it was good, i enjoyed hearing that. tell your friend to continue writing and it will get even better, and one day she will find that piece of writing that she really enjoyed writing. but truly is any writer happy with their writing? im not, it always feels unfinished
She should get her stuff published :)
That was such an amazing peice of work! The only problem is that it did'nt end at strong as it started.
LilBluePeep 2 years ago
Wow, I really like this. You have a nice voice, and great diction!
juanx14 2 years ago
is good (Y)
lol. and i thought i was good at writing.
i just got owned :)
heavvymetal88 2 years ago
suck it up
JoeSmith232363 2 years ago
uhm what?
o.O
this is a fictional story my friend cadie wrote... lol
SeeSamFly 2 years ago
oooooo i c ahahahhaha i get it :D
JoeSmith232363 2 years ago
that was really good!
Lovestop19 2 years ago
hows your friends writing coming?
shadowninja650 3 years ago
its great!!
:)
i still want to see her notebook filled with stuff!
SeeSamFly 3 years ago
well when you get the chance, please read another one of your friends writings. i would very much enjoy hearing them
shadowninja650 3 years ago
You be Cool.
scottklaw 3 years ago
it was good, i enjoyed hearing that. tell your friend to continue writing and it will get even better, and one day she will find that piece of writing that she really enjoyed writing. but truly is any writer happy with their writing? im not, it always feels unfinished
shadowninja650 3 years ago
i will tell her tomorrow =]
im sure she will be happy to hear of the good comments coming from people!!
<3
SeeSamFly 3 years ago
im glad that youll pass on my comment
shadowninja650 3 years ago
that really is pretty good
:]
its beautifully written
lemonkisschick 3 years ago