So I can't say the story is superb, but really liked the idea to use the game to act out your fanfic. It's not like people actually use games to act out stories very often. (Unless your a movie director ;D )
pretty good man, quite good for a first episode, the story seems pretty good but id make it a little clearer how bardock is on earth, the dialouge seems a bit rushed but still is good the fight scenes are good but try and add more of a flow from air to ground and maybe add a little of the fight sounds ass the sound of a hit can affect a scene but the music was great and the episode seemed really interesting will keep a heads up for you
Very nice man. Few tips, at some points the text was difficult to read so you might want to change the text color depending on the background. Also, try to stay away from the barriers. Other then that, this was a great episode man. Very entertaining, nice job.
why are they not using super saiyan and just obliterate them weaklings
vegetaisthebestful 2 weeks ago
i lost them
eastboy215 7 months ago
no i lost them
eastboy215 7 months ago
hey faishon its eli wats jared and your number
eastboy215 7 months ago
@eastboy215
Our phone numbers,dont you have them already?
Melku44 7 months ago
So I can't say the story is superb, but really liked the idea to use the game to act out your fanfic. It's not like people actually use games to act out stories very often. (Unless your a movie director ;D )
Good job :)
KaiVirusX 10 months ago
cool fan fic
songokuROCKS 1 year ago
1:53 Didn't see that coming ;)
hazza3 1 year ago
pretty good man, quite good for a first episode, the story seems pretty good but id make it a little clearer how bardock is on earth, the dialouge seems a bit rushed but still is good the fight scenes are good but try and add more of a flow from air to ground and maybe add a little of the fight sounds ass the sound of a hit can affect a scene but the music was great and the episode seemed really interesting will keep a heads up for you
dmansback1 1 year ago
goku as kicking his butt kicked
xjg246 1 year ago
Very nice man. Few tips, at some points the text was difficult to read so you might want to change the text color depending on the background. Also, try to stay away from the barriers. Other then that, this was a great episode man. Very entertaining, nice job.
ChaosDimensionZ 1 year ago
Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Iceman20ful 1 year ago
Nice fanfic :D
tokyoking2 1 year ago
nice
14ssjgoku 1 year ago
>:D Awesomeness!
Rehawkify 1 year ago
great episode 10/10 cant wait for the next
DennyA5 1 year ago
lol....*man* that word reminds me of last year...and all the randomness~
hamtarofan322 1 year ago
@hamtarofan322
lol... yeah
Melku44 1 year ago
awesome buddy~ hey...check out my new vid for pearlshipping day~ :D thumbs ups fer u buddy~
hamtarofan322 1 year ago