Eric de los santos @ Jon lovitz club universal city walk

[TheTravelfool]

great video! I LOVE stand up comedy.

[SUNSrockALL67]

Material was good, but your stage presence and delivery needs a bit of work. Certainly have potential, and getting your feet wet is important. I would try to curse less, not that cursing is a bad thing in comedy, it just seemed like you were using it as filler and a crutch. Also, the Mexican Santa Clause routine and STD joke I've heard before. Just keep writing and performing, you'll continue to get better.

[ericdelossantos1]

i got jumped by the 118 when i was in maryland. you most likely werent even part of it, so im sorry.

[tupacalypse88]

thought that was damn funny bro.

[StillOutandAboutTown]

good shit keep it up!

but I'll say this:

The start of the routine should have been at 3:28 and gone from there in my honest opinion.

[toptenboxing]

ponle, piojoso!

[concerto404]

Not a comic, but love watching early stand up....comics got balls

As for this show, funny materials, but how about accentuating the punchline. You seem as if you're just passing from joke to joke without connecting. the opening joke about the plane was working, but i think the punchline could have been accentuated...it works because it's fucken true, news treat us like idiots. mexican santa claus, drunk text...good material bro...keep it up.

[chrisaoconnor]

It was as if you were gonna get them out whatever - although they did seem like a tough crowd! Don't take this as a negative cause I thought it was really good and with a little tweaking could be a 'stella performance. Congratulations on taking the step up and doing what a lot of people talk about but don't actually have the balls to do.

[chrisaoconnor]

Hi Eric,

not sure how I came across this but I'm looking at going into stand up and have looked at your performance. First up, lot of respect for getting up there. I've started dong a little bit and it's daunting. I thought your material was really good and could have been great but...there's always a but!!!....it seemed like you didn't connect with anyone in the audience. You seemed to go from left to right without actually telling the stories to them. - run out of characters so see next post

[BaronZombie]

This was way better. You gum squirt joke was perfect but too much build up to it. You say "you know" too much, but I know it's nerves. Drunk texting pay off was good too. Keep it up Eric!

[budako]

shit was halfway funny cuz you doing good my nigga but nigga get a part timme incase this shit dont work out for you lol hahahah just fucking wit you!!! pimps up hoes down

[ericdelossantos1]

hey guys! please leave a comment, i dont care if its negative as long as its for constructive criticisim.

[dspjim]

That's was great Eric!!! I forgot how awesome that was!!!

[ericdelossantos1]

thanks jim. i appreciate the positive feedback. im changing my style next year im going to try a bill cosby story teller style, let me know when your performing in the inland empire i wanna go check you out.