Far Away Love [short story]

[keisashoma]

OMFG this made me cryy ):

[Hey1822]

omg so sweet but i hate sad love stories they make me cry :(.....hey was that angie

[xxaznbopxx]

what are the songs

[TheMinipu]

Hey at the End isn't her name Angel? You wrote Angie At '3.53'

[farflower1]

how come he can see ghost

[DevilJin221]

first song? O_o

[Charisse651]

Is it have Part Two?! If it is i think that's her revenge =O

[booblesshump]

errrr i dont get the ending :/.....

[neruzindit]

whats the last song?



[FabulousKilljoy99]

I LOVED IT! :)

[18jeareingc]

@Kantecy if you don't like it, why bother watching it anyways?

[Emmaelizabethaughton]

awww :(



[berryjennette]

Also, where did the thingy came from???

[berryjennette]

I love this vid! :D Just like 2 chances!

[sakura8112]

i dont get it... sorry... i mean whats whit the ham...

[22carmen2]

the doctor looks funny... hehe XD

[22carmen2]

is that chinese song? hmm.. i know the song.. i forgot the name.. i used to love hearing it... hmm.. forgot.. x3

[AsnMichellex3]

awww...i want this to be a series...when she passed him, i can imagine what can happen(:

[MrTofuboiii]

what song was the ending part where the ghost of the girl shows up

[electroungen]

this is so sad story. it makes me cry. why cant he kill himself too? :'<

BTW maplestory is AWESOOOME ^u^

[electroungen]

this is so sad story. it makes me cry. why cant he kill himself too? :'<

[ChangShuMei1]

3.49 , His Face Was Blank . Speechless xD

[emotearz248]

What game is this?!? O_o

[HuskyLover811]

@emotearz248

Maplestory. I play it, it is really fun. The site is maplestory.nexon.net

[sakura8112]

@emotearz248 maplestory...

[fatomas1]

the song is making the story sad

[datran5768]

i find the ending a lil scary lets see (ghost walks by, and scary music) there should be a sequal xD

[xKawaiiBabiix]

Font at 0:13? Love eet :3

[love3naruto]

.....if she had the ham can't she juz throw to b4 the monster attack him? no offence but tat part of her was stupid & slow reaction

[TastyTrance]

this sucked...

[Bloom1262]

can u uhh..continue..like after that what happen..

[skylarlove0]

things like tis shouldny be a short story IT SHOULD BE A SERIES xD

[XxFinnishChick101xX]

Who carries a huge leg of meat with them?

[AsnMichellex3]

extend this please!! i really like this! ^_^

[animewatchergirl1]

whats the begining song?

[BopBeeBopBee]

How'd u get the Opening picture ?

[AngelCryAlone]

DAMM U REMAKE IT AND MAKE HER LIVE NOW!! GOD DAMITT!!! I HATE U!!!!MY OLDER COUSIN (A GIRL) CAUGHT ME CRYIN!! DAM U REMAKE IT AND MAKE HE LIVE NOW!! T.T.T.T..T

[ix3CookieRulez]

THIS IS AWESOMEEE ;DDD Is it Okay if i make a Maple Series outta this :o Ima use the same idea As this short story for Part 1 and then continue it? is It okay, :3 I dont wanna go ahead and make something without the REAL author's Premission :D Hope you answer :3

[xLovexAngeIx]

@ix3CookieRulez shuree :) make it awsumm!~ xD

[ix3CookieRulez]

@xLovexAngeIx LOL Omgg Omgg <3 Ty sooooo Muchhh!!! (: And LOL I cant make it Awsumee, Its already to Awsumee and Proo When You made it (: Kekekekee. Thnxs alot ^0^

[xLovexAngeIx]

@ix3CookieRulez Nuuu D: i thought it sucked , i just liked the ending :D

back then.. i was soo noob. o.o

[ix3CookieRulez]

