ok when you land your step everytime your feet touch the ground you have to be sharp and the body curve you have to sorta really curve the body you have to slow down you were sorta rushing it and slow a little down on the body cure nest of wishes in your audition! please take my comment into serious consideration!
Yeah, i edited it to fit the choreograph. I used this dance for my class's dancing team in a competition in school so i want to make it easier and shorter.
my opinion to tell u is that ur dance wasn't powerful enough...shows like u don't wanna do this dance and wanna dance to something else but show some charisma while u dance to show that u could dance without giving up and are very passionate about it so all u need to work up is ur dance but add some power into it and it'll be perfect and watch some SM singers on how they dance on stage and you'll get it kaphish!!(dunno if i spelled it right)
i think you know what you're doing, but you just need to hit your movements harder...like, feel the beat, and just let loose!...and work on your facial expressions, because that's what pulls the audience in! i'm not saying look in a mirror, and practice your facial expressions for every dance move, but do what feels right...don't be scared to just go all out! but keep up the good work! have fun!
your good its just that your kinda too stiff not being offensive but i have friends that wanna be like a pro dancer... and you have to exagerate your moves a bit... and when you dance your moves goes half way then you stop let it flow in you
feel the music, hit the beats ~ don't just think about the moves and, less robot movements!
think of the dance like water, its flowing and together, and sometimes i think the pauses in between could have moves there. i dont know how to explain it well, but i hope i could give you some help. your doing well and your singing is great, ~ so goodluck and fight hard!
I'm one of those!!! trying hard too!! I think you should exaggerate arm movements more or give more power to it. That helps me a lot. More power in arms!! I wish you luck.
ur movements shoud be more flowing not choppy.. cuz rite now ur movements are choppy with no attitude!!~ add some of ur own style and flow more.. take it from someone thts been doing dance for the last 11 years
well first i think you have great body movement, like your flexible and wavvy...but i dont think you can pull this dance off....it seems very slow and weird, keep in mind that dbsk stops and poses because they have to sing and you are only by yourself if you have so stops then you'd need either more people or sing to the song
Sorry if I sound like a total twat, but I've been there and I reccomend not to do this song. Looking at it at first sight, it seems missing and the staff have seen this dance routine as much as they have been to the bathroom. If you want to audition with this song then make your own steps to it.
thanks a lot for all the advices you guys. I'll try to work on my facial expression next time. maybe i was too focus on sharpening the movements and forgot to feel the music.
the movements are very systematic. you have to feel the beat and make the music yours. you got the steps right you just need to get into it and not move like you you're forced to coz thats how it looks like. but other than that it's okay.
good job. but maybe u should put more energy in ur movements. like especially in yunho's solo at the beginning u looked a bit tired or something. but other than that great jobbb.
It looks like you got all the moves down, but you should focus on your facial expression...you look kinda bored,...other than it pretty good. Right now your moves seem a little bit awkward (the feeling it's not there so much), but I'm sure if you practice more your moves well automatically flow with one another. Good job...keep it up lol
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a86575 1 year ago
your have potential just put more oomph into your dancing you look so dead lol
ghostbabe38 1 year ago
Wow! This is really good!
You already sent it in right? Cool~
Hope you get accepted. It would be awesome to have sunbaenim like BoA, DBSK, SNSD...
Do your best!
Himnae! ^^
Sovranita 2 years ago
I like this a lot better than the G-slide video.
luckyluke7100 2 years ago
soo did u audition yet? and how old are u?
TDaddyFrank 2 years ago
i sent the audition vids. And i'm 18.
westlifesgirl 2 years ago
can you sing as well? and did you send this for 2009 global audition or what?
TDaddyFrank 2 years ago
sure, u can listen to my singing in my other vids if u want to. I sent it last year to sm office in Korea
westlifesgirl 2 years ago
wow u sing very nice ! they should have called you back !! btw, where is this place that ur dancing? is it ur home?
TDaddyFrank 2 years ago
Thanks a lot. My house's not that big. It's a dance school in the city i live.
westlifesgirl 2 years ago
and did you get any feedback from sm?
YlingChia10 2 years ago
youre really goodd
but i think if you hit your movements harder itd be a lot better
itsohbaby 3 years ago
ok when you land your step everytime your feet touch the ground you have to be sharp and the body curve you have to sorta really curve the body you have to slow down you were sorta rushing it and slow a little down on the body cure nest of wishes in your audition! please take my comment into serious consideration!
sugarcrazy45 3 years ago
Thanks a lot!!! i'll work more on my dancing.
westlifesgirl 3 years ago
lol no prob. oh and it was best
sugarcrazy45 3 years ago
you need more power... i dont get a feel from your dances
ChunkoErin 3 years ago
Great moves, but your just to smoothe
Put some Pop into it. Then Youll be great
Upload another vid. with some pop
chocobitex3 3 years ago
More charisma, other than that I don't see a problem
but I can't really give you any real strong advice since I like, fail at advice.
Wish you the best at the audition, and if you didn't make it future auditions!
blueaoi3 3 years ago
waaaa
y is it that i think this O version is different from the one i usually listen to?!!
im confusssed!!!!!!!
