Ok so I am in a pickle. Do I like this one more than the others? It's so full of emotion, yet there is a lighthearted air about the whole thing. So heartwarming, yet so much sincerity rings through. Love the way you bring out such passion in your work through narration. Could you please take the time to review a few of mine & give me your feedback. Perhaps leave a comment or two. Thanks.
@AngelEyezNation I'm not sure what to make of this one either, so we're in the same boat there! Sometimes I like it and other times it makes me feel uncomfortable. Well, maybe sometimes poetry should give us that reaction. I rarely have time to properly catch up with those I follow on youtube, but I will be more than happy to try and keep up with what you're creating :)
Cuddling - we to often forget the importance and power of such a simple and self-fulling act. Thank you for reminding us. Another one of your exquisitely written poems. - LynnCarol ;D
I like the tenderness and comprehensiveness of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us all. I'm a mother of little ones, so cuddles certainly count for a lot, too true. I like the variety of images here, too. Yes too many out there "quintessentially broken", a good line, one of many here. Cheers.
@HerAeolianHarp Thank you again for another considerate, generous comment. I hope the cuddles never leave you - I'm starting to think that's the nicest thing you can wish on anyone. :)
It isn't natural for us to live without such human closeness. Caught that photo of you and your son, very sweet. Unfortunately my son, in all his 7 years of maturity has decided hugs are not cool : (
@PassionateMistress Yes, I think you're right. We too easily make something unnatural appear natural - but that's true of so many things about being human. And, yep, that was me and my son when he was born. There's also one of him with his teddy bear! I think that's called a bear hug! :)
Ok so I am in a pickle. Do I like this one more than the others? It's so full of emotion, yet there is a lighthearted air about the whole thing. So heartwarming, yet so much sincerity rings through. Love the way you bring out such passion in your work through narration. Could you please take the time to review a few of mine & give me your feedback. Perhaps leave a comment or two. Thanks.
AngelEyezNation 8 months ago
@AngelEyezNation I'm not sure what to make of this one either, so we're in the same boat there! Sometimes I like it and other times it makes me feel uncomfortable. Well, maybe sometimes poetry should give us that reaction. I rarely have time to properly catch up with those I follow on youtube, but I will be more than happy to try and keep up with what you're creating :)
MrLovePoet 8 months ago
Cuddling - we to often forget the importance and power of such a simple and self-fulling act. Thank you for reminding us. Another one of your exquisitely written poems. - LynnCarol ;D
imlynncarol 1 year ago
@imlynncarol Very kind. Thank you :)
MrLovePoet 1 year ago
I like the tenderness and comprehensiveness of this poem. Thank you for sharing it with us all. I'm a mother of little ones, so cuddles certainly count for a lot, too true. I like the variety of images here, too. Yes too many out there "quintessentially broken", a good line, one of many here. Cheers.
HerAeolianHarp 1 year ago
@HerAeolianHarp Thank you again for another considerate, generous comment. I hope the cuddles never leave you - I'm starting to think that's the nicest thing you can wish on anyone. :)
MrLovePoet 1 year ago
@MrLovePoet Oh thanks so much. Nice indeed. Have a good weekend and thanks for sharing with us all.
HerAeolianHarp 1 year ago
It isn't natural for us to live without such human closeness. Caught that photo of you and your son, very sweet. Unfortunately my son, in all his 7 years of maturity has decided hugs are not cool : (
PassionateMistress 1 year ago
@PassionateMistress Yes, I think you're right. We too easily make something unnatural appear natural - but that's true of so many things about being human. And, yep, that was me and my son when he was born. There's also one of him with his teddy bear! I think that's called a bear hug! :)
MrLovePoet 1 year ago
Love it!
TeresaSemenuk 1 year ago
@TeresaSemenuk Thank you so much, Teresa :)
MrLovePoet 1 year ago
@MrLovePoet You're welcome :)
TeresaSemenuk 1 year ago