thanks. I think I see what you mean. When he steps back right? I'll do another pass, maybe two, to clean up all the curves and add some facial expression.
yup. right after he steps back. just a smaall increase in that antecipation time would give the swing a lot more energy and enfasis i think. But Keith is definitely a better advisor, maybe i'm totally wrong :) thanks for your comments on my clip
i am working on one. I just so happened to be in an animation workshop with Keith Lango in order to improve my skills. if you want to be a good animator than it's important to focus on that skill. Films are huge tasks involving story, story boarding, layout, pacing, continuity, design, etc etc. I enjoy that process very much, but I also feel it's important to develope my skills as an animator
:) looking good mate! i can see you added a little more weight overlap at the end of the swing. i like that bat bounce detail when he hits the ground.
the clean up seems good. "first" means you're doing another one, what's are you up to next? :)
what do you think of giving the antecipation a bit more time, after he settles before the swing boast?
craftuas 2 years ago
thanks. I think I see what you mean. When he steps back right? I'll do another pass, maybe two, to clean up all the curves and add some facial expression.
michaelbaran 2 years ago
yup. right after he steps back. just a smaall increase in that antecipation time would give the swing a lot more energy and enfasis i think. But Keith is definitely a better advisor, maybe i'm totally wrong :) thanks for your comments on my clip
craftuas 2 years ago
i really think u should just make an actually short film instead of all this 6 second clips
animatorstarter 2 years ago
i am working on one. I just so happened to be in an animation workshop with Keith Lango in order to improve my skills. if you want to be a good animator than it's important to focus on that skill. Films are huge tasks involving story, story boarding, layout, pacing, continuity, design, etc etc. I enjoy that process very much, but I also feel it's important to develope my skills as an animator
michaelbaran 2 years ago