Honest crituque. You have Zombies in the title scene but no Zombies or even Zombie foreshadowing in 6 minutes worth of story. If I know you I'm gonna watch cause I know you. If I'm on YOUTUBE looking for stuff and you show me six minutes of male bonding and no Zombies I'm gonna move on someplace else. Decent camera work some extra headspace in some shots. Some shots could be tighter. Some sound issues. But you got out there and shot so I'm on your side that in itself is hard. Next episode.
Hey, I appreciate an honest review. Its actually really cool that you watched all of these. I am going to try to defend myself, but I see where you are coming from on all your points. You are right about not enough zombies in the beginning. I agree most people tune out before the end. This was written as a 3 act short film, so the pacing is not good for the internet. I didn't want to break it up as a movie so I just called them episodes. You are right about too much headroom, especially at 0:42
James its looking great so far and the acting doesnt sound as fake as it did when we were filming which is good..Too much of a tease for episode 1 post 2 now please thank you!
I didn't watch the whole thing, but I find the tags funny. WIN. "Homeless people. OMG I HATE THEM."
StraightEdgeDP 2 years ago
ha, thanks.
thefunzone101 2 years ago
yes
vandalsmx 2 years ago
Honest crituque. You have Zombies in the title scene but no Zombies or even Zombie foreshadowing in 6 minutes worth of story. If I know you I'm gonna watch cause I know you. If I'm on YOUTUBE looking for stuff and you show me six minutes of male bonding and no Zombies I'm gonna move on someplace else. Decent camera work some extra headspace in some shots. Some shots could be tighter. Some sound issues. But you got out there and shot so I'm on your side that in itself is hard. Next episode.
DonaldC203 2 years ago 2
Hey, I appreciate an honest review. Its actually really cool that you watched all of these. I am going to try to defend myself, but I see where you are coming from on all your points. You are right about not enough zombies in the beginning. I agree most people tune out before the end. This was written as a 3 act short film, so the pacing is not good for the internet. I didn't want to break it up as a movie so I just called them episodes. You are right about too much headroom, especially at 0:42
vandalsmx 2 years ago
You had me at the dogs barking, haha. Nice work :)
stolenwingsi 2 years ago
Ha, thanks. That is my favorite part.
vandalsmx 2 years ago
Oh hello Jessica. I didnt know that was you at first. You did a wonderful job. Thanks again. Sorry about the lousy overdub I had to do.
vandalsmx 2 years ago
I had a great time watching this video.
mosdefjeff 2 years ago 2
Hey thanks. Feel free to comment on as many videos as you would like.
vandalsmx 2 years ago
Nice! looking forward for the next one :)
roost31 2 years ago 2
Hey thanks. I plan on uploading new ones every few days.
vandalsmx 2 years ago
sweet :)
roost31 2 years ago
always love to see four dudes just go to have a great time in the wood. hopefully you can slip some Jack Honson in there some hime.
inspiring me to get a start on our zombo film
Falumpaset 2 years ago
James its looking great so far and the acting doesnt sound as fake as it did when we were filming which is good..Too much of a tease for episode 1 post 2 now please thank you!
**Big Dirty**
bigdirty8 2 years ago
nice clip
krazejim1 2 years ago
this is awesome
writeonyourhand 2 years ago
so are you
vandalsmx 2 years ago
So far so good. Nice work. You had some cool shots, and a good flow going. ADR was fantastic! When is part 2 out ?
mrbungs 2 years ago
In a cup days
vandalsmx 2 years ago
EEEK!
ratuse 2 years ago