a really good songs and if anybody tells u to change the lyrics tell them they're perfect the way they are^^

[tope95]

I have always be a gangster rapper but this is good

[1cheeseftw1]

Your Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[rasus94]

beuteful

[whoever137]

somebody get this girl a record deal!!

[foreveronX3]

good job!

[pati2552]

great!

[pati2552]

are

[pati2552]

You

[pati2552]

im the crazy girl up there that posted a vidie response and im writing a comment now.. ur great goshh wen ur famous remember me plzzz. mi name is patricia<33 :]

[NxNStonesNxN]

its your own song?

[GuitarRockNRoll]

great song get a mike and record it

[Kanada12345]

If You will be a singer i want your cd plz!you sing better then esmee denters.esmee denters sucksss!you are very very great!

[zjwake]

That's not true... esmee is great

But this girl's got potential 2

x

[21sd1986]

excellent song and you are very hot too :) xx

[maxruddock008]

amazing

[JosieSchokokeks]

i LOVE your voice!

[niiezbe]

zum weinen schön

[nimppu32]

you are awesome !

[avalandon]

That is really beautiful! You are a natural =)

[LordInksworth]

:o)

[gerincew]

wtggg

[Aquaswimmer103]

WOW that was really GOOD nice job!!

[lovelysxo]

that song is amazing and carolbdr88 is right this song should be published

X

[skater42590]

pretty good love the arangement

alittle pitchy

but good rock it out!!

[gcharocks]

you sound like Randy DAWG!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!1

[carolbdr88]

publish this song!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Rizewasere]

THATS THE SAME GUITAR AS ME WHOO!! LOL nice song its cool

[cretellaal]

i like this song!

[TooStupidForMyWorld]

i like your mirror <3

[Rayray17325215886]

good song and good voice

[dejffjed]

Im sorry but... the melody is a little poor.

[irishirish999irish]

i think its real good, love the guitar and ur voice in beautiful. wud be awesome if u could check out my vid of a song i wrote, get some feedback from u wud be awesome.

xx

[djmileymix]

OMG She Is So Good! That Song Sounds Profesinoal

[issagirl2]

Wow when I first heard your voice I went "Thats beautiful." Great job! :]

[zoedee1109]

I like this song :)

and ur voice is lovely my darling :D

U have inspired me to write my own song :)

but yer ur realli awsome :)

[shamusic04]

you did a really good job..a breathe of fresh air..if you really love and dream about music everyday, dont ever step down.

[jeffhardy4life1994]

wow very nice..oh yeah ur singins good too..lol its actuall good

[hoeslayer666]

uhh hmm.....

[phicryy]

Hey i have a perfect music video on my channel . You should watch it . if you want to watch just click my name it takes only 2 minutes...

[jcusters1983]

your voice!!!! I'm glad that I've heard you today... I love your voice!

[MileyJonasBrothers90]

Wow thats a good song