Cry on my shoulder, I'm a [[friend]] - Part 1

[merciibooboo]

this is sooo nice please make it a story

[hotchicz209]

omgomgomgomgomg.....she was raped......0.o

[hotchicz209]

GREAT!!! but its kinda confusing

[demilovatoizamazing]

when i was first starting to read i was like.. WTF!?! good horror movie (: hahah

[x8xKissMeQuickx8x]

thats awsome i subbed nd rated cud yuh sub me bak nd my collab channel videos coming soon i love jemi storys i juz started one on this channel let me no wat yuh think ??

xxx

[jiley55]

you make really good jemi stories .. like "burning desire" that was a good one , you should make a sequel for that .. ! but yeah this is one sounds really good :)

[NatisCML]

AWESOME!!!! :D

sure great as the others!!!! ;D

dude, you're an awesome writter

[kookiegirl111]

wow!

this is amazing!!!

Sad.... but amazing!

awsome.... and amazing!

I wish it was longer so i could read more.... but STILL amazing!

Haha! Its just amazing..!!

I'm trying to think what happend next,,, Hmmm I wonder if its right....

BUT I BET ITS AMAZING!!!1

Haha!

P.s I said amazing SEVEN times in this comment :O x

[JemzforJemi]

AWSOMNESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!­!

one of the best jemi storys i have read.

Great job dude!

[anonymouslypopular]

i think u make one of the best jemi stories in youtube!! Loved it!! =) One thing i'm questioning right now is the blood. 0.o

[MustBeLove15]

aww thanks so much =D

(that made my day)

&

as for the blood...well.. your just going to have to wait and find out>;] haha

[ssechman]

wow this is so good!!!