hey everyone ive just started a Machinima series check it out on my channel and if you have any constructive criticism that would be helpful and if you like please thumbs up this comment.
damn.............I was in the middle of making a machinima called "Delta Squad" and then I watched this & I was just done due 2 how good it was Good Job :)
@HumanRazor117 There isn't anyone :), It ia juat the end of the sniper that you are seeing, I know this becuse i only have 2 controllers and that was an offline shoot.
the sparyans can hear each other when they get assassinated and the on spartan went in front of one and the other saw him why dint he do anything besides stand there
@RedGasFilms Because they Were accepting of there fate and did not do anything to prevent it, better than them turning around and shooting hopelessly like amniacs, and they are not nspartans they are ODST's...
@SuperbMac1 Yeah its my voice and i only am doing it becuase i din't have allot of VA's when i started this and i can't really change a characters voice halfway through. But soon you onw't have to listen to it any longer, a big twist is coming.
@sandahi666 Mate first off i can barely understand what youjust typed, and secondly i would appreciate is you gave your view of the overall video, thirdly i could not shout because there were no shouting scenes in this movie, so could you please expalin what you mean...
@hybridfeeder I prefere spartan seconds, it is my film and therefore my interpretation of the halo universe so i would appreciate if you shut up because i can call it what i want.
@WILLYLONGBALLS Yes you cann be in. But just be patient, i dont spend all my time checking comments. Send ME a friend request my gt is dont shoooot me
@WILLYLONGBALLS what is your GT so then i can accept you, buti haven't got any new Friend requests recently. if your gt is something like willylonballs then i dont have a freind reqest from you, it might have to be in capitals. because on other people's friends list my request is in capitals so try both of these. (not including speech marks).
@Gamer887 no you beg i am english you silly fuck. Honestly i AM english, i play the guy who speakls first. What you think all english people sound the same. You bloody retard, why would i lie about being english. Don't call me a muppet when you are clearly wrong and now you look like a complete fail. Some advice. Don't think that your clever again
@smyile117 I am quiet clever though, and I don't know why would you lie about being English? How can I look like a complete fail as you have stated if I have only stated I do not believe you are from England, cause I know I am and I would believe you were a tourist from America if I heard you speak!, I lived at the Covent Garden apartment complex on St Giles High Street, Greater London WC2H 8LW, United Kingdom, next to The Intrepid Fox
@Gamer887 You haven't 'just stated that you o not belive i am form england'. You insulted me, calling me a 'Muppet' when i told a blantent truth, which irritated me, which is why i insulted your intellegence, and i apologize for that. But i guarrentee you that i am fomr england, it is just that your comment did not have real relevance to the video and you insulted me so i became agitated
@Gamer887 and so technically i cant have a "poor accent" because my ACCENT IS CORRECT AND I HAVE LIVED IN KENT MY WHOLE LIFE NOT LONDON YOU FAIL But anway people from kent and london sound the same. Also what do you mean you moved "form" london. Do you mean from. Do you not live in england. Because if you don't your not really at liberty to comment are you.
@smyile117 Sorry mate, looking back at my first comment it war rude, and I apologize for that, lets just call it even and put all that nonsense behind us, I shouldn't have called you a Muppet or doubted you were from England either, so I also apologize for those
@Gamer887 Are you fucking retarded I AM ENGLISH. Why do people always ask retared questions. Are you that nieve, why would i imitate a british accent? surely if i wasn't british i would get a british accent. your real smart now arn't you. Even look at my profile im from the UK. How nare you so ignorant. and what a pointless comment.
@terminator007ify ermm yeah about that... Its my film so it dosen't have to be set in the exact halo universe, i can do what i want with it... "dumb ass". I don't know why you have to curse. Is your vocabulary that limited.
@stickpivot1000 no one even attempted a scottish accent so i dont know what you are talking about. I would prefere if you commented on the overall quality of the video :)
@smyile117 Dude, i wansnt commenting on your video about the spelling fail, i was commenting about stick pivots spelling of scottish 'acsent' when he was insulting you, you try to back a guy up and this is what ya get, oh well, your distressed badger comment at least gave me a laugh
Nice work, bro. I couldn't get so much of a story out of this Machinims, but I guess it's one of those where you have to watch since episode one. The thing I didn't like was the Falcon Pilots. I mean around 3:10, where they drop them off, the Falcon keeps on moving up and down. And a Falcon isn't so post to touch the floor in an combat drop-off. Other than that, good! 4/5
Amazing how those other odst's didn't even realise that their friends..are in pain and not to turn around to check it out ? btw its a good machinima 5 stars :D
wait, so half the scenes we recorded are in act one but it just turns out we recorded act 2 first hmmm interesting, also when it comes down to it whoever shot that banshee is a great shot
Good! Overall great camera angles. Try to use diffrent music instead on the Halo Reach sound track. Work on the acting aswell. The acting didnt sound like it was the real\deal. I shall give it 3 stars!!! =)
@MrGeneralJB i did use the halo 3 soundtrack and the halo wars sounsdtrack. But using other music could result in unwanted copyright spam on my video. I agrre the acting wasn't completely up to scratch. i will work on it and get it fixed for the next episode.
