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  • Did you yourself interview those people or did you get the clips form somewhere else because I have noooooooo idea where I will find historians and other people to interview.

  • how did you do that beginning part that was done in iMovie?

  • How do you make the graph at 7:07?

  • Thanks for your interest, everyone! I've uploaded (yes, after 4 years) a higher resolution version of the video. Enjoy.

  • i have a research report on this, wish me luck plz.

    great video i got 145 notes just in the first 8 minutes.

  • AHHH !!!! soooo goood .... im going to fail this!

  • What did the judges ask you? I'm preparing to do a first time Junior Devision documentary. Any pointers would be nice.

  • wow amazing!!

  • Damn, so we have to get it around 10 minutes long to stand a chance? =/

  • is your name michael?

  • I am so screwed for NHD...

  • So we could do a video about it?

    i don't understand what this really is for?

    I mean i know it's talking about the history of your topic, but can we make a video of us talking and acting instaid of doing it in front of judges?

    Or do we just talk about it because mine is Slavery Debatedd by the U.S Congress!

    Pleasee Help!;*(

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  • Where did you get your background music?

  • @Imcoolsobackoff Apple Loops, they come with GarageBand. The background music was mostly in the "Jingles" category. The ending song (before Billy Joel) was an original creation with Apple Loops.

  • How long can the documentary be? I timed myself with my script and it wasn't long at all >_>

  • @Justin13L When we were doing it, the limit was 10 minutes. All the ones that got to nationals were almost exactly 10 minutes... Do your best to fill it up with as much interesting content as possible.

  • What was your guys' thesis statement, or rather, when was it mentioned? I'm trying to give a good example of one for my high school class in the documentary division.

  • What kind of software did you use? My group's making a documentary too, but we are having trouble deciding on a software. Is Windows Movie Maker 2007 a good program?

    Thanks(:

  • Where did you find people to interview? I'm doing my project this year and really having trouble getting knowledge from others.

  • @Justin13L Anywhere, really. Ask every teacher at your school that would know, look up local university professors, ask museum coordinators. The first step is to focus on asking around- don't set up an interview with a curator assuming they'll know a lot, but just casually drop in and ask if they know anyone who's a pro. In our case, we went to the place that did tours of Seattle Underground, and decided a tour guide would be a cool person to ask.

  • Continued... Paul Dorpat showed up a lot of places. He contributed to some of our sources (so yes, check who wrote your sources and see if they're local) as well as had a video of him playing at the Seattle Museum. Of course, we had the advantage of using a local event... But if you're doing something popular, you're bound to have an author, historian, or professor around locally. Good luck.

  • I am a regional history day coordinator and would like to have a saved file copy of your fabulous documentary to help teach middle school and high school teachers about creating effective documentary entries with their students. Could you send me a copy of this documentary? Would you give permission to show it to faculty at a workshop? cab39@psu.edu Christine

  • Thank you very much for the advice you gave us. Your team did a great job on your documentary! :) As our team was watching your documentary we were admiring the way the newspaper headline scrolls horizontally across the screen. What effect did you use for this? Thank you for your help! :)

  • @MARISSAM95 It's not an "effect" in terms of what iMovie would have you think. Final Cut makes you do most of the work of making it look like what you want to look like - that said, although it's not all happy user friendly, you have a lot more control. The newspaper clippings flying across the screen were relatively simple; each clipping was just a picture in the timeline. Use the viewer window and keyframe to set where the clipping is at certain times, and it will travel to an fro as you wish.

  • My group and I are making a documentary for History Day, we were wondering if your used Livetype for your titles? Also what effect you used to underline text in your documentary? Thank you :)

  • Livetype... That rings a bell, but I'm pretty sure we didn't use it. We used Boris (under the render category) for all the font. Transitions (black/orange corner things) were imported from iMovie. The underlining effect is just a line (rendering a rectangle, or "_____" text) that you reveal all at once or progressively with keyframed on the crop function. Hope that's clear enough XD G'luck!

  • what different programs did you use?

  • Final Cut for most editing, iMovie for the intro effects, GarageBand for some custom music, Photoshop/GIMP or equivalent for graphics. Street sim graphics taken out of powerpoint, use Blender or another 3D graphics program for the real thing.

  • wut's the background music?

  • Apple Loops, came with Final Cut express.

  • wich one is better pinaccle studio 14 ultimate or imovie?

  • awesome job!

