Crappy and happy? Weak rhymes. The content is cliché, and so are the rhymes. Congratulations, you have written a poem that’s been written over 1000 times and has been played as mainstream music for decades.
Don’t you dare have the narcissism to call this “the best poem ever.” I’m sure you’re just a pathetic 13 year old who wants to die over some girl who has never talked to you. You won’t really die; in fact, I know you’re reading this right now. Fuck you, man. You don’t understand anything.
@seikster please dude....yeah its a bad and very traditional poem but thats no reason to say Fuck You and tell him he doesnt know anything...yeah, its definetly not the best poem ever but calm down please. Im thirteen and considered more talented than most adults at poetry. just cuz ur thirteen doesnt mean u cant have a talent just cuz ur young. so please, be quiet.
@seikster I agree with what you've said about the poem being cliched etc but you haven't restricted yourself to a critique, you've dished out abuse as well. Why do that?
U suck...
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patricia2011qP9l1t3X 9 months ago
God not real and the songs dumb but i like the poem!
Love1Honey100 10 months ago
this is better,
For love is joy, the love has been given Jesus don't let it pass you Love is patient it is waiting for you God is waiting.
Jorge12345801 1 year ago
that was a nice poem and i love pie :)
mrawsome582 1 year ago
Crappy and happy? Weak rhymes. The content is cliché, and so are the rhymes. Congratulations, you have written a poem that’s been written over 1000 times and has been played as mainstream music for decades.
Don’t you dare have the narcissism to call this “the best poem ever.” I’m sure you’re just a pathetic 13 year old who wants to die over some girl who has never talked to you. You won’t really die; in fact, I know you’re reading this right now. Fuck you, man. You don’t understand anything.
seikster 1 year ago
@seikster please dude....yeah its a bad and very traditional poem but thats no reason to say Fuck You and tell him he doesnt know anything...yeah, its definetly not the best poem ever but calm down please. Im thirteen and considered more talented than most adults at poetry. just cuz ur thirteen doesnt mean u cant have a talent just cuz ur young. so please, be quiet.
RylandSD101 8 months ago
@seikster I agree with what you've said about the poem being cliched etc but you haven't restricted yourself to a critique, you've dished out abuse as well. Why do that?
DwiteTheSpriteKnight 3 months ago
not my kind of poem
theghaz 1 year ago
I LIKE PIE! lol
guitarmania890 2 years ago
lol nice poem XD
shani1594 2 years ago
Such Touching Words, till i like pie
IGirl94 2 years ago
love it
1zaq2xsw3cde4vfr5bgt 2 years ago
I didnt bother lookin at the vid, but i can sense it was awesome, poetry is rubbish if it doesnt come from the heart.
MrEmoRish 2 years ago
BEAUTIFULL T_T
xjman12 2 years ago