That's not one song, that's an oratorio. If ever a song needed a decent arranger, it's this one because it's a huge drama but one guitar isn't quite enough to bring out its...um, essence. I think. But who am I? Some idiot. Never mind, keep it up, love your stuff.
this is really quite good...creative...original...can't put a tag on it...hmmmm...her heart is gone...the ending made me laugh for real!! Five of those star thingies...sub...way to go!!!
Randy...yeah I know...all my UK friends get a great big chuckle...but is really is my name...
No, I really like it, I don't think its stale. A lot of Laura's songs cover different topics and that keeps it interesting. (I'm merely pointing out that, indeed, that DOES keep it interesting.) I really like the Hangman song because it branches out beyond the usual tropes.
The lyrics on this song are pretty good, but there are a couple things you can do to keep from getting stale. 1. Keep a notebook(which you probably do already). 2. Be observant of the way other people act. 3. Read fun books that will spark your imagination.
I've been watching videos of the newest Arctic Monkeys songs, and they are colorful and filled with great images and metaphors that keep things interesting, even two albums after the first "observations about Sheffield punks" album.
It seems like this comment should be for someone else. Who is getting stale, or hasn't had their imagination sparked? Is it the person that has lots of original songs and videos, or you, the person that has none? I'm not sure what the Arctic Monkeys have to do with anything they are a group, not a solo artist. 1. Just keep writing your novel.
Excellent melody, Laura. I especially like the little guitar parts before some of the lyrics. All the changes in tempo keep things so interesting and really engage the listener. Vocally you give a lesson in phrasing and tone...
when are you coming to the states. I want to see your gift of music live. Or at least put up a song everyday so I can get my fix. Or just keep doing what you're doing cause this song is great and you know it!
do it soon, nothing is stopping you, come. Can't you hear it calling?! SoCal waits with open arms; the sun, the beaches, and the LA music scene (which could really use you!) COME.
That's not one song, that's an oratorio. If ever a song needed a decent arranger, it's this one because it's a huge drama but one guitar isn't quite enough to bring out its...um, essence. I think. But who am I? Some idiot. Never mind, keep it up, love your stuff.
lexo30 1 month ago
It sounds a lot like an Ani DiFranco song
bluecheese208 10 months ago
this is really quite good...creative...original...can't put a tag on it...hmmmm...her heart is gone...the ending made me laugh for real!! Five of those star thingies...sub...way to go!!!
Randy...yeah I know...all my UK friends get a great big chuckle...but is really is my name...
randyfromsaturn 2 years ago
No, I really like it, I don't think its stale. A lot of Laura's songs cover different topics and that keeps it interesting. (I'm merely pointing out that, indeed, that DOES keep it interesting.) I really like the Hangman song because it branches out beyond the usual tropes.
hill0118 2 years ago
The lyrics on this song are pretty good, but there are a couple things you can do to keep from getting stale. 1. Keep a notebook(which you probably do already). 2. Be observant of the way other people act. 3. Read fun books that will spark your imagination.
I've been watching videos of the newest Arctic Monkeys songs, and they are colorful and filled with great images and metaphors that keep things interesting, even two albums after the first "observations about Sheffield punks" album.
hill0118 2 years ago
It seems like this comment should be for someone else. Who is getting stale, or hasn't had their imagination sparked? Is it the person that has lots of original songs and videos, or you, the person that has none? I'm not sure what the Arctic Monkeys have to do with anything they are a group, not a solo artist. 1. Just keep writing your novel.
whatyouget 2 years ago
Wow. That's a cool song. . . I like the spanish-style guitar breaks.
hill0118 2 years ago
I love it!
teelvin 2 years ago
Excellent melody, Laura. I especially like the little guitar parts before some of the lyrics. All the changes in tempo keep things so interesting and really engage the listener. Vocally you give a lesson in phrasing and tone...
faved, playlisted
Robby:)
robby63 2 years ago
Another great song Laura keep up the good work
Amandakop 2 years ago
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I absolutley love this!
lellab 2 years ago
i believe i might be in love
SirCCJames 2 years ago
when are you coming to the states. I want to see your gift of music live. Or at least put up a song everyday so I can get my fix. Or just keep doing what you're doing cause this song is great and you know it!
whatyouget 2 years ago
I would LOVE to come over to the states.. I will do it one day!
Catlowman 2 years ago
Canada is cooler...
I don't just mean temperature wise!! haha.
So yeah.. YOU REMIND ME OF A FEMALE DAVE MATTHEWS!! Well, on this song anyways... This reminds me of Halloween by Dave.
I love that sweep pick this ya do with your right hand. I know it's not "sweep picking", but it's only way I can explain it. ha
BRANSCOMBEx 2 years ago
do it soon, nothing is stopping you, come. Can't you hear it calling?! SoCal waits with open arms; the sun, the beaches, and the LA music scene (which could really use you!) COME.
whatyouget 2 years ago
haha the only thing stopping me is money.. or lack of it... but I will be there one day! x
Catlowman 2 years ago
actually pretty good got sum skill there keep with it
gpninja8 2 years ago
skins & bones 10*
waynemorinjr 2 years ago
Ahh! This is fantastic...
It reminds me of something, but I can't put my finger on it! -jeezzz--
If I remember, I'll come back and tell ya!
Great job!! Woww.. You'll go far, for sure.
Trust me~
BRANSCOMBEx 2 years ago
ooh what does it remind you of? intruiged now! cheers x
Catlowman 2 years ago
P r o f o u n d .
wolffenhaus 2 years ago
"...a visual prop for a tale of all the men who've done her wrong." dayumm girlfriend, that one great line. and the melody in this one is awesome.
can't wait till justin gets here, he'll have all kinds of intelligent technical things to say.
as for me, all i know is i love this and you do indeed keep getting better, laura. a really nice addition to your set list, i think. :)
healthyaddixion 2 years ago
Thanks a lot dude.. much appreciated :]
Catlowman 2 years ago
crickey...i'm loving the change/break thingy....u just keep getting better and better :P
ScreamingVockills 2 years ago
wasn't sure if that bit ruined it or not... so thanks :]
Catlowman 2 years ago