interesting, but still needs alot of work. I wouldn't mind helping being one of your critics. But I agree with qwertyuirt137. You need a larger bass note, and a less ear piercing sound. You also need more different sounds going on at once. Its only a 2 layer, trying going for a 3-4 layer. Then see how it sounds. You also want it all to flow well together, this didn't flow too well.
A larger bass note would be nice and a less ear piercing sound for the sound used at the beginning would be nice, the layers should all mash together better too. But overall it is a good attempt, better than I have ever done (all of my feedback is from me being a techno fan and listening to ALOT of techno)
interesting, but still needs alot of work. I wouldn't mind helping being one of your critics. But I agree with qwertyuirt137. You need a larger bass note, and a less ear piercing sound. You also need more different sounds going on at once. Its only a 2 layer, trying going for a 3-4 layer. Then see how it sounds. You also want it all to flow well together, this didn't flow too well.
JaxSoShank 1 year ago
A larger bass note would be nice and a less ear piercing sound for the sound used at the beginning would be nice, the layers should all mash together better too. But overall it is a good attempt, better than I have ever done (all of my feedback is from me being a techno fan and listening to ALOT of techno)
qwertyui137 1 year ago