Not Your Enemy {Nick Jonas Love Story} Chapter 13 "The Moment Passed" Des. Box

[lilsweety110]

omg swoon

[MissLaughtAlot007]

the moment passed?!?!?!

LMAO

i think nick will ask her to be his gf =D

i hope, they sound cute 2gether... =]

[novideos102]

this is all so cute!

[NickJonas431]

i bet he's gonna ask her to be his girlfriend

[koolchickcansing26]

omj its funny the guy i like smells like abercrombie or maybe its hollistier its one of the 2 but its funny u said that nick smelled like abercrombie

[NickJonasFansite101]

When did Nick get all "hey beautiful, and baby?" lol

[JBloverforever94]

nick is wearing a life jacket olol

[joejonasluvsmealways]

LTS

[amjp127]

why are all the stories all mixed up! i already read this one a while ago its before they went to paris or whatever. i'm so confused.

[princezzunique]

LOOL so are you going to tell me?

no. the moments passed.

LMAO

[NICKJIZHOTT12]

aww!! i love how your stories are so.. i dont know sweet? their really cute!

[tennisangel95]

what happened to chapter 12??

[hsm2fan08]

I don't what happened but it wouldn't work. But now it worked. So you can go watch it! :)

[ZSrox]

oh my god...i forgot to read this one...& theres another one after this one...ah!!!

thats whi i was so confused when i started reading the newest one first :D...lol

i love this story!!!

keep it up!!

[ilybubbles101]

pleas post? i dont want to be pushy or anything but ur stories are so good :D

[JBLover2008]

add more!!add more!!=)

[amberlynne123456789]

its so sweet how nick is so nice and understanding i would have completely freaked on you lol not to be mean im just not that patient

[JonasBrothersLover73]

How many more comments do you need? I'm dying to find out what happens next! Seriously!!! :D

[hsm2fan08]

I'm writting it right now! LOL!:)

It'll be up in about 20-30 minutes! Okay?

[JonasBrothersLover73]

Thanks!!! Sorry, I don't mean to be annoying, it's just that your story is amazing! :D

[hsm2fan08]

It's okay. But for some reason, I won't let me open WMM. I'm done writing but I'm trying to get it to open. UGH! I hate when this happens! It might take longer for me to post. I have to fix it first. :(

[LittleMizzGawjuz]

awesome, loved it like usual :)

please make them longer!

[gigi78965]

OH MAN I DIDNT COMMENT! you gotta make it so we get at least TWO comments that count PWESE??? PLEASSSSE?

[jules104xoxo]

ok i loveee ur stories btw!!

[loveyajonas]

love it post mored

[amjp127]

I LOVED this one!!! its my fav!!! hurry up with the next one!!!

[jules104xoxo]

more plzz anyways dont u think 25 comment + ratings are alot??? BUT LOVE UR STORIESSS

[hsm2fan08]

Well, with 558 subscribers, I don't think it's alot. I'm not concerned about the ratings as much as the comments so when I get 25 comments (one comment per person), and like about 20 ratings, I'll post the next chapter. :) OK?

[xilyjonasbrosx]

but way hotter.

[xilyjonasbrosx]

and p.s

Nick is very cute.

[xilyjonasbrosx]

OMG This series is amazing.

where do you get your writing skills?

i love this series.

can you help me make mine like yours?

[JonasBrothersLover73]

More please! You've got me addicted, and I really need the stories to be longer and more frequent! I'm like dying to know more! What is he gonna ask her?!?!?! I NEED to know! lol :)

[lalakicksass]

awesome post new one soon.

[jblovestorymikkihope]

wow i loved it!!

[hsm2fan08]

Thanks! I really appreciate it! :)

[mariavittoria613]

omggg this si too goooooood. u better put like way mroe chapters cause i cant stop reading these!! lol there awesomeeee!

[Dancer521oxox]

wat she said

[itshjustmee]

:D:D:D OMJ yeaa chapterss should be longerr andd moree frequentt :D:D:D PL3AS3!!!

[[ J A D 3 3 Ox. ]]

[morg942212]

dude i so need to know what he wants to ask her!!! lol. cant wait for next one!!!

[xxlovexxmexxalwaysxx]

OHEMEFFGEE.

hurry woman!

write the next one!

oh my god write it!

[biancaretro]

this freaking series rocks

make more soon ilike how nick calls her beautiful instead of sexyy or something

good job keep writing:)

[tennisprincesstash2]

love it :)

can you make the next one longer please ??

i'm addicted :p

[LiveLaughLove181]

EPPPP. loves it!!!!

[acapellagirl24]

great story! i wish it was longer!

[jordantp1996]

that was asome!!

[gigi78965]

OK YALL WE NEED 25 COMMENTS!

[vanessafangirl]

OMG LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!

[irishdancer25]

post more pleeeeaaassseeeee!! now

[fungirl4343]

loved it!!

[emilyluvsjobros2]

oh.my.god. amazinggg!!!!!!

this is rly good:)

[nickJlover43va]

ahhhhhhh next pleaseeeeeee