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[xx0s0xx]

A Load Of Chips and Burgers Marching Playing Drums Holding Up Banners Saying Save Our Lives Dont Eat Us. and the some big person comes along and picks up a burger and takes a bite and puts some tomato ketchup on it so it looks lyk blud and the burger is lyk screaming but ovbiously the human cant hear it and the other chips and burgers are just starring in amazment.

Lol Totally Random

[SarahWillBeSkinny]

It's prolly too late to comment on this video cuz the song is prolly already made! LOL But to me, I can see an inner struggle... Fighting against old ways, and how I've lived my life up until this point... fighting against anything trying to bring me down. I see myself in a battle... Marching proudly at my acheivements to be a better me.

[fatgirlslimin08]

it sounds like chocolate chip cookies marching to me :)

[w8loss4me]

reminds me of the journey that I'm on...I visualize myself walking down this road into the unknown. I have expectations and worries, and yet I'm compelled to keep moving forward.

[shrinkingJanuary]

a journey to break through the negative. Its up beat so it reminds me of all the hateful people trying to bring one down, but you get through it and break out of the negative norms of today. That's my thought

[YogiUToo]

How about the desire to die to self, and become new again...maybe an act or having the power of making one's own choices and decisions, even though others are skeptical of those decisions. Stepping out of yourself, to become who you really are? I don't know, that's what I hear though....very, very nice! You've really got something there!

[Fabydee]

Made me think of a quest or search & one that has a deadline, there is a sort of frantic need to attain or reach the answers before it's too late! very interesting question though I think it made me go to a place within myself I don't go to often enough... Fab

[imaswtgrl]

nice beat, looking forward to the lyrics you decide to use. Sorry, this is not my specialty at all!!!!!!!!!! I love listening to music, my brain doesn't make it up!

[Opendoors08]

definately sounds like a journey...and hey we need a theme song for our meet and greet in S.C. :) Amy

[margodropshercargo]

I feel like this song is about a journey. In the beginning, it is full of fear, but then you become bolder and stronger and more assured of yourself, walking in victory, with your head high. Great job!

[peterrabbit31]

hey there,

thanks for this comment. I agree, i feel it's a journey. i like how you mentioned fear. a journey and struggle of fear, moving forward. Initially what came to mind when i wrote the different music parts was Jennifer Hudson's mom and brother tragically being killed. The beat is representation of hip-hop, i can see the high loop being fear, the picked strings being the struggle, the organ representing solace from the tragedy of death.

man i'm deep...lol. kidding

[w00dw0rm]

I think it should be about your life :)

[sixxmoongirl]

"I know it´s hard, i know it´s tough, but there´s a price we must pay off, sometimes you´re down, sometimes you´re up, but it´s the road that lead you up, i know the fight as right as you, but there´s one thing, you must go on...a new beginning is comming soon, a brand new life only for you, this is your time, this is your turn to try it hard and live it all, maybe you´re scared for the unknown, but trust me you´ll see the light" this came up to me, cheers! Dianna.

[peterrabbit31]

hey dianna,

you got some sick rhymes there. that's awesome. i might just enlist your help when i start writing the verses for this.

[sixxmoongirl]

hey! thanx! anytime!!! actually it´s the first time that i write some rhymes, and i think it´s cool, i will be amazed if some of this words help you to build a song!!!!

[1cruisedirector]

I see the fight and struggle of our heaviest weight and coming to terms of how we got there and how to get out.The march of goal weight and the battle within.Diana

[peterrabbit31]

hey diana, thanks for this. i think you're feeling what it's saying. what's awesome is without words there's still a story being told and people are feeling it. that's what a song should be.

[bratlee2u]

Out of the darkness into the light. I have wasted too much time. Time to forgive and time to move on . . . That is what comes to my mind. Sorry, I am not very creative. :) Good beats though, Myranda.

[peterrabbit31]

you got a kickin' verse there. i might have to steal it from you...lol.

[Journey2betrhealth]

Coming out of darkness into the light...that's what I get.

Donna:)

[peterrabbit31]

thanks Donna, today i listened to it for about 2 hours over and over again while driving (that's where i get my ideas) and that concept kept coming up. the song is talking.

[ThatzHotxoxo]

sounds like a story about rebirth, something fresh and new. Like an awakening an epiphany, and now i'm out of adjectives..thats what i hear. :) - Becca

[peterrabbit31]

thanks becca, i can hear that too. i think we're moving in the right direction.

[mammabeardee]

Ok, I know Im way off base here, but it puts me in mind of that song Gangster's Paradise :)

[peterrabbit31]

in my mind there was something resembling something like that as well.

[schnauzerwoman2]

It sounds like a dance off , or strip tease song. Yeah baby.

[peterrabbit31]

you know i played this song while i was dancing on the pole last night..lol. big tips

[Journey2betrhealth]

Okay well I will have to listen to it again cuz once you said, "close your eyes" I didn't see what else you said, hehehe!

Donna:)

[watchmegetskinny]

that has to be the funniest comment I EVER read on youtube!

[peterrabbit31]

lol... thats funny.

[mrgranda]

The kids think it sounds a bit like Napolean Dynamite...lol I agree with zipchick, I think it sounds like a battle of some sort only I can see it showing the life of someone who lives in a bad neighborhood or somewhere like L.A. or Ghetto Nashville, and they are driving down the main strip showing the streets and what they have to endure as another faceless, nameless person...no sound just music...it's weird..you get me? Almost like a documentary clip..remember that homeless lady on the bench?

[zipchick]

It makes me think of the drums that are played before a battlewhether it is a battle against prejudice, WLS folks taking their lives back, or spiritual warfare. Even the drums that are played after a battle is won like a victory dance. Hmmmmm lets see if that matches what you hear! zippy

[sjam2007]

aww i totaly also thought something was going to jumpo out!

[mermiesmom]

Ok Miranda...I have to say you were really freaking me out here. I just had the feeling that this was one of those videos where you are watching a normal screen and then something scary jumps out at you!! Sorry I felt like that about your song! Just the whole "turn up your speakers" thing is always the clue that someone is about to scare the poop out of me...plus it is close to Halloween :) HaHa! Anyway, I'll watch it again and I won't be scared this time! Judy :)

[peterrabbit31]

lol... thats funny. i didnt think of that.

[ThatzHotxoxo]

Thats what i thought too!! haha - Becca