Killawesome!! These ARE poems, modern poems, and as such, are brilliant ones! Myself's a poem person, too, and I've got to love these, really. And just because they're so personal (lyrical) and have a rhythmic sequence of the ideas/images, they easily fall under the category of poetry, despite any prose-like characteristics. That is, it's simply poetry, and, again, as such, is greeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaat!
I write prose too. Mine is not nearly as good though. Maybe someday i'll get the nerve up to post some of mine online. But i don't know. They are all pretty personal. I suppose yours are too though, right?
(until 4:47) Oh, this was so fantastic !!! Omg, you really overwhelmed my with this prose. What surprised me was the way you've stretched time for going into details. That was very good... just the right think to do, because when you're in love with someone it seems like time stands still... *sigh* so great... And what a shame all I have time for right now is to leave nothing but a short comment...
I really like those prose, the first one was my fav of the two. our own desire for "happiness" that we seek in others is our downfall, find happiness in your own soul and all other sources will enrich our lives enhance them, but not define them. again thanks for making the video.
Yeah, me too, really ! It's a wonderful way to express one's feelings and so much stronger than a simply text. Don't we all have these intense moments in life in which we want to communicate us to someone regarding something which really moves us ? Such prose is just the right form for it, if you ask me...
if i read this to myself it would hav no meaning to me but when u read it...It just fluttered right into my mind i could feel each emotion. uve inspired me to write again thank you. idk y but hearing and writing poetry helps me find inner peace.
the first poem the grand affair is a lot like my story. it made me cry to know i am not the only one with a fools heart. i would like to send a copy of that poem to the one i have the grand affair with. if you could please tell me who wrote it so i may find it so i can.
Mashallah, both of them were very deep. very sad. but your poetry is so good one can't listen to all of it at once, it's so deep one has to listen to two sentences at a time, pause, contemplate them, and then continue. Thank you for posting these poems
"Good Poems selected by Garrison Keillor" is one of my favorite books of poetry. I recommend any who enjoys poetry check out that book. Keep it up Kicesie, really good.
I just want to say that I am realy impressed by your poetry nad your voice for that part. :) I like to lissen to poetry to give my self new insperation, even if I write in another language. But thank you, truly, for your proses. /Sofia
I love your poetry. It's great. I'm working on putting a collection together of my own. Hopefully it will be ready soon! Anyways they were wonderful and very moving. I hope to here more soon.
hi i thin it good to well i am not big on that sort of thing but i like yours i wonder if its cuz i am geting to understand it more well i hope you can understand my bad spelling i will say sumthing later if i can
it is vary good i think your a good person doing what you do for everybody with the things they cant talk to ther perents about witch seems to be all teens like me but i wuld if my mom didint bug me about it
Your poetry is very good and it seems you put alot of time in thinking and writing. I notice you say you have written them a few years ago. I can guess you put some feeling when writing this. I thank you for sharing this with your friends and people on youtube.
is what im saying going in if it is sory for replying so mutch if not i ges my computer isint that good dont mind the spelling i am not all that good at it well grait poems more story but ther good they make good pics in my mind
Can you say emotion??? Yes your voice speaks it from within. Remember those cherished those moments forever because those are what makes you that someone special.
I feel a bit like I'm looking at old photos. Ones that don't show recent changes in you, new complications that might add character. Haven't you turned a corner (or two) since then?
Most of my videos are 'recent photos' and to actually get a deeper view... to find something more interesting, one might want to look at baby pictures. They tell a lot.
As for recent stuff, I post writings all the time on my myspace account.
Yeah, I guess I was thinking of the one reflected in your last few blog posts. Y'know, Winter Thaw and all. I was sort of distinguishing between this type of writing (poetic) and that type of writing (matter-of-fact discussions of what's going on). Maybe you don't make that distinction; I don't know.
But hey, what you posted is cool! You're right; historical perspectives are very interesting.
I love your poetic prose(WHILE I SNAP MY FINGERS)I miss your vlogs but I'm sure your busy with school and all your other projects. hope all is well, keep up the good work.
Did you write those? (I didn't hear you say it, but I felt it was implied.)
If you did, wow. I have always had trouble at writing deep/emotive poetry. I can do it through fiction, but have never caught the nack of poetry, at least not poetry like that. My hat is off to you.
Your poems are like a storm, full of emotion reflective of a heart in turmoil, passion exploding, rushing forth. Then when you read them in such a drab monotone there is injected a disappointment! What happened to the heart which experienced the storm? What are you
afraid of? Let yourself go as that's the only way you will be loved!
Killawesome!! These ARE poems, modern poems, and as such, are brilliant ones! Myself's a poem person, too, and I've got to love these, really. And just because they're so personal (lyrical) and have a rhythmic sequence of the ideas/images, they easily fall under the category of poetry, despite any prose-like characteristics. That is, it's simply poetry, and, again, as such, is greeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaat!
sean22noon 2 months ago
your voice is so sweet... :) I like it...
edwardgoyo24 7 months ago
Beautiful...^_^
marrion99 10 months ago
wow.... just wow. It is awesomely good.