@xLovexAngeIx LOL. D: NUUU!!! Lies Lies Liessss (: I love this, its likeee x100000 Proooooooooooo :DDD Kekekee. i made Part 1, i sorta switched it up abit :D but its still the same. Ehehee. :D Would you like me to post Part 2 in the video response? Lol or did u alrdy answer :o idunno aha, im so confused :P STILL LOVE THIS U PROO ;DDD

[xLovexAngeIx]

@ix3CookieRulez anything is fine. :)

[ix3CookieRulez]

@xLovexAngeIx XDD Lol.Alrightt :D

[ix3CookieRulez]

@ix3CookieRulez Oh, Would you like me to Put Part2 in the Video response, Once i make it? :3 Btw, I watched some of your short stories! They're Really awesome! I love the way how you always put "The end" at the end, even tho it looks Like its going to be continued, u make it rlly awhsume! ahaha, Sorry for spams ^0^

[love3naruto]

@ix3CookieRulez did u really made it? i would love to watch it ^^

[XxbabyangelxXER]

if u make a part 2 it'd be great^^

[liewjianjie]

i don't get the last part

[xalexx101]

She Flied 0.o 1:02

[PSNtypePr0ductions]

They look like brother and sister. GAH INCEST D;

Cute tho.

[prinessesyuki21]

wtf

[BunieXCarrot43]

OMG THIS MADE ME CRY + I did not get it BUT STILL IT MADE ME CRY

[lavenderblues260]

i cry already:(

[surfergirlze]

WTF WAS THAT?! :O

[harryownjack]

uhm.,.......i dont know what to say its just so weird

[4i4l4u4v4c4p4]

how can no one get this?! its so easy to get. when the boy said to stop annoying her, she knew that he didnt love her!! so she had a reason to die becuz if he dosnt luv her, then her life is just useless! then at the end hes on a date with ANOTHER girl, and he sees her ghost.. and umm... well.. idk.. can u explain the rest plz?

[Sh4dovvNickie]

it like..at the end..she died..but then he hallucinating her..O.O?

[starzzthatfly123]

umm i dont get it.. at tl-le end.... i mean.. \/\/ut l-lappends next? o.o

[jason89able]

Hey,nice video.Your great! By the way your Short Story is a HIT!

[GoGoNikey32]

omfg the ending was awesome. busted :D

[MsPeachGal]

What's the second font? I love it!

[krisinangel]

DUDE to be continued ohhh CMON !!!! its like like... ummm... urghhh... her ghost has been see frequently and on one date he saw her ghost past by so he followed and cancelled the date!!! XD MORE JUICY!!!

[jamesalbranevan]

what's the end song????Pls tell me it's really nice O.o

[Flurri914]

thats the end? o.O

[tobisinn]

failed

[IcyyHair]

THAT WAS SCARY LOLOL

[mylimien]

idk why but the ending is very coooooool , but the rest i dont understand ^.-

thanks you

[bethanylovesu1]

lol 1:15 - 1:25

[Kantecy]

wow this story is rly common!!! =-= why cant u make an original and rare one like forgotten love and snow kiss and my sister?! =-= nobody nids this kind of ms short story

[xLovexAngeIx]

@Kantecy if you dont like it then just..Fuckk off.

alot of people make these stuff becuz they want to, its just

for fun :)

[CheezyMonsta]

@xLovexAngeIx

true n this is pro btw so... angie turns to a ghost right?

[XxKitkatbaby7xX]

can you make this as a series its soo good (:

[Bluexgurl01]

LOLD AT THE DOCTOR. 8D. LIKE THE STORY~ 8D. ISSS COO.

[happydaygames]

I don't really get it can u explain it to me

[fanny628628]

where did the meat come from?O.o

[Loveication1]

ohh mii gee =( sad

[CookieStarrz]

i dont get the ending DX can you explain for me? :D

[xLovexAngeIx]

@CookieStarrz umm the girl dies and comes back as a ghost in the end to the boy but the boy was with this other girl and... o.o

and thats all i know :)

[CookieStarrz]

@xLovexAngeIx oh o-o

[iMuffinBaby]

LOL the ending was stupid! xDD!! (walks over) O_O" ANGIE?! LOL!! what the hell? xDD But anyway, its an ok story :P

[XDevilGirlxDevilBoyX]

Hey can you do part 2 D:?