  • Great Job! This looks like something from the History Channel. I am competing in NHD for the first time this year, and I'm doing a documentary. =)

  • this looks like it could be on pbs...lol

  • how much does final cut express cost? and is it fairly easy to figure out how to use? also, can you use it on a pc or does it have to be on a mac? GREAT documentary though. i made it to state last year for my nhd but i didnt get to nationals

  • FCE is about 160 bucks, we got a good price from Craigslist. Ebay would work too. It's mac only. For PC, I heard Adobe Premier Pro does all the same stuff.

    For the technically minded who are familiar with graphics and media, it's pretty easy. I'd recommend a "Final Cut for Dummies" type book for the average person. Tech dumb-dumbs will struggle but can learn just fine. A book is useful at all levels. There's a difference between knowing how to use it, and knowing how to use it well (and fast).

  • This is pretty cool. I am doing NHD this year in my SS class. Just out of curiosity, what school did this documentary come from?

  • what year of Imovie did you make this with?

  • Not made with iMovie - See description =) iMovie doesn't have the chops to do most of the effects you see.

  • what did u use? just imovie? or others too?

  • You could probably answer that yourself if you spend another 3 seconds reading comments, or even the description ;-)

  • I was wondering how you created the fire animation? and how did it move only in the particular section of the map you wanted it to stay within?

    also how did you create the animation of the street layers, the concrete one being laid over the original street (i don't seem to know how do do stuff like that in FCE) ?

  • The fire animation was relatively simple; first you make a solid clip of fire (I edited footage of a supernova until it looked fiery). Then you make a picture of the outline you want, and put a transparency in FCE on the flaming area. Put that on top of the fire movie, so you now have fire with a color around it. Export that clip and put it in the final movie, and add a transparency around the fire. Now you've got a particular shape fire raging in the movie.

  • To make it shrink or expand, use the Matte filter. You can set keyframes to choose when/where expand. Feel free to tell me where I need clarification.

    The concrete effect was tricker; first you make the shapes in Powerpoint/photoshop/CAD or whatever you like. Then you take that picture and put transparencies on the outside so you're left with only shapes. Then, use the 3D effects in FCE and the angle settings on individual clips to get it how you like. Good luck.

  • Thanks, thats a really creative way of figuring out how to create nice effects!

    It seems that transparencies come in really useful.

  • One thing i don't understand is how you get a transparency solely on part of the picture. Are transparencies just modifying the opacity? or is there some other effect? Because with opacity you can change the transparency of the entire clip but not a certain part. If you could clarify that- it would be great! Thanks!

  • All of the effects involving one part of the picture being transparent are done with the "Color Key" (or something like that) filter. Basically, it lets you choose a color, and anything in the clip that is that color (or similiar, you can play with tolerance) becomes transparent. For the fire, I painted everything I wanted to be transparent pink, and set the Color Key for pink.

  • dude can u tell me were u got ur background music, wen its just like the guitar playing in the background! plz! ive been looking for that song for a long time!

  • Thanks for you help! I got 3rd in Washington State this year. Check out my video on Norman Borlaug and post any suggestions. Thanks!

  • Congratulation guys! I'm doing NHD, a junior group performance on Douglas MacArthur. National's are soon and I know how hard it is to win in Nationals!

  • Wow this is a really good video. I'm sure it took you forever to do. I was in NHD this year and came in 3rd. Check out my video, I could use some feedback.

  • haha that is cool! my video is top on the list in related videos. Mine doesn't have 10,000 views tho lol haha

  • Hey this doc is amazing! I am doing NHD this year too an individual documentary buts its nowhere as good as yours. I got first at regionals and going to state april 23. i used Windows for my doc for regionals, but i got a Mac and am using iMovie 09--my first time with both. this is going to sound stupid, but how do you burn your doc onto a DVD without a menu?

  • Render your movie onto a file (probably Quicktime format) on your hard drive, and open iDVD. Ignore the intro prompt and select "OneStep DVD from Movie" from the File menu, and select the movie you just saved - the instructions should carry you through the rest. Good luck!

  • Thanks! i'm glad you're not competing or it wouldn't stand a chance! i've watched your doc like 50 times :)

  • Thanks XD

  • Thank you. Yeah i kinda figured wiconsin wouldnt be as tough because there is only 7 regionals and not much competition. That is a shame you guys split up because you did so good. Thanks for replying and congrats on a great documentary!!

  • Hey i got first at reginals (im in wisconsin) any tips? i want to go to nationals sooo bad. Ad are your guys still doing documentarys in high school this year?

  • Tips are all over the comments, just read everything. Wisconsin isn't such a high-competition state, so compared to others getting into Nationals won't be so hard for you. The team split up; I think one of us is entering, but that's it. G'luck!