MrChange31 1 year ago
I write prose too. Mine is not nearly as good though. Maybe someday i'll get the nerve up to post some of mine online. But i don't know. They are all pretty personal. I suppose yours are too though, right?
Rhaylynn 2 years ago
I think anything we write is our very soul on paper and in words. Can't get much more personal. Thankfully, I keep most my meanings hidden.
KicesiesVlog 2 years ago
(until 4:47) Oh, this was so fantastic !!! Omg, you really overwhelmed my with this prose. What surprised me was the way you've stretched time for going into details. That was very good... just the right think to do, because when you're in love with someone it seems like time stands still... *sigh* so great... And what a shame all I have time for right now is to leave nothing but a short comment...
HispanicImpression 3 years ago
l like your style ..haha you are born gift
xlnrd 3 years ago
may be it is a great poem according to your emotional expression
although i just understand it less(because i am chinese ) and have a pool english
xlnrd 3 years ago
Hey, I think I've seen you on tv before. Not sure though, I may be wrong.
oODeeJayTomOo 3 years ago 2
These poems are really good. And your voice is so unbelievably relaxing. mmmmmmmmmmmm You've got a talent.
ghjkl123298765 3 years ago
Holy crap you wrote those? First one depressing, but second has love. Added to favs
wuscli 3 years ago
holy... that is amazing... people say I'M good... wow... i am nothing compared to you...
LightningIrving 3 years ago
I really like those prose, the first one was my fav of the two. our own desire for "happiness" that we seek in others is our downfall, find happiness in your own soul and all other sources will enrich our lives enhance them, but not define them. again thanks for making the video.
kingjimsixsix5 3 years ago
your poetry is so beautiful, it inspires me to start writing again. keep up he grea work.
NotSoOrdinaryGirl 3 years ago
Yeah, me too, really ! It's a wonderful way to express one's feelings and so much stronger than a simply text. Don't we all have these intense moments in life in which we want to communicate us to someone regarding something which really moves us ? Such prose is just the right form for it, if you ask me...
HispanicImpression 3 years ago
if i read this to myself it would hav no meaning to me but when u read it...It just fluttered right into my mind i could feel each emotion. uve inspired me to write again thank you. idk y but hearing and writing poetry helps me find inner peace.
confpoet 3 years ago
its a grate poem you have a gift i hope what i said about a fools heart did not upset you i was not meaning to be rude
bloodlust800 3 years ago
the first poem the grand affair is a lot like my story. it made me cry to know i am not the only one with a fools heart. i would like to send a copy of that poem to the one i have the grand affair with. if you could please tell me who wrote it so i may find it so i can.
bloodlust800 3 years ago
ummm... I wrote it.
kicesie 3 years ago
These words sounds like a diary of what and how I feel about my "Bed Buddy". wow.
Libratarot 3 years ago
Mashallah, both of them were very deep. very sad. but your poetry is so good one can't listen to all of it at once, it's so deep one has to listen to two sentences at a time, pause, contemplate them, and then continue. Thank you for posting these poems
eshmawi 4 years ago
This really humbled me. It was so moving I can't keep listening in length, i have to listen to a sentence or two at top. Thank you
eshmawi 4 years ago
You are a beautiful writer. I identify with your pieces... Please keep writing.
OHMYGOSHitsSARA 4 years ago
"Good Poems selected by Garrison Keillor" is one of my favorite books of poetry. I recommend any who enjoys poetry check out that book. Keep it up Kicesie, really good.
mes13519 4 years ago
I just want to say that I am realy impressed by your poetry nad your voice for that part. :) I like to lissen to poetry to give my self new insperation, even if I write in another language. But thank you, truly, for your proses. /Sofia
MalmoSofia 4 years ago
"how can you fail to feel this?" wonderful.
MalmoSofia 4 years ago
ohmy god these are gorgeous
wel totally my favorite is the grand afair
i cant even begin to tell you how much i luv that.
you speak with so much devotion to your piece
wow i wish i could write like that
they are beautiful.
<3
azlerz 4 years ago
I love your poetry. It's great. I'm working on putting a collection together of my own. Hopefully it will be ready soon! Anyways they were wonderful and very moving. I hope to here more soon.
kmsoccerchic89 4 years ago
those are beautiful poems. Thanks for sharing. :)
HaleyMary 4 years ago
beautiful.
edkrach 4 years ago
you must have thousand stalkers by now.lol. sexy voice and your very sexy too. nicel lips too.lol
bonjoviiii 4 years ago
the grand affair i listened to twice whoever he was was the one it sounds like. I feel for ya.
limom69 4 years ago
"my soul's liquid"
dayum
swwy5 4 years ago
you never told us you were a poet i think i may just write one just for you....
ripster100 4 years ago
"And fuck off means I wish you'd love me again."
