Fantastic! One I will come back to many times for sure. Great delivery for it. Although I knew what was coming this was like hearing it for the first time. Faved! :P
Elly: Love this poem; there are so many excellent lines like "his handsome face against the gunshot of the wind." Why has it never been described like that before? It's perfect and necessary! Thank god you came up with it. And all these perfect lines collaborate into the excellent journey of this poem. It's a treat to read it.
I changed the title - ooww yeah!
EllyMcCormack 3 weeks ago
This is some powerful work, Elly. And a great reading. Keep 'em coming!
Terrific setting and production, as well.
Best wishes,
Roy
twohawksfucking 7 months ago
'.. as white as racists
Loitering near the hangman's branch'
- great line amongst many
cheers Elly
dashpoet 7 months ago
Added to Poets Play List - Your a legend in your own time.
JoSieLove2Sing4u 11 months ago
(( ♥ ))
JoSieLove2Sing4u 11 months ago
Great poem XD Keep up the good work!
NatashaBekkerMusic 11 months ago
HOT
samwoods321 1 year ago
I'm impressed. You keep getting better and better. Hats off.
janeczka 1 year ago
Found the poem to be really interesting. What was the inspiration?
elpueblo88 1 year ago
@elpueblo88 A coward mostly. Thanks for checking my poem out. Videos of poetry never go viral, so 6 ratings is like -orgasm!-
EllyMcCormack 1 year ago
The flag we can now wipe our feet on.
thestranger11 1 year ago
@thestranger11 I don't have feet. Just bloodied stumps.
EllyMcCormack 1 year ago
@EllyMcCormack Or wheels, like me.
thestranger11 1 year ago
@thestranger11 lool but you've put tassels and cardboard wings on your wheelchair, which will surely make it go faster...
EllyMcCormack 1 year ago
@EllyMcCormack Haha you've gottit kiddo, I fly across these here mean streets!
thestranger11 1 year ago
Fantastic! One I will come back to many times for sure. Great delivery for it. Although I knew what was coming this was like hearing it for the first time. Faved! :P
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
@DavidRandallCurtis thanks for the support, Poet King of youtube!
EllyMcCormack 1 year ago
@EllyMcCormack The King is dead. Long live Elly! :P
DavidRandallCurtis 1 year ago
Elly: Love this poem; there are so many excellent lines like "his handsome face against the gunshot of the wind." Why has it never been described like that before? It's perfect and necessary! Thank god you came up with it. And all these perfect lines collaborate into the excellent journey of this poem. It's a treat to read it.
tinySpectacle 1 year ago
@tinySpectacle That's really kind of you. Good words to hear. I hope somebody will publish this
EllyMcCormack 1 year ago