  • We are preparing our video for the infamous competition, lol. We're practically desperate to do well - too many sleepless nights. regionals are tomorrow, did you have your interviews for the regional level?

  • We did, and believe me: interviews are a major part of your success. Make sure you REALLY know your stuff, and if you have a team, make sure everyone knows who answers what. Don't cut each other off, make as many helpful additions and including as many random facts that weren't in your documentary as possible.

  • what do judges really look for, because i'm doing history day, and i think mine is almost as good as this. it has two interviews with people involved in my story, and lots of different old photos and almost all primary sources. someone thats done this before help me!

  • i used final cut pro for my documentary for this years competion. my group put a lot of hard work on it, and i think we have a chance of winning. we don't have any interviews in our documentary, but we have them on our bibliography. will this hurt our chances?

  • interviews are good...but the entire compatition is bs...i got beat by this terrible one...music louder than the words...not even the right topic, and the history teacher next to me agreed with me. the judges, they could have found more knowladgeable ones in a dumpster, and not bragging, mine was preety good but they jst f**ked the whole compotition up.

  • smiley face pins :)

    im from nj didnt get too far...

  • I did a paper and i have made it to regionals so far. Do you remember when you went to regionals if they checked your sources really in depth? Or was that only for state? thanks!

  • They check sources off-screen, so IDK. I DO have a suspicion that by nationals, the sources are pretty instrumental to success.

  • but you are sure they check the sources? at regionals?

  • Like I said, I'm not. Can't help you there.

  • At regionals, they pretty much just flip through them. We had multiple errors on ours that weren't caught and we made first in state.

  • Yeah, it doesn't necessarily mean that they don't notice. It means that other people had more errors than you.

  • Certainly odd, considering they commented on the more minor errors.

  • how do you make the highlighting effect on 2:12, and the one on 4:59, and how do you tilt the newspaper in the background at 9:30

    thanks

  • The highlighting of the newspaper was a black hollow rectangle shape with soft edges which fades in as both the rectangle and newspaper zoom. Same for 4:59; hollow rectangle render. The red underlining is simply an text render of a red underline.

    The tilted newspaper is a simple attribute changed in the Viewer; an angle wheel allows you to change it to any angle, and then use key frames to make the movement happen. This is all in Final Cut, btw. Good luck!

  • Thanks!

    Sorry to bother you again, but the beginning sequence, that was rendered in iMovie right?

    How do you make it?

  • That was pretty simple - I don't remember the interface very well, but it was a sort of pre-set introduction or "theme". It beings with gray boxes in the movie which you fill in with pictures via drag and drop. You can then drag that segment on the iMovie timeline onto the Final Cut timeline. Hope that helps!

  • I seem to be unable to create a rectangle. How do you make one in FCE. I just got it recently and am still experimenting.

    The help doesn't provide any information on how to create shapes, circles, rectangles, lines etc.

    Thanks,

  • Easy - shapes aren't something you're adding or changing about an existing clip, so it's under the "Effects" tab in your browser window and then under the "Video Generators" sub directory. You'll quickly see a file labeled "Shapes", and after picking the right one simply drag it onto your time line. Sorry, perhaps I was assuming too much about your experience!

  • where did you get this program?

  • Full price was a little hefty; we looked on Craigslist and bought a used copy from another video artist.

  • Hey.... I thought Shruti's "Apollo Mission" project won 1st at nationals!

  • I can guarantee that this won first place at nationals in the junior group documentary for the year with Triumph and Tragedy as the theme.

  • Exceptional Documentary, well done.

  • what state are you guys from?

  • We were from Washington.

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  • i am also doing documentary, but i have a problem with my voice not being loud enough and i also stumble on my words a lot. Any tips on how to improve my voice over?

  • Voice strength can be fixed with mic volume under Sounds in the control panel. Most programs also allow you to boost the recording's volume. Otherwise, the mic is the problem and you need a preamp or better mic.

    As for stumbling, if you're on your own you should simply practice speaking and listen to other documentaries to get a hang of how they speak. The voice should be fluent, confident, and informed. If you're a group, just find who has the best voice for this. Good luck!

  • my friend and i are doing oprah winfrey this year

  • I entered this year and my group is doing marcel marceau and we got 1st place at regionals!! I am so excited to go to state

  • Congrats! What state? Regionals are just the first step, ranging from filtering out the worthless to sending on the ones that show promise depending on state =) Good luck!

