I want more spacey/atmospheric audio, I felt you could of done that to that to the music, (if so turn the treble down, nothing with a high pitch), or work in voice that's muffled/distant and hard to hear. Basically push that kind of stuff more.
Not sure if it was intentional, but I found it to be a little too face pace, and would like to see something like this get slowed down.
So this is cool, and I like where your trying to take it. Id recommend blurring faces though, and text, though I don't think there was any. You never see that in a dream. It also had scenes I felt didn't mesh in well - 3:44- 3:46, had too much energy and kind of broke away from the chill out dream, with tons of visions in melting pot kinda flow you were going towards.
wow man. that was beautiful.
iowafilmdude22 1 year ago
Still some of your top stuff, Id recommend doing more like it. nice job
/end critique
Zaepg 2 years ago
I want more spacey/atmospheric audio, I felt you could of done that to that to the music, (if so turn the treble down, nothing with a high pitch), or work in voice that's muffled/distant and hard to hear. Basically push that kind of stuff more.
Not sure if it was intentional, but I found it to be a little too face pace, and would like to see something like this get slowed down.
Zaepg 2 years ago
So this is cool, and I like where your trying to take it. Id recommend blurring faces though, and text, though I don't think there was any. You never see that in a dream. It also had scenes I felt didn't mesh in well - 3:44- 3:46, had too much energy and kind of broke away from the chill out dream, with tons of visions in melting pot kinda flow you were going towards.
Zaepg 2 years ago
what was the music?
mosaicmovies 2 years ago
animal collective - the softest voice
great song!
gomogomomo 2 years ago