The Takey Men - Nick Gisburne

[stillrocking1995]

A great story to tell by night ,ive read a few more memorable but that is a very small few, now just have to hope I can sleep tonight.

[mordinvan]

I've shown this to my coworkers, and it freaks them out. Great job.

[xavierspade666]

The breathing is my favorite part.

[acmacmsnowball]

oh ya your bass ass fool !!

[aPennsylvaniaHour]

proper freaky!

the takey men feed with straws thru my eyes, sucking my dreams.

10 rows of teeth appear....*shivers*

btw - the whispered end better not creep into my dreams!

[TheAist]

nice, creepy. reminds me of my dreams. i have chronic nightmares

[Domzdream]

Great!

[rawruca]

Love it!

[JamesCalico]

Dear Nick, This is absolutely. The 4th God-head of the Quadrinity is truly creative.

[HeadoftheHydra]

Well, this was great.

[TheHerman8r]

this is awesome I could imagine James earl Jones reading it !!

[SPICYMONKEYXD]

You have an excellent voice

[Largo64]

This seems perfect for a Halloween release. Great stuff, Nick!

[ExaggeratedElegy]

Absolutely gorgeous. Easily the most inspiring vid I've seen on YouTube for ages.

George

[gorikuri]

IF someone could memorize this, this story would be GREAT around a campfire during story time. My favorite part was when you started whispering.

[Gisburne2000]

@gorikuri You could always just learn the last verse and whisper it into the ear of someone who is almost asleep!

[gorikuri]

@Gisburne2000 ooooo Nick,... you are soooo WICKED..... I love it!!!

[Loreleila]

I do like the breath at the beginning of your poems.

[Gisburne2000]

@Loreleila I shall have to try harder to convince you that everything beyond that point isn't bad either :o)

[Loreleila]

@Gisburne2000 lol! How does one get past having ones breath taken away?

[Gisburne2000]

@Loreleila If it were stolen away by the Takey Men, no doubt they would use it to breathe life into another of their diabolical dolls!

[logicaust]

Ah, thought I recognised this title. Thanks for the re-upload, do want.

Peace Nick.

[2bsirius]

Sounds like an abridgement of "Cormac McCarthy's "The Road" if he boy and his father were left out.

[2bsirius]

@2bsirius

THE boy

[Gisburne2000]

@2bsirius That would be a very short story :o)

[2bsirius]

@Gisburne2000

It would and it would be this one.

[renegade4dio]

haha. Ok, here goes again! Removing the removed one and adding the replacement ;)

[Anghellik9]

ooh, this is a blast from the past.

[Gisburne2000]

Well, I may have uploaded this before but I couldn't just leave it off the channel forever, so here it is. Re-edited to reduce some unwanted noises.