  • Idaho

  • Okey dokes, not bad. Keep working and improving it, regionals is by far the easiest =) Once again, good luck =)

  • That is an amazing documentary

  • I'm entering this year and there is one part of the rules that really confuses me. When you used the interview with Paul Dorpat, was that existing footage that you just gave credit for, or was it an original interview? In that case, if you include an interview, you don't need a voice over? If you could clear that up, I would really appreciate it!

  • That was an original interview; we had the chance of having this wonderful historian within easy driving distance. There was no voicing over of the interview - I don't know what the rule is referring to, maybe if you put it here I can tell you what it seems like it's trying to say. Thanks!

  • awesome. im entering NHD, too. our theme this year is "Individual in History". HOwever, my teacher said that I could do a group

    ~student at Sierra Vista Middle School

  • same with me

    who are you doing?

    i am doing Joseph Stalin

  • Whoa i just saw rebecca's comment on their documentary. Nice job you did, i was also pretty impressed with Anand's documentary for Conflict and Compromise. =( biased judges ftl. Wish us luck in competition this year.

    -three eighth graders from Redmond Jr. :P

  • Luck has been wished =)

  • Also, when I go will they ask me out right if i followed copyright procedures and look into my claims?

  • None of the judges did that for us, but we DID follow all copyright rules and let them know that we did.

  • anthony this is anand im making one with pritam reluca and tian

  • ZOMFG so there you go, one member still making some. What on? Is it good? Whacha makin it with?

  • Did you making one this year?

  • Nope, didn't compete. Team split up due to moving/school changes, and as far as I'm aware none of us have made any attempt by ourselves.

  • good pictures but the narrations were a little too quiet

  • it irks me

  • Great job! I'm doing a presentation (not a documentary) this year. That's really a great video. You deserved winning at nationals.

    --Haflinger96--

  • how did you do those effect at 00:08 - 00:26

  • He used I-movie. You can't do that type of stuff in windows movie maker :(

  • Wow. That was incrediably impressive.

  • this is an amazing documentary- i do a website every year :) ...congrats on winning @ nationals!

  • what kind of software did you use to use the picture panning thing in the beginning? i'm doing my own project and want to know what would be the best way to do it.

  • Final Cut Express- the key feature you're looking for in a software for precise panning is called keyframing, or key frames in general. They automatically animate the distance between the picture's locations on the screen based on frames that you edit yourself ("key" frames).

  • Great job!!! I'm impressed. I have a question -- is "Final Cut Express" a PC software or MaC? I'm in 6th grade, like to make a documentary soon for the competition.

  • It's for Mac only. If you want to compete this year, I'd get started right now! It takes quite a bit of time to compile research and edit video.

  • wow. this is really good. i'm doing sam walton for action and legacy.. kinda hard!

  • Awesome job, and very advanced for your age. Congratulations on you award. Keep working it.

  • Hi, great film!

    I'm curious -

    1) what age group is "Junior" ?

    and

    2) do you know what happened to the guy who started the fire afterwards ?

  • Junior is at or below 8th grade, and poor John felt so bad he just ran away. Never showed his face anywhere, even though no one really blamed him for it.

  • thanks obenany!

    had to look up 8th grade - found it in wikipedia "usually 13 - 14 years" (different system here..)

    "Poor John" is right, wonder did he ever realise that in the long run that it helped the city ...

  • reply often doesnt work .. this last post was a reply to obenany below - forgot to say film very impressive at any age but even more so at that age..

  • how did you animate the fire sequence, where it spread across the map? and also how did you create the clock in the same sequence? It would be awesome if u could let me know, thanks.

  • The fire sequence: made a fire clip that fills the scene, made an outline of the burnt zone, made a movie of a burnt-zone sized fire using the outline, and used an expanding matte on the final version with a transparency on the surrounding safe area.

    Clock: Put a clock graphic in the corner, made a line using the text renderer, and used rotation in the keyframing/motion attributes to have it spin.

  • Hey, I'm doing a documentary but I have Windows. Any suggestions on how to do a documentary using Windows?

    Thanks

    BTW, yours is really good

  • Thanks! I hear for windows Adobe Premier Pro is just about as good as Final Cut. Usually none of the docs that go to nationals are made with the stuff that comes with Windows.

  • Thanks! I had a friend who made it to nationals using Movie Maker, but his understanding of his content was REALLY good and he worked really hard. He did the Brown vs Board of Education.

  • Is there any way to get Adobe Premier Pro free?

  • Maybe illegally.

  • Nope, Final Cut Express was purchased and every sound used in the documentary were royalty-free Apple Loops, with the exception of the clip from "We Didn't Start The Fire" at the end, legal because of its sub-30 second length.

  • If you want to buy it it's $800. There are trials for 30 days, though.

