Daniel Shore Opening for Daniel Tosh @ Bradley University

[TheMacManLikeGuy]

Awesome

[jokerjocker]

SAW TOSH IN PECHANGA LAST MONTH AND HIS OPENER IS SOME GUY NAMED GREG TOLLMAN I ADDED HIM ON FACEBOOK

[jokerjocker]

SAW TOSH IN PECHANGA LAST MONTH AND HIS OPENER IS SOME GUY NAMED GREG TOLLMAN I ADDED HIM ON FACEBOOK

[skullosordie]

great audience. if that was at the improv in hollywood you would have bombed, which is bullshit cause you got good material

[prawlininja]

good job man, transition was a bit off but not horrible,i enjoyed it at least!

[RubixB0y]

hey its sam from camp (you ate a burger at my table and told me the car with 500 people joke) i think your routine is really funny i might see you next year but im going to go to mosh

[Clario40000]

you did ok, work on your delivery, anything can be funny with good delivery. Also maybe some better material, but I didn't ski the video you were interesting.

[tformer0607]

awsome

[randallpink83]

pretty good man, I think you let us know you were nervous too much tho.

I think you gotta just Fake or Act your confidence right now. just pretend you are the shizzz and do your thing!

As it was, I was just sitting her tense thinking "hmm i wonder if he will screw up and do something embarrassing, cause he is new... OMG he Squeaked!! whoa that was embarrasing.." =P

[Flames344Life]

pretty funny, liked the oval bit a lot. Keep on doing stand-up, you got potential

[soothuglifesmile]

1:05 *kIIIIIIInda worried me" lol squeaked a bit

maybe your jokes have some potential

but i think delivery is probably just as, if not more important than the jokes

try to make it seem liek ur not presenting, liek ur just talking with one person - and work on the beginning, a smooth beginning transition will not only make a better impression for your audience, but youll also feel better about their reaction

[klvanzu]

not bad man - you got a lot of potential

[man215]

This takes balls of steel.

[mongorgtheslayer]

A good tour guide and stand up comic

[Jneidz]

good job

[Sydney529]

well i think he did really great :]]

obviously if he's already opening for daniel tosh

good job!!

[817home]

hey shore nice job we all love you and you should have worn your backwards Aero shirt

Danna Gesher '07

and friend

[andriaaam]

the grand canyon was funny!

[angziz]

could've been better. You had a good tone and examples, but you needed more interesting topics. I mean, acting dumb about obvious things doesn't make people laugh. I'm not trying to be mean, i'm just giving my perspective. Good try though!

[jdman929]

yeah shore!!!!!

its jordan from gesher 2007!

[learnrv]

That's not bad at all, you should keep at it.

[kritz4prez]

yh confidence was lacking... and it sounds like he's trying to tell a joke, a good comedian talks a story... but good for a beginner =)

[shortitaliandude102]

that was good. keep it up man. the transition was funny =)

[HobartSlants]

The spinning transition LOL

[Prunk44]

lol not bad at all

[mrcurly1310]

yah shore.  ur awesome dude. camp was great. gesher 07 all the way.

[SpinTingProductions]

yeah man keep it up you rule

[cringehumorthrice]

I love the vocal register your voice hits while you're setting up a punchline. The only problem is it was so high that my ears were unable to actually hear what was being said.

[mopitup]

YEAH SHORE :]

[btw87]

good for a beginner... you didnt seem so confident... commit to the material

[sprague122]

I liked the fact that you kept it clean. Not that im some sort of religious nut or anything but i have been doing stand up and i can't keep it clean. Its to hard for me. Good luck man.

[rixtyseven]

definitely pause longer between big laughs. But funny stuff.

[MichaelMarsters]

Pause between jokes for a more dramatic effect-also makes the show longer.

[insertawesomenameher]

not bad. i agree with the guy below me. work on facial expressions and hand motions and such. i didnt really like the car joke though

[ROROkokemo]

The 'bad transistion' bit was original, I enjoyed it!

You're pretty well off for a comedian, just work on wording your jokes, and FACIAL EXPRESSION.

Exaggerate your movements and such to bring out the essence of the joke.

[BroadwayLady24]

eehhh... It was alright, Maybe a 6 out of 10. I'm not saying I could do any better but you need to develop your act more to succeed as a comedian. That's great that you could open for Daniel Tosh though!

[rhinohiifive]

You're really good. Be a little more goofy and you're all set. You have the cute voices down but you could even do more. Don't listen to Owen, drugs won't do anything for you.

Keep it up!

[OwenPikap]

you should do some drugs before your show, drugs give people lots of confidence. your pre-pubescent squeeks kinda take away a little bit of your funny quotient. I like the oval part

[purplelongsock]

Hey, that was good, keep it up:D

You may want to commit more when you are doing your mimicking (baby's, 'yesss master' dude) but overall you sounded really good.

[Starbucksheart]

Dude, put more.

[loopey1000]

your pretty funny man =)

[hobogun]

the bad transition was the best part. the little egor character saying yes master was a bit corny though. congrats on opening for tosh

[Sicklesale]

how about keep doing what hes doing and not take amateur advice? never change your act to please other people (especially dane cook fans).

[thepezcollection]

The first joke about the low income day-care was bad. The one about the cars-to-people ratio was somewhat okay. Your real money was in the grand canyon and construction zone jokes. You just need a little more facial expression, and gestures. Your commentary is ace. But hey, opening for Tosh? That's bloody amazing! You're lucky.

[mertziedmb]

you are funny :]

nice work! I can't believe you opened for Daniel Tosh. That's ACE, man! keep it up.

[allUK3473]

Love the bad transition! :D

[What1332]

You wouldn't happen to have Daniel Tosh's peformance would you?

Well anyway you were good not great I'm not gonna lie to ya you need better jokes... But the "bad transition" joke was a good one, Kudos!

[FoShore09]

No, we couldn't video Tosh, but thanks for letting me know what you thought of my routine.

[FoShore09]

thanks for all the feedback so far

[nevereverascuteasyou]

ah you were really good.

[GandlesSandles]

well i thought you were pretty good and have some potential. i enjoyed it

[the357outlaw]

the "bad transition" was probably the most that i've seen. The construction zone speed limit may need a bit of a tweak but other than that it's a very good idea. keep up the good work and let me know if you put up any more vids.

[FoShore09]

thanks for the feedback...I've heard similar things on the construction zone joke so I'll work on that and let you know when i put up my next vid

[righthereinred]

Great bit man. Post more whenever you get them.

[FoShore09]

thanks for the feedback...and I will do so

[sazken]

Yeah, the last joke was kinda stale towards the end. The beginning was hilarious, though, what with the oval part and all. Everything else had me cracking up - the "bad transition" was one of the funniest things I've ever seen in a comedy routine. Good luck in your comedic endeavors!

[FoShore09]

thanks for the feedback...glad you liked the bad transition

[thesamkills]

I really liked your Grand Canyon joke

and not only because I bust up whenever someone says "Bad News Bears" in everyday life ;)