its good but i cant really tell what its supposed to sound like the whole thing kinda slurs together i cant tell if theres a chorus or a pattern in the song at al...
wow you have a great voice i'm the manager of rihanna and i will like to make you a real life singer how bout you sing live in the ellen show if you like please reply to me by messeageing me in my youtube account.thankyou
1 thing just to tell u u aint a show off if u got it flaunt it thats wot i say and i think ur brill hunnie i love ur voice/lyrics there great have u named it yet x ???
your lyrics and your voice are amazing i think the fact that you can sing it without any backround music makes just that much better it takes talent to sing and even mre to do it w/o instruments your amazing and just keep doin it the way your doing it you dont need backround to be great:)
I wrote this song if you dont think so the google the lyrics and see if anything comes up saying its by someone else. Its that simple thanks everyone else for listen love you all!!!
Ok that was great.. i loved it. and really if she did not write it then who did? If you cant tell us who wrote it then keep your mouth shut. your all just jealous because you cant sing that good. SHE did write it. SO shut up!
hehe. To tell you the truth it was really good. I am a singer mysdelf (lessons for 9 years now) and i do preformances in my state! Added instruments woul make it great. Try lessons ;D
I think maybe you should work on adding instruments in. It was good, but it wasn't fantastic. if you can add maybe piano or guitar in I think you'd get a much better response from people. still, your voice is pretty good so keep on working at it! good job!
omg ppl are so mean!... i dont get ppl, but anyways, about u, the song its great, but it would sound better i think with music, probly a piano. and i want you to do the rest, dont listion to others,:P, another thing, try a diffrent melody, just alittle dirent other then that, great
sucha beautiful girl. Tha lyrics didn't make sense buh afta listening to it alot of tyms yhoo realise that theres a meaning to these lyrics so well done chick!
u have suchh an amazin voice...but sing sumthin like..hmm irreplaceable...lol jus thought of that off of the top of my head..but stilll...get those songs that are sung by many youtube singers..like unwritten or sumthin..but SERIUOSLY GIRRRRLl u have an amazinnn voice :P:P:P...
Its about life and how it passes us by and sometimes the things we see as beautiful like cars and fashion and things like that are not true beauty... but when this girl is with the guy she loves she sees everything around her through his eyes and finaly sees the true beauty in things.....
the lyrics dnt seem 2 mke sense 2 me lyk wun min yuur tlkin bout a boi or sumink nd den yuur tlkin bout waves nd stuff bit confusing but on the positive side yu sing it brilliantlyy yuur a reli guud singa nd hope yuu mke it 2 fam x
and your song sounds like it comes from the heart which is good.
but i know you might have been nervous, but try to figit as much. it is distrating from your beautiful voice (which you want heard) and how meaningful the song is. you can practice by holding something that might be akward to move. like a baseball bat, or posterboard. weights work too.
wow!u r really good.hope u make it far with ur beautiful voice
jessinail1 3 months ago
I love this song <3
lolbil 3 months ago
its good but i cant really tell what its supposed to sound like the whole thing kinda slurs together i cant tell if theres a chorus or a pattern in the song at al...
allisonconehead 6 months ago
wow you are an amazing singer!! god bless you!!!
shanshan4011 7 months ago
wow did you really make that up by yourself
mistlol1313 8 months ago
AWESOME VOICE KEEP SINGING OK
TheMusicDIVA101 9 months ago
wow you have a great voice i'm the manager of rihanna and i will like to make you a real life singer how bout you sing live in the ellen show if you like please reply to me by messeageing me in my youtube account.thankyou
WantYoui 10 months ago
i lov the song its great keep goin for ur dream
3T102 10 months ago
i did
dawxiyg 1 year ago
how old r u?? ur so good!
MrCupecakez 1 year ago
NEEDS A LITTLE PRACTICE TO MAKE IT BETTER!
themusicperson789 1 year ago
Wow
californiakienitz 1 year ago
<3 nice
thewehatemileyshow 1 year ago
Omg i'm shoked do you take lessons are you a singer and nice song
nedbigbee7000 1 year ago
OMG this is amazing!!! Do you have music up on itunes?? Have you ever taken voice lessons?
I'm Speechless, keep up the great work!!!