  • great job. do u need a Mac to use final cut express?

  • Yes you do, if you skip past all the "well technically you could..." stuff.

  • what did you use for the video effects

  • Final Cut Express HD- look at the other responses I've posted.

  • You guys did a really good job with this. I appreciate when there are creative videos that win, like this one, other than ones that just have research. Although I'm sure you did a lot of research too. I was competing in this same category in the same year.

  • omg!!!i just went on the underground tour 2 day!!!!just got back soooo cool the history was amazing,and if u go...hope u get a...how do i say this nicely......GOOD tour guide i know one of them (not mine) was drunkkk.

  • This is by far the best History Day documentary I have ever seen! Much better than the 2008 winning documentaries.

    Amazed by the special effects and visual appeal!

  • For anyone participating in the documentary category of NHD, they should look to this video as a model for their own project. This year, I switched to using Final Cut Express for editing my own documentary, and placed 10th in the nation. I wouldn't have come this far if I hadn't watched and learned from this award winning documentary.

  • *Sniff* Thank you, we hoped that this would help people to that effect.

  • I believe that FCE4 is a great editing software. However, doing a documentary for this competition as well, I used iMovie HD because of my topic. Although I do own FCE4, I didnt use it for this year because my topic is fairly old so there isnt much of any video footage. I think iMovie HD is much better than iMovie08 because it has a timeline. This year I won 1st in the JR. Individual Documentary division. I have posted it as a response to this

  • What do you mean by fairly old? My topic is just a year older than yours, and most of my documentary is video footage. If you tried, I bet you could have found some great videos on the black 14. In fact, I recommend you use FCE anyway. The Great Seattle Fire won first place using FCE yet it only had a few seconds of video. That is because they found creative methods to utilize the many advantages in the FCE software. Again, kudos to the makers of this video for showing us how its done.

  • (referring to grizzlieplyr5221 of course)

  • Fairly old by not much video footage. The topic is not old at all. Just for the video perspective it is. Trust me I know. On all of the finalists, they all had video footage and great interviews. What place did you get again?

  • I believe i saw you in the finalists room. Remember me? I went first

  • yea, I remember you. i saw your documentary along with all the other junior individual finalists' videos. you're from wyoming, right?

  • yessir

  • Hahaha Wyoming, this guy's from Wyoming. Good times, right Anthony?

  • wat?

  • Haha you bet. Territory wars at nationals.

  • dood, awesome job!

    you competing again this year?

  • Hey, that was really good. I competed last year and made it to states, and should have made it to nationals, but we definitaly wouldn't have beaten you guys. Would you recommend final cut pro as an editing program? I would like to get it, but it's really expensive and I want to make sure it's worth it.

  • Simply put, Final Cut Express was probably the best investment I made all last year. Highly recommended, especially if you're the type to use it for other things as well.

  • ok, cool, i think i'll ask to get it

    what grade were you guys in when you entered this?

  • This was the top of the junior category, 8th grade.

  • oOo, cool, great job

  • yeah. I'm in 8th grade right now.. mine won't be as good :[

  • This was amazing! I totally see how you guys won. Also-- one second to the limit! XD

  • Final Cut Express; the lesser version of Final Cut Pro?

    But this was really good-I didn't watch the whole thing, I'd skip to various parts,but the text was easy to read, with the exception of the credits, and there was a very nice use of graphics.

    But this was ubreally good from both a visual& technical aspect.

  • Great documentary! I'm from Wisconsin and I made it to Nationals in the junior individual documentary category; the states competition was yesterday. This is my first year, and im just wondering, in the semifinals, how many people are judged together in one room?

  • I remember watching this at the finals in DC

  • I mean nationals in that last comment, not states.

  • How good does a doc have to be in order to get to Nationals?

  • It really, really depends on the state you're in. Some states that don't compete very much like Wyoming send people to state that wouldn't have made it past regionals where we come from.

  • Well, I'm in Minnesota, and stet's tomorrow. Wish me luck! What state are you from?

  • How did you make the title page? that is awesomeeeeee :)

  • To keep it short, the font was generated in iMovie, made the black area around transparent, layed the fire animation from later on under that, and then the artist's rendition of the fire under that. The star is another iMovie render.

  • hey nice job man!! im currently going to State for my individual documentary. Cool video!

  • what program did you use? We can't find any program that can do what we really want

  • Final Cut Express/Pro, Adobe Premier Pro, and now I hear Sony Vegas can all do literally anything you want them to do. The trick is knowing how ;-)

  • COOL i am currently using sony vagas so i guess it will work for me!