[97rosie]

huh>the end>?

[BloomAln94]

Can u send me the songs + MAKE A PART 2 PLEASE

[BloomAln94]

can u send me the songs plz

[babymamaaa]

cool ! yeah , the last song tittle !

[forcepink08]

i <3 maplestory!!!!

[GirlsRule430]

last part was kewl

[BloomAln94]

Make more PLz

[UltimaAdrian97]

I dropped my jaw on the last part

[xXKawiwiiCutieXx]

actually it took 287 characters to write it

[xXKawiwiiCutieXx]

that dude is a bastard because he didn't even care she died and she loves him and i thought he would die because somehow he was in love with her,and does he even care she died.Also I am talking to much,Sorries just so many questions and it took about 213 characters to write this comment

[AJC2607]

my jaw was hanging loose at the last part...

[ITzEll3n]

WTFWTFWTFWTF :O

[farahnadianabila]

omg the last part is sooo cool

[aznprdyo10]

wat was d second song ?

[PonyoLover]

LOl habbo hospital F3 1:56

[iliktodostupidthings]

i thought her name was angel xD ... tht wwas scary

[wednesdayaddams98]

this is how i feel!!!

[emmy311996]

i dont get it . . . . sorry i just dont

[jedarabbit1999]

@emmy311996 not sure but i think the story is - angle was in love with max, they went to the park , wolf killed max but he wasnt dead , in the hospital , when max woke he argued with angle and angle thought max was going to kill himself so she killed herself first to show him she have a reason to die than one year later , max was having a date with a girl and angle walked part but max saw her (dunno why and m not sure too)

[MissCherbi]

he was faceless at 3:49 or his eyes were hiding XD

[jess231001]

wow u ppl r craziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii! de creator don wan 2 make boring obvios endings! tats y hi stop in between cuz i m very sure u now wats gonna happen later

[MTAGaryy]

wtf happened at the end O.O

[starandnuthead]

Angie's spirit passed by him, then he looked once again, and it was angie

[AkmalHX]

Plsx5 reply! Where did u get the backgrounds? Like when there was " Why was I so mean to her? " where did u get te background for it?

[david9kim]

This doesn't have an ending, prob. a part two can end it!!! Just my opinion. [:< Aren't I right?

[MegaPandaninja]

@david9kim you are sooo right

[muNkii324]

LOL i love it when the doctor walks away lol its funny

[BlazenJef]

Um what song did u use

[Alicia5781]

not 2 b mean but that was dum y would someone thake ham out with them and y would he tell her he would kil himself 4 no reason??and then not kill himself???But besides that it was good u sould make a part two plzzz

[xLovexAngeIx]

@Alicia5781 i think it was dum too o.o

i was a noob back then so now when i look at it..

it kinda sucks :)

[electroungen]

@xLovexAngeIx Oh My GOD!! Please make a Part 2. the story was soooo saaaaad. I start to cry when i saw it :'( make a lovely end on part 2 please i love this story

[sexyluisita]

if you want to make a really,really,really dramatic love story put the song MY HEART WILL GO ON from the movie titanic

[iPinayNinjax3]

Theres no part two, cohs its called a short story. -___-

[blueraineee]

part 2!

[demonfin]

make part 2!im curios about wat happen!!

[SelenaRaxmaSox]

you should make a part too, plzzzz

[loveliazul06]

it would be cool if she wasn't a Gost but a real person!!! that will truly make a very good story, She should be just like the first one in everything but then whit another name or some minor diferent and then it is REALLY her but she dosen't remmember a thing!

It would be so GREAT!!! you should do somthing like that or another ting it would still be really good!!

[cece55443]

more?

[NingaXlil]

OMFG its really good!!

part two wud be the best!