Sorry for picking on you a bit but 2558 is 6 years after the Human-Covenant war finished
Otherwise, nice vid
WhywouldItypethis 1 day ago
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hey everyone ive just started a Machinima series check it out on my channel and if you have any constructive criticism that would be helpful and if you like please thumbs up this comment.
ManhuntFTW 3 months ago
Part 6 coming soon
smyile117 5 months ago
its nice to see Brits doin Machinima but that is one god awful accent :/
Drotchel 6 months ago
@Drotchel I should jjust use my normal voice really
smyile117 6 months ago
lol im the guard on the right at 2:05 :)
cafc543 7 months ago
Its spelled sense..
Aal381 7 months ago
damn.............I was in the middle of making a machinima called "Delta Squad" and then I watched this & I was just done due 2 how good it was Good Job :)
BloodyAces4 7 months ago
dude you are great better then all those faggots man u guys have good falcon skills
you fly iun formatioon add me my name is eccentricthread
can i please be in your next videos please
mompex35 7 months ago
@mompex35 hey man sure you can be in my next vid, just send me your gamertag in a PM, thnaks for the comment mate.
smyile117 7 months ago
@mompex35 lolz i know the falcon piloting was crap
smyile117 7 months ago
dude you are great better then all those faggots man u guys have good falcon skills
you fly iun formatioon
mompex35 7 months ago
For the community out there i would like to say that anyone who needs extra people in videos or machinimas i will gladly help out.
my GT is XxSIGNITxX
xXxSIGNITxXx 7 months ago
EPIC !! I GOT THE ELITE CLOSE UP :o
xboxlive887 7 months ago
bad
dragonball98ful 7 months ago
@dragonball98ful you call my stuff bad, take a look at your videos, they are appauling and possibly the least funny things i have ever witnessed.
smyile117 7 months ago
How did you make the guys patroling stand like that?
jmarkines 8 months ago
i see sum1 in the background at 5:23 left side
HumanRazor117 8 months ago
@HumanRazor117 There isn't anyone :), It ia juat the end of the sniper that you are seeing, I know this becuse i only have 2 controllers and that was an offline shoot.
smyile117 8 months ago
@smyile117 ya i notice after i kept watchin it my mistake lol
HumanRazor117 8 months ago
@HumanRazor117 lol at least you are paying attention to the video, thanks for the comment
smyile117 7 months ago
@smyile117 glad to help : )
HumanRazor117 7 months ago
i love halo very good cant what for the ep5
kirwan2876 8 months ago
make the 5 eps plz it is awwwwwsome
jaydizzle59 8 months ago
@jaydizzle59 Haha good news, episode 5 will be out at the latest By next weekend
smyile117 8 months ago
Legendary!
Wormleton 8 months ago
that was awsome
12cheesebomber 8 months ago
those soldiers tht died gave it all they've got
AlphaSquadron10 9 months ago
the sparyans can hear each other when they get assassinated and the on spartan went in front of one and the other saw him why dint he do anything besides stand there
RedGasFilms 10 months ago
@RedGasFilms Because they Were accepting of there fate and did not do anything to prevent it, better than them turning around and shooting hopelessly like amniacs, and they are not nspartans they are ODST's...
smyile117 10 months ago
i dont mean to offend you but can you get a new guy for the lead character i hate that guys voice
SuperbMac1 10 months ago
@SuperbMac1 Yeah its my voice and i only am doing it becuase i din't have allot of VA's when i started this and i can't really change a characters voice halfway through. But soon you onw't have to listen to it any longer, a big twist is coming.
smyile117 10 months ago
check out my infection video its good!
MORTALCHAINSAW100 11 months ago
I think the film was good plz I really wanna be in any of your films except i cant coz my xbox live ran out so i cant D=
stealthdude1010 11 months ago
They're not called spartan-seconds, they're called Spartan twos.
