A Jemi One-Shot ; Invisible

[GuiTarGirL2278]

Okay, I totally didn't expect them to have sex but this was SOOOO CUTE!!! OMG!!! I loved it!!!!!

[nessjba]

this one-shot = amazing !! :)

it sure isn't the ''worst creation ever'' !

[marandasunflower]

OMJONAS! u think THIS is bad?????!!!!! I guess i SHOULD hit u with a bat!! lol, jk! i read this n felt like a kid! i was soo happy n i felt like i was watching a movie!

IT

IS

BEAUTIFUL!!!

=...)

(sob sob) :)

[NileyStayx3]

Awww, this is so cute. I looooved it<3

[missjonasbro12345678]

aww cute adorable I Love it!!! <3

[blahpolka3]

<3 (: beyond adorable.

sooooo cute. you're an amazing writer!

[LaLaLa95S]

omg soo amazing

i nearly cryed

AWESOME

[ZanessaPleaure]

Awwwwwww;D

[updaduff09]

awww that was amazing you are a brilliant writer !

[MissCharlotteX13]

hit you with a bat?

you got to be kidding, this was amazing, i'm going to subscribe to you:)

i absolutely loved it, i was so into it hehe, you dont givee yourself enough credit:) ♥♥♥

[Thelynrose]

-hits you with a bat- lol jk This is amazing! How can you think that this is NOT?! Awesome! :) ♥

[AlyG13x]

@Thelynrose

You scared me for a second. I thought you actually wanted to hit me with a bat. xP

[Thelynrose]

@AlyG13x >.> Maybe I did..lol but I WOULD NEVER HIT ANYONE WITH A BAT! ...VIRTUALLY! lol :)

[kierababy13]

AWWWWWWW!!!!x

[gabrielletaylor97]

awww....they gave each other their virginities.....WAIT! they were virgins before demi made love to him right?

[AlyG13x]

@gabrielletaylor97

I was thinking that when I was writing this but didn't bother to write it but I'm gonna have to say yes. I think it's cuter that way anyway. (:

[sissypooh10]

awwwwwwwwwwwww. :))

[LittleSandwich89]

It was so amazing !!! Love it

[speakgirl1216]

Cute! :)

[BritBrat10001]

This was amazing(:

Good job!

[TheJemiHeart]

Amazing

[cookycritic]

that was awesome. i love how it kinda switched roles :) DEMI kissed him. DEMI made love to HIM. DEMI wanted to just hold him. awesome :)

[iiHeartJemii]

Auh-Mazing!!

[nbbmaniac213]

now listen, that was AWSOME so stop putting yourself down 'kay?

[BieberHatersJustin]

this was like so amazing.

[Mafalda963]

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!

[momo5376]

aww..i just found this one shot and i have to say that you made me cry..it was beautiful!

[xJemiStoriesxx]

I cried. .Oh my god. I need to shape up, like now. Tissues, please! Haha, I loved it! JEMI FOREVVVEEEEEEEER!!

[Asiancutie270]

That was really cute :) YAY for happy endings!

[ashlynelizx3]

soo amazing oh my godd. it was so great. thats how i feel so i can totally relate.

[94jOnasBrOthersLOver]

I LOVED IT !!

♥

[zanessajashleylover]

loved it

sooooo amazing

you should definetly do more of those

[Gvike2011]

I WATCH YOUR VIDS!! :D:D:D

This WAS A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!

:O I love ur writing! :D

I hope you do more oneshots!

[jubisinha]

I WATCH YOUR VIDEOS ((: haha , just responding to your description :D

annd

I LOVED THAT ONE, OMG . you're so creative :o

you should make more of those, cause I loved it ! *--*

[OreoRosabell]

AMAZING THIS IS BEYOND WORDS INCREDABLE

i love it soo much

[xxBroganLouisaxx]

awwhh cute!

[hsmminiseries]

LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED ITTTT.

Like insane loved it.