It's a definitely interesting third trailer, more vivid than its predecessors.
The voiceover could use a little tweaking in some parts though, just to normalise and integrate it more smoothly with the clips. Also, in many transitions between clips there was lettering flashing into view and vanishing after a second, and that disrupted the flow a bit.
Other than that, it's a great trailer. And, repeating myself, I love the fanfic!
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super1089 1 year ago
It's a definitely interesting third trailer, more vivid than its predecessors.
The voiceover could use a little tweaking in some parts though, just to normalise and integrate it more smoothly with the clips. Also, in many transitions between clips there was lettering flashing into view and vanishing after a second, and that disrupted the flow a bit.
Other than that, it's a great trailer. And, repeating myself, I love the fanfic!
MicroField 1 year ago