the best for both of us

[baalistic1]

That was pretty good! If I may, I'm more of a musical listening guy so nothing to say about your lyrics. They are decent, a bit cheesy but good and you have good chords but if you don't have that originality yet! You need to intonate the music part of your song! It's always the same melody. You need a good bridge and some different cords. Like John Mayer has one melody but plays it all over the place which gives his music richness. Do the same! Or just focus on your voice and give the guitar to

[jasonlapin]

@baalistic1 thanks for the criticism man, i appreciate it. i know i got a lot to learn on the guitar so def need to keep at that. u should check out my full band version of this song, its on my page if u wanna take a listen maybe ull like it better

[jasonlapin]

serious question. if i put out a 8 song cd on itunes would you guys be willing to buy it for five dollars? i just want to know before i set my heart on doing it

[torturedartistlauren]

@jasonlapin absolutely

[ThatLittleNoYesKid]

you have a very nice voice :D  guitar sounds a little funny but its nice. keep going!

[ZGSS]

what's wrong with your guitar? nice singing

[jasonlapin]

@valdezmiguel2 hahahah. cant lie that was clever. sorry you feel that way

[Zolok1]

@valdezmiguel2 comments like that shows how much of a useless twat u are <3

[9lunareclipse]

@valdezmiguel2 Well it seems that you are in fact wrong on all point. You certainly do know how to be useless in that it isn't exactly useful to spend your time criticising somehow who not only has the talent but the guts and charity to share that with us.

Not only that but you proved yourself even more useless by wasting what little intellect you obviously have in writing that snide little parody of a verse while at the same time proving you have little or no linguistic talent of your own.

[valdezmiguel2]

@9lunareclipse truthfully, that assertion makes no sense. by your logic, my comment would be more effective if I had written my own lyrics instead of writing a parody of his. infact, this would be less creative, and completely lost over the internet:

9lunareclipse is a faggot

ohhhh yeahhhh

9lunareclipse sucks dick every night

uhhhhh huhhhhh

but his days are coming to an end soon

uhhhh ohhhhhhh

because like a caterpiller, to a butterfly, his HIV is now AIDS

ohhhh nooooooo

fuck that guy.

[jasonlapin]

@valdezmiguel2 man you made your point. you dont like my music. i dont expect everyone to. im not mad at all. just please leave the page alone if you dont like it. i dont want you here unless your good to give me positive criticism or like my stuff. no need to be a dick

[migue681]

yoy should really record this song man, so good!!

[FrozenTo1]

good job, but get a new guitar :D

[CreativityHouse]

While I was waiting for it to buffer, I read some NEGATIVE comments, I was like is it that bad? I watched it... YOU ARE AMAZING. These people MUST be deaf, you're amazing. And I can already see my self listening to one of your ORIGINAL songs on the top 100 soon ;)xx

- Keep it up and P.S.. this come's from a 14 year old girl who's dreams were crushed and later finds out it was a 'joke'...

don't let any on crush your dreams... :) x

[talredhedkid]

i wont illegally download this song let me know when this is itunes man, you deserve the credit.

[ygorpereirax]

Good stuff! Best luck for you in your way. May you be the next big thing.

[TheMadBoysShow]

oh my god! That´s awesome!!!!Keep it up!

[epicgoiter]

Nice man, keep it up

[Burnendie]

keep doin what you're doing man, you're good.

brofist

[Cookoo4Coconutz]

Though MGM did point me in the direction of this video, I'm glad I saw he favourited it. Otherwise I may have never found it. Amazing voice and talent.

[deelightfulco]

great lyrics

[jasonlapin]

all i can say guys is i really appreciate everything, whether its talking about mysteryguitarman, talking positively about my video or criticizing me your still frequenting my channel, and thats the greatest compliment a 19 year old kid with a dream can get. i really love you guys for coming and listening to me. if any of you are in the new york city area i will be performing an open mic night tommorow at the r bar at 7 pm, its on 218 bowery st. in manhattan. if you saw this say hi to me there

[elcraksel]

if you're lucky and someone recognizes your talent I will remember this video

[MultiGreenstar]

Fuck ya man, thank you for the inspiration. Thank you for sharing your song. Made me feel really good!

[jasonlapin]

@MultiGreenstar thanks so much. you have no idea how good these comments make me feel.

[MrSamsonIsCool]

thanks man!  :)

[thoughtiwascreative]

great voice

not much else impressive though.

sure you'd be a great success in the christian contemporary market.

[moviemantommy]

MGM

[Stuka124]

Thumbs up if MysteryGuitarMan brought you here :D

[surokeen]

It reminds me david gray. Nice

[MasterGrizly]

dude, you have an awesome voice, but you got to get a new guitar.

