So much potential. I liked the lyrics and the beat. Loved the accent. My main discrepancy is the flow. The lack of flow ruined it for me. The words and beat are 1/4. The rest is flow. Link your words into the rhythm and don't be afraid to add intensity. An intense rapper is always a good rapper in my books. Hope my words help!
I recommend working on your flow - having less pauses, putting more emotion into each word and writing your stuff so it has even more effect i.e. making it more observational rather than personal - i.e. writing it about humanity/many people using Facebook etc. rather than individuals. Not sure if doing so would keep your song true to what you intended it for, but doing this helped me reach a higher level so maybe it will for you.
MAJORTRIADZ = FRESH UK HIP HOP :) WICKED VIDS BTW ;)
MajorTriadz 11 months ago
Amazing Video!! 5 Stars!! Thumps Up!!
DNLScratcher 1 year ago
@DNLScratcher
Thanks for the support!
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 1 year ago
CUT YOU UP LIKE A MAD BUTCHER WITH SALAMI - THAT LINE KILLED ME MAN, PEACE
jamaluzujacobs 1 year ago
Jesus, we did this when we were 15? GET A REAL JOB STANDARD :)P
BIG LOVE X
EvilEcco 1 year ago
@EvilEcco
It's my choice in what I do.
How can you talk about Big Love when your hating on my art form.
Think about it?
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 1 year ago
@EvilEcco So, doing art you believe in is not a real job? What should he do, go work in a mall?
SpawnRevenge92 11 months ago
Sounds like JME.
Trendsetterz1nk 1 year ago
@Trendsetterz1nk
Thanks for the feedback and JME & Skepta are good artists.
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 1 year ago
over 70 thousand views and its one of the darkest tracks on the album.
ZXAmiga64 1 year ago
nice song!
kazukun01toontown 1 year ago
@kazukun01toontown
Thanks!
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 1 year ago
Even thou I'm normally not the type of person to be interested in rap, this is really neat with a good message.
JLCL01 1 year ago
@JLCL01
Thanks for the support man it's much appreciated.
A message is always in important in music as well as the entertainment factor.
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 1 year ago
You sound like something from an advert trying to reach young people. You know like a rapping nerd type thing.
WhiteMaverick321 1 year ago
@WhiteMaverick321
Thanks for the feedback!
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 1 year ago
@WhiteMaverick321 Ya im quite young and i love it! I actually don't like face book but i have it anyway.. just because all my mates do :/
batman818 1 year ago
great song
BMW2o2 1 year ago
great song! thank you and 5*
DarkDamnationDark 2 years ago
I love song's with a message!
Jabbaro123 2 years ago
Thanks man, it's all about spreading a message.
The message is there for people who are willing to open up their minds.
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
True words bro.
Jabbaro123 2 years ago
YO! IT'S OVER FOR YOU I DECLARE WAR! YOU WILL GET MERKED BY ME!
The-Definition.
iTheDefinition 2 years ago
Awesome man...
Rory1908isback 2 years ago
So much potential. I liked the lyrics and the beat. Loved the accent. My main discrepancy is the flow. The lack of flow ruined it for me. The words and beat are 1/4. The rest is flow. Link your words into the rhythm and don't be afraid to add intensity. An intense rapper is always a good rapper in my books. Hope my words help!
mattyp102193 2 years ago
sounds like an english version of someone trying to bite mf doom's style
adrocknyc23 2 years ago
I don't think I sound like MF Doom but hey if that's what you think I am cool with that opinion.
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
@MrGrimezTheAntiHero "bite mf dooms style", sounds like a get out clause for the protection of a shoddy production gimmick.
No such things as the best, only what is good.
PS Digital Glasgow kiss ?, lol well proper. hope to hear more soon.
bastardtubeuser 2 years ago
@bastardtubeuser oh aye, that cover is pretty wild man.
really dark.
bastardtubeuser 2 years ago
Got mad potential but you need flow son.
mesie2006 2 years ago
could have been half decent, but it was shit
08CJ09 2 years ago
At least you could have been dam constructive.
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
Awesome lyrics and message man. Good work.
I recommend working on your flow - having less pauses, putting more emotion into each word and writing your stuff so it has even more effect i.e. making it more observational rather than personal - i.e. writing it about humanity/many people using Facebook etc. rather than individuals. Not sure if doing so would keep your song true to what you intended it for, but doing this helped me reach a higher level so maybe it will for you.
Keep it up.
Peace.
mcSkeptik 2 years ago
BULLSHIT
scarface190585 2 years ago
Yeah now that's real constructive isn't it haha
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
i luv dat mussssssiiiiiiiicc
xoxoo
Sweetooth199 2 years ago
This has a powerful message very good it gets the above rating
BMORE410MD 2 years ago
soo lovely song ***** (:
fofofafa000 2 years ago
10 out of 10.
Movie444channel 2 years ago
Thank you everyone for the support.
Stay tuned for "Legend Of The Underdog EP" coming soon.
Also the debut album "A Battle Against The City Of Madness"
Cheers!
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
i want to cop this ep
CLEONtheBUSHIDO 2 years ago
Yes yes the EP will be coming soon stay tuned!
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
this is mad dope bro' its sounds intergalactic and dope
CLEONtheBUSHIDO 2 years ago
You ripped this one Bloke, I mean you was rapping yo ass off! Im hyped! yeahhh!
I can't stop you from becomming a sheep? wha? ah man, thats tight!
NegroXFile 2 years ago
Nice!
tehutiblack 2 years ago
that joint is bangin man, and Bro tehuti what you doing in here? lol
NegroXFile 2 years ago
Thanks, enough respect goes out to you !
MrGrimezTheAntiHero 2 years ago
yeah yeah man, thats joint is banging! nice execution on the beat brugh, real talk, you rocking that joint!
NegroXFile 2 years ago
5* ;-) Great!!!
SolerBros 2 years ago
i like it. ******
bugsme10 2 years ago