really people?!! she was obviously inspired by this poem nd wnted to share it wiht just a few more people who dnt knw it. shut up nd leave her be. she did alot better than any of you could ever do
i did this peice for speech competition and just so happened to get first place. and you might not ever want to attempt that again. not that it was bad or anything, it was wrong. it wasnt slam it was spoken, it missed SO MANY lines like, like a cross examination i will give you the explanation of why SlamNation is the ultimate manifestation of poetic masturbation and egotistical ejaculation. you dont have to memorize it, but before trying again PRACTICE. and slam poetry is not for everyone.
really people?!! she was obviously inspired by this poem nd wnted to share it wiht just a few more people who dnt knw it. shut up nd leave her be. she did alot better than any of you could ever do
fullbloodedinsane 1 year ago
i did this peice for speech competition and just so happened to get first place. and you might not ever want to attempt that again. not that it was bad or anything, it was wrong. it wasnt slam it was spoken, it missed SO MANY lines like, like a cross examination i will give you the explanation of why SlamNation is the ultimate manifestation of poetic masturbation and egotistical ejaculation. you dont have to memorize it, but before trying again PRACTICE. and slam poetry is not for everyone.
TheKandiekrypto 2 years ago
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DistortedBrain 2 years ago
What made you think "hey let me RUIN talyor mali's AMAZING piece" ?!?!?!
jcollato12 2 years ago
holy shit, u seriously destroyed this amazing piece!!! U need to never do slam poetry again. pls?
blisskisser 2 years ago
oh god.
AllStarActinger 2 years ago
epic failure
jimkilla69 2 years ago
sorry babe this is a fail. sorry.
kaipie93 2 years ago
ARG its not "the same three lines"
that doesn't make any sense...
it's "the same line three times"
Archaebob 3 years ago
nice try i guess. you posted this a year ago so i hope you've improved a lot, just keep practicing
hkim927 3 years ago 3
no no nooooooooo, you're doing it wrong..... I feel sorry for... everything now... like, ever...
I'm going back to listening to Year Zero and making origami soldiers....
Gunslung 3 years ago 2
yea, i just woke up...that was lazy, memorize it, then deliver it, like you said WITH POWER!!! maybe start with some Robert Frost or something...
wecanhealthis 3 years ago
No passion at all. As Taylor Mali himself would say, it is no longer good enough to just question authority, you gotta SPEAK with it too.
And i agree, memorize the words, especially if they're not yours.
alanimator 3 years ago 2
ironically, this is not a political poem...its a satirical poem that makes fun of slam poets.
pacificYO 4 years ago
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that was a good job. although i would recomend a podium for your nnext performance. YOUR GOING PLACES!
reyorhs 4 years ago
you have to memorize this do to it with passion
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arelyhmoons 4 years ago
Have you ever heard him do it... it's... okay... drink some beer and get pissed off at something.
TheSakeOfGod 4 years ago