SithFTW4072 11 months ago
@SithFTW4072 seconds sounds better
smyile117 11 months ago
@smyile117 dude if ur gonna yell for a sressing scene fuckin doin when u whisper its fuckin stupid just go all out
sandahi666 10 months ago
@sandahi666 Mate first off i can barely understand what youjust typed, and secondly i would appreciate is you gave your view of the overall video, thirdly i could not shout because there were no shouting scenes in this movie, so could you please expalin what you mean...
smyile117 10 months ago
@smyile117 Nah, spartan twos.
hybridfeeder 10 months ago
@hybridfeeder I prefere spartan seconds, it is my film and therefore my interpretation of the halo universe so i would appreciate if you shut up because i can call it what i want.
smyile117 10 months ago
@smyile117
Okay... calm down... I meant no offence.
hybridfeeder 10 months ago
@hybridfeeder sorry i get aggitated lol
smyile117 10 months ago
Guys i would like tp apologize to my comments that have retaliated against negative comments. I am on a very ba year, don't think badly of me.
smyile117 1 year ago
BEST HALO REACH WAR EVER
WILLYLONGBALLS 1 year ago
CAN I BE IN UR VIDS IM ALSO FROM UK MY NAME IS WILLYxLONBALLS
WILLYLONGBALLS 1 year ago
@WILLYLONGBALLS Yes you cann be in. But just be patient, i dont spend all my time checking comments. Send ME a friend request my gt is dont shoooot me
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 hey i sent dont shoot me a frend request but he did not add me plzzzz reply .
WILLYLONGBALLS 1 year ago
@WILLYLONGBALLS what is your GT so then i can accept you, buti haven't got any new Friend requests recently. if your gt is something like willylonballs then i dont have a freind reqest from you, it might have to be in capitals. because on other people's friends list my request is in capitals so try both of these. (not including speech marks).
"dont shoooot me"
"DONT SHOOOOT ME"
with the spaces.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 yeah i posted on to but it just keeps dissapering
biggs4744 1 year ago
@smyile117 your friends list is full
biggs4744 1 year ago
@biggs4744 I will free up space ASAP
smyile117 1 year ago
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biggs4744 1 year ago
@smyile117 just send a friend request to Idealbiggs4744 and i will accept it on saturday
biggs4744 1 year ago
@smyile117 i sent you one just accept it is Idealbiggs4744
biggs4744 11 months ago
nice vids i wish i could be in
biggs4744 1 year ago
@biggs4744 You can, just send a freind request to dont shoooot me
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 alright when do we start
biggs4744 1 year ago
@smyile117 ill send you one by today
biggs4744 1 year ago
u said i could be in a vid.. meh user is mexboison
vulcomproductions 1 year ago
@vulcomproductions I am busy at the moment, it takes time for me to add
smyile117 1 year ago
the zealot has a dmr on his back lol
GruntFishProductions 1 year ago
Ooh, a good machinima. Glad your from the UK :)
theglitcharmy 1 year ago 2
@theglitcharmy Thanks man :)
smyile117 1 year ago
WHY DOES EVERYONE ALWAYS IMITATE ENGLISH ACCENTS?!!
Gamer887 1 year ago
@Gamer887 Are you fucking retarded I AM ENGLISH. Why do people always ask retared questions. Are you that nieve, why would i imitate a briti
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 RUBBISH! I moved form London myself and that is the poorest accent I've heard you muppet!
Gamer887 1 year ago
@Gamer887 no you beg i am english you silly fuck. Honestly i AM english, i play the guy who speakls first. What you think all english people sound the same. You bloody retard, why would i lie about being english. Don't call me a muppet when you are clearly wrong and now you look like a complete fail. Some advice. Don't think that your clever again
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 I am quiet clever though, and I don't know why would you lie about being English? How can I look like a complete fail as you have stated if I have only stated I do not believe you are from England, cause I know I am and I would believe you were a tourist from America if I heard you speak!, I lived at the Covent Garden apartment complex on St Giles High Street, Greater London WC2H 8LW, United Kingdom, next to The Intrepid Fox
Gamer887 1 year ago
@Gamer887 You haven't 'just stated that you o not belive i am form england'. You insulted me, calling me a 'Muppet' when i told a blantent truth, which irritated me, which is why i insulted your intellegence, and i apologize for that. But i guarrentee you that i am fomr england, it is just that your comment did not have real relevance to the video and you insulted me so i became agitated
smyile117 1 year ago
@Gamer887 and so technically i cant have a "poor accent" because my ACCENT IS CORRECT AND I HAVE LIVED IN KENT MY WHOLE LIFE NOT LONDON YOU FAIL But anway people from kent and london sound the same. Also what do you mean you moved "form" london. Do you mean from. Do you not live in england. Because if you don't your not really at liberty to comment are you.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 Sorry mate, looking back at my first comment it war rude, and I apologize for that, lets just call it even and put all that nonsense behind us, I shouldn't have called you a Muppet or doubted you were from England either, so I also apologize for those
Gamer887 1 year ago
@Gamer887 Are you fucking retarded I AM ENGLISH. Why do people always ask retared questions. Are you that nieve, why would i imitate a british accent? surely if i wasn't british i would get a british accent. your real smart now arn't you. Even look at my profile im from the UK. How nare you so ignorant. and what a pointless comment.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 a halo machinima...is it okay for me to hug you?
