Telemann. Fantasie for violin solo No.1 (I & II)

[Skywalker2D]

will. Oh and when you go from the first to the second movement, there really (in my opinion) shouldn't be a pause at all. Go right into it. You noticed that your audience didn't know you weren't done yet. Although a sophistacated crowd in a professional performance knows not to appluad until the end of the performance, that's not the case in an everyday crowd (most people don't know - and some don't care, they want to appluad when they are impressed). Keep playing and good luck in your playing!!

[AdeliaGabyashi]

@Skywalker2D thank you:)

[Skywalker2D]

way consistantly. Also that last movement in the peice is short and you should go ahead an memorize it. You can't really say you know the piece until you memorized the whole thing. And don't forget to replay the allegro one more time after the third movement (it's how it was written). I must comment that your playing is smooth and your chords come accross wonderfully. But do your best to get an interpretation that is unique and wonderful to you. Rule of thumb is if you don't enjoy it, no one...

[Skywalker2D]

so don't change a thing there. However, you're rushing that piece in certain spots in the second movement. Which is common for all violinists because he love to play fast. Be careful there. Also, you're not playing measures 13, 14, and 15 correctly. There's a mark on the 4th note in every measure to play it shorter than the others (the proper name of that mark escapes me right now). It givees the piece nice character and it's important to maintain that. Be sure to hold your instrument in one ...

[Skywalker2D]

So I've been a violinist for a little over 10 years now (just so you can take my comments with some credibility). So overall, I did like your piece, but I do have a couple points of constructive criticism for you. I have to agree that the hair is distracting, but that's because you're moving around like crazy on stage. Every soloist moves maybe slightly, but not like that. It's way overdone and it's negatively wasting useful energy you could be using on your instrument. Your vibrato is great,...

[PwnyWarfare]

There are so many absolutely beautiful elements to your playing! The vibrato is modern and I enjoy how you added it. Here's my old-fashioned criticism. Your hair, I think perhaps, your hair band broke back stage and you had no choice but to perform with your hair forming that wall between you and your listeners. For me, the wall of hair covering your face was distracting.

[AdeliaGabyashi]

@PwnyWarfare thank you! :) and yup, i have broken my hair band right before going on stage..unfortunately.

[AdeliaGabyashi]

@CosplayMonkey Thank YOU for your comment:)

[nexviper223]

Adelia,Youre so great!

[krumbine]

brilliantly done! great job!

[AdeliaGabyashi]

thank you:)

[hellfishgrampa]

great job, well done, that sounds very professional. I miss the the third part of the fantasia no. 1 ...

one thing: maybe you could think about less using the vibrato to make the sound but more using your body and the violin to create a wonderful sound. this one was made in the time of baroque. they don't even had vibrato but they had a great sound too. just think about it.

[RitchieBrinckmore]

I don't personally think she's overusing the vibrato. :)

Really well played!

[MercifulMe]

@RitchieBrinckmore I do think that in modern standards her vibrato is great... although it is not in baroque practice.