[SisterSillyKitty]

its not messed up its kool :D u should make a second part to this! :D it be awesome ^^

[xXXinathalieXXx]

stop tellin the story =(

[TheScotchtapefan]

omg sweet if there was a continue part that would be awesome

[ilovecookie5999]

omg she died then after one year she came walking pass him as a goust that freaked me out

[angel666uchiha]

this would be an awsoem series make a part tw0 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee­eee?

[amygurl12345]

yur right o.o

[mrpeckster]

sad

[xPokka]

means that girl actually came back to him ? o-o why did she did that fer? :]

[greatgodKT]

please tell me the 1st song i really want it =(

[bigbangsebas]

is good till the ened booo

[XxFlakaxX415]

thizz waz preety good bt i realli didnt like tha ending yu cud of addin zum more detailz or zum thang but frm tha it waz GoOd.

[MapleVideoBoy]

omg my name max

[PaletteAngel]

can anyone tell me whats the name of the last song used?

[xMapleFrostii]

It's a gundam song. Try to find it.

[XxichemotoxX]

i want a number 2..... (not being commanding)

[iAngelRawr]

my name Angel ^-^

haha

cool!

[4evagymnast]

whhhhaaaaaatttt?!?!?!?! THATS THE END?! NO!!!

[DeViLiClOvE]

N can tell mi th title 0fu th last s0ng used ? :]

[xLovexAngeIx]

Lol i dont really know o-o my sister got these songs :P

[CutePlushie6323]

the song's from tsubasa chronicle

title=A Song of Storm and Fire

[DeViLiClOvE]

Kiss the rain O.O nice vid,btw :]

[CoolBlueNatalie]

max is bad...

[Jessica223344]

no!!!!!!!! that cannot be the ending! there's another ending rite? :[

[sk8er4evernever]

damrite not mess u rok hwo can u say it suk D:

[WaddlerKisser]

Yeah.. I Kinda Agree With The Description..

[xangelxheart]

make a part 2 :)

[xMichieChan]

sad girl Y_Y im sad,,,,, ;~;

[ilikepikachuu]

DOCTOR; well ill be going now bye.

ME; WTF. I SUE U DOCTOR.

[Littlesweetangel85]

O.o unexpected ending

[l0v3lyn259]

i like it!as love it^^

[Sakura252423]

wtf ;-; nooooooooo!!!!!!!that not the ending D:

[anniechan123]

OH NO YOU DIDN"T END IT!!!! >:OOOOOOOOO *sniff* I want moreee...:(

[PokemonLoves0310]

same words that my old crush said "this will be the last time u ever see me..."

[xLovexAngeIx]

aww ;[

[giroroluver4life]

yep

[PresentsFP]

Omg that Max dude is a Playya

[FweshCristy]

i like it but i dont get y he has to strech lol

[xLovexAngeIx]

that was random o-o when i was a noob Dx

[SaphLily]

the end...???......????

[pinkrox4eva2me]

this video is so good evn if its messed up.. wats the first song called?

[XAXOrangeXAX]

..wow the end?

[ilikecake123425]

<33333333 it

[Mooncakesz]

What did the guy say in the end on 3:53?

Or did u just put it there? O-o

[Mooncakesz]

They both look like the characters from the video crazier by taylor swift the one you dedicated to your friend Vicky and her crush. Are they the characters? O-o

[Enoyatta]

dar i almost cried then u changed the music. its a very good story if u make my cry

[lonneygirl123]

omg wow! amazing story on this ^.^ make a second part please?:D ur ubber pro ;D

[ckkjt]

wow if its messed up well o well i get it wow feel so bad he shouldnt be so mean u should make a second part

[sk8er4evernever]

...o.o aw i feel bad 4 her

[curemikuberry16]

even if it's messed up i really nderstand it and love it!!!

[Annaie123]

Lol

she threw a ham at him :D

[MewAngel120]

OMG the last part was creepy but cool lol

[iiluvblu]

whats the songs?

[itzmeblahbleh]

what's the beginning song? :D

[lilazn30nfahrenheit]

It's 遇

by AiMiNi

[rmklmd]

AHH im crazy for the series though its not when you do tell me