It will be so much better when a good instrument will compliment your voice ;)

[yansheng21]

Hey man, that was a Perfect song, i let my girlfriend hear it and she said it was perfect. You sir are one awesome guy, YOUR 100X better then auto tune Rebecca Black!! If you start an album 1 will line up all day just to get it. Keep it going, Keep It Strong, and i will see you on TV in the near future :)

[thoughtiwascreative]

@yansheng21 100X better than Rebecca Black equals chewed gum on the bottom of a middle school classroom chair.

[rockandrolladdicts]

motherfuc#in mysteryguitarman favourited your vid :) and to bloody right i love it too, keep the passion alive

[jasonlapin]

@rockandrolladdicts holy shit man thanks alot



[jasonlapin]

lyrics are up. check out the description

[jasonlapin]

also please check out this other song done by me, called 42nd street on my channel. thanks guys

[jasonlapin]

can someone help me out and send me a link? i dont know if i looked up the right channel. i really want to thank mysteryguitarman. and once again like holy shit guys thanks alot for checking me out and enjoying my stuff. theres no bigger compliment

[MartynTheSpartyn]

wow your really good o.o

Keep up the good work!!!

[jasonlapin]

also just answer a few questions. haha. my face is usually always red but it gets worse when i sing. and what i kept looking at was lyrics that i just wrote for the second verse. i usually just freestyled the second one but i decided i needed to make it concrete. also i remebered this song off of a freestyle i did in the subway in NYC. so if youre ever in the subway look out for me. once again thanks so much

[MrTonhow]

Thanks MGM



[jasonlapin]

hey guys, umm i dont know what to say. thank you all so much for checking out my video. i would love if you guys could pass it on to someone. and who is mystery guitar man? and how did you guys find out about me?

[JT7173]

@jasonlapin mysteryguitarman is a fellow youtuber :) and has many views on his videos he like or favorite your video and now lots of people come look at your profile :) great job by the way ♥

I liked it

[MartynTheSpartyn]

@jasonlapin He's a very popular youtuber, really creative guy. I always check out the videos he like or favorits

[jasonlapin]

@MartynTheSpartyn thanks man, i might be in love with him right now haha

[raresdavid]

thumb up if you're the 301 viewer !!

[CaptainMoon12]

1:35-1:37 creeper face xD

[TMateusT]

Now that MysteryGuitarMan added this vídeo as favorite just wait until your video views start to growing like crazy ahah

[Rhogin]

Great :)

[spocagain]

mysteryguitarman sent me :)

[ewilli99]

for the video picture he looked like the miz.

[tomdoff1]

Love the voice!!!!! I'm not too sure I entirely agree with the guitar, but still amazing!

[jasonlapin]

@tomdoff1 ahha yah im not that great at guitar yet. ive been trying to take lessons but i ahvent had much time being in college and what not. but thanks alot

[WaNNaxC]

fucking awensome 

[jeccovecco]

MysteryGuitarMan Likes so much! ;D 

[zohairisdabest]

MysteryGuitarMan liked so i came.

[3veryThingGaming]

@zohairisdabest You came?

[zohairisdabest]

@3veryThingGaming wtf is that supposed to mean...

[3veryThingGaming]

@zohairisdabest Idk.... *Random Sexual Joke*

[Dehrax]

Lyrics and chords???? PLZPLZPLZ!!!

[TheOkoon]

nice ....what do you keep checking behind you?

[zohairisdabest]

@TheOkoon stalker....

[TheOkoon]

@zohairisdabest just trying to see if hes got the lyriks on paper or maby the cords is all

[mrmole95]

@TheOkoon probs the lyrics or the notes... that would be my guess... :/

[TheOkoon]

@mrmole95 same hear i just was CURIAS WHICH

[mrmole95]

@TheOkoon ???

[joegt123]

@mrmole95 First time I noticed it he was on a lyric that said something about the dirt on your floor.... So I thought he noticed dirt on his floor >___>

[jasonlapin]

@TheOkoon haha check my response comment

[Dehrax]

Awesome dude!

[Baboy318]

More!

[17marijn71]

WOW!!!! awesome!!! thanks @MysteryGuitarman !

[MrSnowyElite]

great voice!

[Daleilama5]

your face turned sooo red in the vid :D

but great voice, improve ya guitar skills a bit :P

[thedoomclock]

@Daleilama5 must be a really personal song.

[jasonlapin]

@thedoomclock yah. haha. straight from the heart

[jasonlapin]

@Daleilama5 thanks for being honest man, criticisms only going to help so thanks alot

[RawrMeCookie]

Great voice, you should get noticed.

[jasonlapin]

@RawrMeCookie wow you really think so??

[RawrMeCookie]

@jasonlapin Yeah, seriously, at some points the guitar sounded a bit off, but that might just be me but seriously, you have a good voice.

[TheManCrazyVideos]

the best

[Bfbc2killer]

Really nice

[EpicMasters]

Mgm favourated this!!!

[Macputer]

Brought here by MysteryGuitarMan ;D

[Macputer]

great voice ;D

[spookyman89]

kid yes