PERSONAfan01 1 year ago
Your video keeps stopping in places, Take extra care for the next episode. Also, your voice acting is a little flat.
Aside from that, you got some great ideas! I enjoyed your show!
The screenplay is good, the writings solid.
And somebody needs to kill that Elite Ultra
Ginger0spark 1 year ago
@Ginger0spark he got away for stry purposes. to be continued lol
smyile117 1 year ago
elite: get the green one
elite2: with one there all green
elite: idk i just want to sound cool
elite2: these spartans are dumb they dint even know we killed them hell yeah
chnummesri 1 year ago
Nice vid dude, very epic.
obamasucksblackcock1 1 year ago
Dude this is six years after the war is over dumb ass
terminator007ify 1 year ago
@terminator007ify ermm yeah about that... Its my film so it dosen't have to be set in the exact halo universe, i can do what i want with it... "dumb ass". I don't know why you have to curse. Is your vocabulary that limited.
smyile117 1 year ago 8
scottish acsent fail
stickpivot1000 1 year ago
@stickpivot1000 no one even attempted a scottish accent so i dont know what you are talking about. I would prefere if you commented on the overall quality of the video :)
smyile117 1 year ago
@stickpivot1000 more like spelling fail
MrBday02 1 year ago
@MrBday02 hmm i said i failed in the description and said not to comment on it. You have less brain cells than a mildly distressed badger.
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 Dude, i wansnt commenting on your video about the spelling fail, i was commenting about stick pivots spelling of scottish 'acsent' when he was insulting you, you try to back a guy up and this is what ya get, oh well, your distressed badger comment at least gave me a laugh
MrBday02 1 year ago
@MrBday02 that is noramlly what it is intended to do :) Sorry i didn't relise what you were refering to.
smyile117 1 year ago
Nice work, bro. I couldn't get so much of a story out of this Machinims, but I guess it's one of those where you have to watch since episode one. The thing I didn't like was the Falcon Pilots. I mean around 3:10, where they drop them off, the Falcon keeps on moving up and down. And a Falcon isn't so post to touch the floor in an combat drop-off. Other than that, good! 4/5
GlobalProductions7 1 year ago
hey i would like to help out with the vids
KeenFolk1 1 year ago
Amazing how those other odst's didn't even realise that their friends..are in pain and not to turn around to check it out ? btw its a good machinima 5 stars :D
FirstNooBy 1 year ago
When is act one gonna come out?
latale9811 1 year ago
I loved your work I would be honored to join your production studio. Gamertag: RoundishBrett.
superbloody3 1 year ago
@superbloody3 I will add u asap
smyile117 1 year ago
god vid if you need any actors in the next one i would be gad to help.
COMMANDO933 1 year ago
pretty nice machinima. not too bad. if you need an extra though, hit me up. my gamertag is: offbeatguy
Only if you want me to be a puppet and what not though.
anotherblueskittle 1 year ago
wait, so half the scenes we recorded are in act one but it just turns out we recorded act 2 first hmmm interesting, also when it comes down to it whoever shot that banshee is a great shot
zelda1russell 1 year ago
@zelda1russell when I say we I mean in general everyone like crazy gunz and stuff
zelda1russell 1 year ago
This is a nice video
latale9811 1 year ago
very nice i like it
shadowpredator100 1 year ago
hey my gammertag is COMMANDO DD10 i will glady puppet fr u!
commandoproductions6 1 year ago
Hey the voices came out nice! You're very good at vocal editing:)
TheRougeHawksClan 1 year ago
wheres infiltration part 3?
fear741 1 year ago
Good! Overall great camera angles. Try to use diffrent music instead on the Halo Reach sound track. Work on the acting aswell. The acting didnt sound like it was the real\deal. I shall give it 3 stars!!! =)
MrGeneralJB 1 year ago
@MrGeneralJB i did use the halo 3 soundtrack and the halo wars sounsdtrack. But using other music could result in unwanted copyright spam on my video. I agrre the acting wasn't completely up to scratch. i will work on it and get it fixed for the next episode.
smyile117 1 year ago
Amazing,Greatest Machinima Ever
justawsome9 1 year ago
@GammaShardStudios cheers
smyile117 1 year ago
@TheKewlHat i think
smyile117 1 year ago
@TheKewlHat thanks man i only did the third person thing once.
smyile117 1 year ago
looks great nice job
TheTacticalJoe 1 year ago
@TheTacticalJoe cheers
smyile117 1 year ago
@smyile117 hell yeah now this was worth the wait it was 300 out of 290
MrCodmw223 1 year ago
omgbbq
dimlightcreations 1 year ago