Singalot0190
singalot0190 1 year ago
VERRY GOOD CHIKK! KEEP IT UP!
andrealuzyou 2 years ago
Really gorgeous song, and you have a great voice!!I have uploaded one of my songs also if ya wanna check it out xxx
0rnaMusic 2 years ago
Ur good !
bestfriendforever98 2 years ago
yuu look like a dark headed Lady GaGa good song and nice voice.
jinavive26202 2 years ago
ur damn good keep it up
bloodgal93 2 years ago
I'd let her suck my dick.
iRewel 2 years ago
you are beautiful to me well done you keep it up..........
eeyyee123 2 years ago
Ur really good And its a great song. Could u possibly have a look at mine seeming as ive looked at yours? Brilliant voice, ur very talented.
karllattimer 2 years ago
she is not a show off shes a great singer!!!!!!!!!:)
chloe1time13 2 years ago
1 thing just to tell u u aint a show off if u got it flaunt it thats wot i say and i think ur brill hunnie i love ur voice/lyrics there great have u named it yet x ???
kells445 2 years ago
your lyrics and your voice are amazing i think the fact that you can sing it without any backround music makes just that much better it takes talent to sing and even mre to do it w/o instruments your amazing and just keep doin it the way your doing it you dont need backround to be great:)
FaerieIzz 2 years ago
so good love it
aspezz14 2 years ago
your good
leanneDCfan 2 years ago
urgh
AppleBerryLand 2 years ago
I wrote this song if you dont think so the google the lyrics and see if anything comes up saying its by someone else. Its that simple thanks everyone else for listen love you all!!!
elise12348 2 years ago
really good voice and great song
kuht123 2 years ago
good voice but no good song
bealicios1120971 2 years ago
show off.
thehazeleyz 2 years ago
nice job! u should make the song a little faster though lol
mecommentalot 2 years ago
i liked it it was good u should become a famous singer
FoofooFunfyFeefee 2 years ago
Wow ur really good! 5 stars and favorited great job
bubblepopgirl1 2 years ago
so what if she didnt write it. if she can sing, i dont give a hoot. u r just jealous so uhh ur the dumb ass.
sweetpeapb98 2 years ago
Ok that was great.. i loved it. and really if she did not write it then who did? If you cant tell us who wrote it then keep your mouth shut. your all just jealous because you cant sing that good. SHE did write it. SO shut up!
cuite35 2 years ago 2
ummm hey dummie thats not how strippers dress wow ur rlly dumb ha
bubblesgurlroxs 2 years ago
I bet she did, and you guys are just jealous. To all of those who are saying she didn't write that, who wrote it then?
XxILoveDeeFizzyxX 2 years ago
ok what if she didnt write it but obviously you guys arent tryin to sing a hard song like this?!... huh?....yah thats what i thought.
NickJzlovelygirl 2 years ago
i heard this song before!
CompaAlfredo1 2 years ago
probably she didnt right the song but atleast she can sing it!
sparklingsun13 2 years ago
how do u not know that she copied that
abbieconnors 2 years ago
I get that she didn't write the song cuz alot of people are saying so but who did write the song?
Adnasel 2 years ago
I love your voice it sounds country
charlesbracey 2 years ago
it sounds fake, is this your song?
iluvfred333 2 years ago
great job keep going and keep writing to if you had a c.d. i would buy it
imhoturnottobad 2 years ago
girl noo
jking2300 2 years ago
WOOOOW lovely voice !!!
sevensupergirls2 3 years ago
you have an awesome voice!!! i like alot. where are you from? nice song.
vizionaire 3 years ago
your goood you should go on britans got talent x
ChynnababessX 3 years ago
nice jeans
crazaygal737 3 years ago
u have a pretty voice!
=D
andi17a 3 years ago
its a really nice song
i like it
italian813 3 years ago
at the beginning i fought you were going to sing turn back the hands of time by r kelly lmao.. really good!! love your voice xoxo
18orova 3 years ago
it was pretty awsome hey i want to be a singer but my parents won't let me take any lessons so can u tell me some tips
mizzglammie 3 years ago
AMAZING!!
xoxlovee13xox 3 years ago
AWSOME!!! You are beautiful and very talented I think you make it well as a professional singer!!!
giggles196 3 years ago 2
You are very good..! And I am NOT kidding.. If there were some instruments, then it would really bee good.. keep on singing..
nullernne 3 years ago
Check my vidss x
EMAREYY 3 years ago
WOWIE!!!!! YOUR AMAZING!!!!! i love your song! Great voice btw. : )
somethinggood34 3 years ago
my ears almost popped
ikechun14 3 years ago
it good i guess
nickjonas1975 3 years ago
you are really pretty and your voice is so pure! really fricken good!!!
dhiscoppd103 3 years ago 2
nice!
