for example'' if its a battle'' i'm well endowed'' cause you gotta be monster'' to smash on these other guys'' so when it doubt'' just remember to focus'' on the sky'' and never look down or look back'' just keep simple''keep it movin'' and on to the next victim'' i'm never losing'' i'll count my losses'' and come back full force'' and watch them forfeit'' because i killed of course'' most of these rappers are made outta porcelain'' no guts no glory'' is what im told'' so i stay in that mode....
real talk if you wrote that'' its honestly average'' barely even that'' just for the simple fact is that you had time to perfect it'' and your word choice is simple not impressive'' and at the end it sounds like your running outta things to rhyme with so it gets repetitive'' focus on telling your story'' when you get that on lock everything else you rap about will come easy'' just a critic
@Writhmic ok when i spit this shit its sick it gets to u like a blood sucking tick its addicting like niki minajs wig man stop hatin im the king this is my thrown get the hell out go home/ its my beamer benz n bently im wealthiest man alive you like to see you be you can try wonderin why o why its becuase im the best compared to the rest theres no test better than you in a rapping contest...
how do you record the songs and put them on here? sounds real good!
nappyboy8563 1 month ago
for example'' if its a battle'' i'm well endowed'' cause you gotta be monster'' to smash on these other guys'' so when it doubt'' just remember to focus'' on the sky'' and never look down or look back'' just keep simple''keep it movin'' and on to the next victim'' i'm never losing'' i'll count my losses'' and come back full force'' and watch them forfeit'' because i killed of course'' most of these rappers are made outta porcelain'' no guts no glory'' is what im told'' so i stay in that mode....
angesq2012 2 months ago
@angesq2012 Thanks for your input
Writhmic 2 months ago
real talk if you wrote that'' its honestly average'' barely even that'' just for the simple fact is that you had time to perfect it'' and your word choice is simple not impressive'' and at the end it sounds like your running outta things to rhyme with so it gets repetitive'' focus on telling your story'' when you get that on lock everything else you rap about will come easy'' just a critic
angesq2012 2 months ago
can i do a track with u on one of the verse???to this beat ??
Bigotheking 4 months ago
You spitin some ill shit bro
tortugo389 6 months ago
@tortugo389 Thanks a lot I try to put all that I got into these free writes I make, thanks again for listening.
Writhmic 6 months ago
Really Good , but u should have talked on the end and just putted down the mic u feelin me bruh?
ninoboyyy14 7 months ago
I like your flow keep it up
nell0000215 8 months ago
nice u should get signed
XxnigxXTyFlyXxnigxX 8 months ago
Nice!
DarwinMendioro 8 months ago
that was shit hot! nice :D
JSAknowsit 8 months ago
nice!!
MrGmoney95 9 months ago
@MrGmoney95 Thanks man
Writhmic 9 months ago
@Writhmic ok when i spit this shit its sick it gets to u like a blood sucking tick its addicting like niki minajs wig man stop hatin im the king this is my thrown get the hell out go home/ its my beamer benz n bently im wealthiest man alive you like to see you be you can try wonderin why o why its becuase im the best compared to the rest theres no test better than you in a rapping contest...
that was the top of my head yaayyy
TheBran1262 8 months ago
Where you reppin'?
ShammySham777 10 months ago
@ShammySham777 I'm from Los Angeles
Writhmic 10 months ago
Hey dude that was dirty, what did you use to record?
AngeloGrazianoo 10 months ago
@AngeloGrazianoo I use a Sterling Audio Condenser Mic, Yamaha Audiogram 3 and Cool Edit Pro/ Adobe Audition
Writhmic 10 months ago