7JaeJez7 3 years ago
Yeah, i edited it to fit the choreograph. I used this dance for my class's dancing team in a competition in school so i want to make it easier and shorter.
westlifesgirl 3 years ago
i think it's the japanese version
aznxjello 3 years ago
my opinion to tell u is that ur dance wasn't powerful enough...shows like u don't wanna do this dance and wanna dance to something else but show some charisma while u dance to show that u could dance without giving up and are very passionate about it so all u need to work up is ur dance but add some power into it and it'll be perfect and watch some SM singers on how they dance on stage and you'll get it kaphish!!(dunno if i spelled it right)
AndyPark79 3 years ago 3
Thanks a lot for the comment. I love dancing a lot and want to dance well but im really not a born dancer. Gotta have to work hard.
westlifesgirl 3 years ago
i think you know what you're doing, but you just need to hit your movements harder...like, feel the beat, and just let loose!...and work on your facial expressions, because that's what pulls the audience in! i'm not saying look in a mirror, and practice your facial expressions for every dance move, but do what feels right...don't be scared to just go all out! but keep up the good work! have fun!
kazoua2008 3 years ago 2
Energyyyy
CookieFridays 3 years ago
It was good, but I recommend you not to use this at the Audition.
yoOshenE 3 years ago
yu need to hit the moves harder.
ravingchild 3 years ago
your good its just that your kinda too stiff not being offensive but i have friends that wanna be like a pro dancer... and you have to exagerate your moves a bit... and when you dance your moves goes half way then you stop let it flow in you
x3gowoon 3 years ago
i'm wondering where you get this kind of place..
cecilialoveskoreans 3 years ago 3
way to slow no passion.
practice
scottjung10 3 years ago
I think it's good~ just a bit..robotic, and a bit rushed~ keep it up!! :D
SapphireDew 3 years ago
feel the music, hit the beats ~ don't just think about the moves and, less robot movements!
think of the dance like water, its flowing and together, and sometimes i think the pauses in between could have moves there. i dont know how to explain it well, but i hope i could give you some help. your doing well and your singing is great, ~ so goodluck and fight hard!
strmuffin 3 years ago
thanks a lot!!!^-^
westlifesgirl 3 years ago
great choreo
but u need passion . fire. power.
KKJxSTAR 3 years ago
there's nothing that has the wow factor in it but good job :)
Jello557 3 years ago
be more energetic... I guess
ongsans 3 years ago
get more power...
by looking, you kinda look like a ballerina trying to dance hip hop.....
but i bet you can get more power and attitude...
wish you luck!!!
and try to express your self more. :)
icejeon 3 years ago
I'm one of those!!! trying hard too!! I think you should exaggerate arm movements more or give more power to it. That helps me a lot. More power in arms!! I wish you luck.
PinkNancy 3 years ago
i couldn't agree more...xD
yequanmei 3 years ago
hahahahha
ok
goodluck?!
hijeon 3 years ago
ur movements shoud be more flowing not choppy.. cuz rite now ur movements are choppy with no attitude!!~ add some of ur own style and flow more.. take it from someone thts been doing dance for the last 11 years
smexiivanilla555 3 years ago
Thanks for the advice!I'll definitely take into heart what you said 'cause i'm just a new comer in dancing^-^
westlifesgirl 3 years ago
well first i think you have great body movement, like your flexible and wavvy...but i dont think you can pull this dance off....it seems very slow and weird, keep in mind that dbsk stops and poses because they have to sing and you are only by yourself if you have so stops then you'd need either more people or sing to the song
victastic92 3 years ago
Sorry if I sound like a total twat, but I've been there and I reccomend not to do this song. Looking at it at first sight, it seems missing and the staff have seen this dance routine as much as they have been to the bathroom. If you want to audition with this song then make your own steps to it.
Eimin 3 years ago
hey, gud job !!! jia you ok ? nothing acquires excellence without constant practise - quote from pride and prejudices
arihyoshi99 3 years ago
thanks a lot for all the advices you guys. I'll try to work on my facial expression next time. maybe i was too focus on sharpening the movements and forgot to feel the music.
westlifesgirl 3 years ago
the movements are very systematic. you have to feel the beat and make the music yours. you got the steps right you just need to get into it and not move like you you're forced to coz thats how it looks like. but other than that it's okay.
roxieanonymous 3 years ago
make your body more flow-ey and make the moves tight
supernameisbob 3 years ago
throw your body into it... it helps a lot with the feel.
cmeswim08 3 years ago
good job. but maybe u should put more energy in ur movements. like especially in yunho's solo at the beginning u looked a bit tired or something. but other than that great jobbb.
roddickacelove 3 years ago
It looks like you got all the moves down, but you should focus on your facial expression...you look kinda bored,...other than it pretty good. Right now your moves seem a little bit awkward (the feeling it's not there so much), but I'm sure if you practice more your moves well automatically flow with one another. Good job...keep it up lol
lilthingamajigs90 3 years ago