This is a lovely piece and a great chance to see the Sony HVR-V1E in action. The low light shots are really nice. Gritty use of camera, but almost overdid the shake at times. lovely music score! ...Nice !!!
between cuts there background noise kept changing when all the shouting was going on and it became too much of a distraction that took me away from the action because i couldnt help but notice the changes in the audio. Overall i think it was good though. Stands out from you average student film
Ok so i liked it but a few things... Like farsan25 mentioned, you broke the 180 degree rule and i dont think you meant too. In the first scene i think you could of done with more background lighting. theres a shot at 2:40 where you can only see her and no background whatsoever,
In the second scene i really liked the lighting, maybe the shadows on the wall where too hard. The biggest problem was your sound, i noticed in the wider shots it went really quiet, and ...
@ryandeean You're joking right? The acting is legiiiiiit. I thumbs down your comment! haha.. no disrespect. The rack at 7:36 is superb by the way; It did wonders for the story.
what do you shoot with? and do you use a mic for the audio?
benquan231 1 year ago
did you score it using pro tools
ANONOMOSMUSICTUBE 1 year ago
this is really good
myneckhurts88 2 years ago
i dident understand.
Someone please explain? :)
Emurlyjayne 2 years ago
This is a lovely piece and a great chance to see the Sony HVR-V1E in action. The low light shots are really nice. Gritty use of camera, but almost overdid the shake at times. lovely music score! ...Nice !!!
duncaninchina 2 years ago
between cuts there background noise kept changing when all the shouting was going on and it became too much of a distraction that took me away from the action because i couldnt help but notice the changes in the audio. Overall i think it was good though. Stands out from you average student film
Vroxitsa 2 years ago
Ok so i liked it but a few things... Like farsan25 mentioned, you broke the 180 degree rule and i dont think you meant too. In the first scene i think you could of done with more background lighting. theres a shot at 2:40 where you can only see her and no background whatsoever,
In the second scene i really liked the lighting, maybe the shadows on the wall where too hard. The biggest problem was your sound, i noticed in the wider shots it went really quiet, and ...
Vroxitsa 2 years ago
Hi, well filmed and directed. editing and music nice as well.
I think the only problem i spotted was crossing the imaginary line between 2:08 and 2:50.
It doesnt seem to be done intentionally because you respected this rule prior to these frames.
farsan25 2 years ago
I found the actors difficult to watch.
ryandeean 2 years ago
haha.
samhendi 2 years ago
@ryandeean You're joking right? The acting is legiiiiiit. I thumbs down your comment! haha.. no disrespect. The rack at 7:36 is superb by the way; It did wonders for the story.
DreamVisionFilms 11 months ago