Raymond Carver "Why Don't You Dance?" - Short Film (AUCB)

[basketcase5295]

Just read this yesterday for the first time. This is neat!

[asiantriptv]

Really good work ! I also made a video about an young Indonesian Dancing Girl, you can see it on my profile, enjoy ;)

[lopezand77]

Very good job. Even though I know the exercise asked to film part of it, I think I would have considered starting them in the bed maybe? the dancing scene is crucial. I think them discovering the yard sale and him playing with the typewriter not so much. As well shot and acted as the story may be, the way you have it really is no arc or does not answer enough of the questions you posed (or that Carver presents more accurately). Still good job.

[RobeeMan]

Congratulations, great job!I would have liked the man to be more drunk and sipping on a beer but it was nice anyway. :-)

[mrdudelz]

A very good adaptation. And a nice preview of the Hollywood version that I've read is coming. Its called "Everything Must Go" and its starring Will Farrell.

[colemania]

This was really well acted and shot, but you left out the ending! The dancing scene is crucial.

[quickgofast]

@colemania unfortunately for the exercise we were only allowed to shoot part of the story and not the whole thing. i agree to have the dance in it would have been much better. thanks for your feedback! :-)

[kensai123]

wow, great job. wonderful well the dialogue from the prose translates so well onto the screen. really shows off carver's ear for dialogue. but why no dancing scene?

[HeyBrownie]

i love the location and the colors! i don't get the title, maybe i should know the novel. but great job! :-)