Goddamn. I hear that.
Wolfkiller 4 years ago
The first one I could definitely relate to in my own way of course. They were both great!
Nishie900 4 years ago
Thank you for sharing those with us...
queueit2006 4 years ago
hi i thin it good to well i am not big on that sort of thing but i like yours i wonder if its cuz i am geting to understand it more well i hope you can understand my bad spelling i will say sumthing later if i can
reku8000 4 years ago
it is vary good i think your a good person doing what you do for everybody with the things they cant talk to ther perents about witch seems to be all teens like me but i wuld if my mom didint bug me about it
reku8000 4 years ago
Hi
Your poetry is very good and it seems you put alot of time in thinking and writing. I notice you say you have written them a few years ago. I can guess you put some feeling when writing this. I thank you for sharing this with your friends and people on youtube.
Mike from Australia
miike111 4 years ago
is what im saying going in if it is sory for replying so mutch if not i ges my computer isint that good dont mind the spelling i am not all that good at it well grait poems more story but ther good they make good pics in my mind
reku8000 4 years ago
I liked the first one. it was really sad :(.
emmasmiles111 4 years ago
Sorry I just never really got into poetry/poetic prose. P.S. Whats the difference?
borndemented86 4 years ago
Very nice work.. Again :-)
donny0007 4 years ago
Can you say emotion??? Yes your voice speaks it from within. Remember those cherished those moments forever because those are what makes you that someone special.
RevFastEddy 4 years ago
once again very nice work! did you get a hair cut?
SgtSMOKE78 4 years ago
nope... just my bangs growing out... the rest is pulled back....
kicesie 4 years ago
kim you get different levels of deep evertime see ya! these poetic prose are really great !!!! excelent stuff here .
187beyond 4 years ago
I liked it, but if I had the choice, I'd much rather hear something you've written very recently, say within the last month.
JasonMelancon 4 years ago
why?
kicesie 4 years ago
I feel a bit like I'm looking at old photos. Ones that don't show recent changes in you, new complications that might add character. Haven't you turned a corner (or two) since then?
JasonMelancon 4 years ago
Most of my videos are 'recent photos' and to actually get a deeper view... to find something more interesting, one might want to look at baby pictures. They tell a lot.
As for recent stuff, I post writings all the time on my myspace account.
Or is it a specific corner you're looking for?
kicesie 4 years ago
Yeah, I guess I was thinking of the one reflected in your last few blog posts. Y'know, Winter Thaw and all. I was sort of distinguishing between this type of writing (poetic) and that type of writing (matter-of-fact discussions of what's going on). Maybe you don't make that distinction; I don't know.
But hey, what you posted is cool! You're right; historical perspectives are very interesting.
JasonMelancon 4 years ago
I love your poetic prose(WHILE I SNAP MY FINGERS)I miss your vlogs but I'm sure your busy with school and all your other projects. hope all is well, keep up the good work.
matrix2k3 4 years ago
I think my writing is inarticulate and inadequate compared to yours.
Someday people will pay money to read your memoirs.
anonxyzus 4 years ago
Wow! Pretty amazing Kim. Considering that you wrote them as a much younger woman, even more so.
PerthPete1 4 years ago
love it...
RuiFranciscoVieira 4 years ago
Oops, forgot to read the "About This Video" section. They are yours, and they are "pieces of poetic prose".
The point of my comment stands though, they are excellent.
mvtp47 4 years ago
Nice pieces of poetic prose
JXintheZ 4 years ago
Did you write those? (I didn't hear you say it, but I felt it was implied.)
If you did, wow. I have always had trouble at writing deep/emotive poetry. I can do it through fiction, but have never caught the nack of poetry, at least not poetry like that. My hat is off to you.
mvtp47 4 years ago
Yes, I wrote them. A good while back now... :-)
kicesie 4 years ago
VERY awesome. Feeling, intimate, real words. I am impressed and taken by your words.
djplazma 4 years ago
"... the irony of life, someone always holds back" brilliant and true!
CatharsisProductions 4 years ago
sorry, but i really dont see what people see in poetry
itsazy 4 years ago
: )
ASECONDCHANCEAROUND 4 years ago
Your poems are like a storm, full of emotion reflective of a heart in turmoil, passion exploding, rushing forth. Then when you read them in such a drab monotone there is injected a disappointment! What happened to the heart which experienced the storm? What are you
afraid of? Let yourself go as that's the only way you will be loved!
goneviral69 4 years ago
The monotone is oh so intentional.
KicesiesVlog 4 years ago
@goneviral69 i like to read my poetry and prose in monotone....it just....works....but depends what your reading i guess
Caidenjohnsonmusic 1 year ago
@goneviral69 but if it's like the poems in def jam poetry....well than yeah character is necessary
Caidenjohnsonmusic 1 year ago