CanadaJade 3 years ago
hehe. To tell you the truth it was really good. I am a singer mysdelf (lessons for 9 years now) and i do preformances in my state! Added instruments woul make it great. Try lessons ;D
Ay2duhjay 3 years ago
I think maybe you should work on adding instruments in. It was good, but it wasn't fantastic. if you can add maybe piano or guitar in I think you'd get a much better response from people. still, your voice is pretty good so keep on working at it! good job!
SeattleCoffee173 3 years ago
u r soo talented!!
good work!!
pwincessdemolition 3 years ago
godd song,, and beutiful voice ;D
christinenorway92 3 years ago
no offence that was crap
rihannarules111 3 years ago
stunned!!!!! AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cookiebean1112 3 years ago 2
omg ppl are so mean!... i dont get ppl, but anyways, about u, the song its great, but it would sound better i think with music, probly a piano. and i want you to do the rest, dont listion to others,:P, another thing, try a diffrent melody, just alittle dirent other then that, great
joker80james 3 years ago
I like it! :}
devoikata 3 years ago
not that good.
CinderellaGirl282 3 years ago
Boring.....
JustGeggo 3 years ago
you sing very well.
secretsymphany 3 years ago
are you aware that your trousers have holes in them?????????????they cant keep you warm can they?
popzthamesmeadgal 3 years ago
i just farted
makkypakka 3 years ago
you sing "great" you should audition 4 american idol and if u do say thanks to me samantha rubio and i really no u could win!!!!!
sammy6785 3 years ago
i have one word about your song *AMAZING*
aulstralian 3 years ago
you started of false with the "time".
you have a nice voice.
you should work on the song some more. like work on the chorus.
keep it up!
Janzah 3 years ago
I think it is a really good song!I know how hard it is to write a song. Not easy!!! You are very pretty too! Keep it up!
soccergirldiva 3 years ago
keep practicing you will get better
amandmlol 3 years ago
Your really pretty and a GREAT singer!! You should go audition for something!
kitty5495 3 years ago
Wow ur like awsome! :-P
uglybettytwin 3 years ago
u are great!!!
superpunkypearl 3 years ago
how corny
xgeorgeexroxx 3 years ago
damn girl your hella good try out for american idol or something i would vote for you all the way i would love to hear you on there one day!!!
keep up the great work girl!
karkargirly 4 years ago
your amazing!
maddiexo3 4 years ago
Your so pretty! I love that song it makes alot of sense :D. Maybee we can share our songs <3
Love: Sierra
xoxsingingxox 4 years ago
u r pretty
hanlaina23 4 years ago
I don't think she's pretty
ashleesimpsonstar 3 years ago
oh i think she is beautiful! lol
hanlaina23 3 years ago
u r great! but only thing is the song makes no sense. Starts w/ live being short, then a guy, then all the beautiful things in live.?!
congobaby07 4 years ago
i love it
xaliceciahx 4 years ago
beautiful voice! love it love it love it!
angelbaby177 4 years ago
your sound a little like christina aguilera your such a good singer lol! i am a pretty good singer too.
codylinleysHOTxo 4 years ago
if you guys read the DESCRIPTION it says the songs not finished being written DUH... very well done keep up the good job :D
XsweetdreamsX87 4 years ago
Crap Song Gd Voice
melihaaa12 4 years ago
WooooW mehr kann ich nix sagen
YSGDBF 4 years ago
no offence but where is the chorus also sooooo great
mileycyrusfan1997 4 years ago
wat it do shawty u rok!!
ckckckck123 4 years ago
OMG ur sooo good!!! i luv that!!!
MiMixROCKS 4 years ago
You do you sound like christina aguilera and lovely song and voice makes me cry
prettybabe9 4 years ago
YOU ARE REALLY PRETTY!!
jojojalo34 4 years ago
ur the second christina aguilera
RoowxFucknxStupid 4 years ago
Nice song awesome
Awesome423 4 years ago
wow one day you will be famous xxxx
emie123em 4 years ago
ur awesome, whats this song about? Any way, move to hollywood, they'll love u there!:D
supercerealso 4 years ago
YOU HAVE A FUKIN BEAUTFIL VOICE!!!! carry on singing x youve got the looks aswell x
daredevilmel 4 years ago 2
really good voice!!
probably also check out my video :)
MrsAnna19988 4 years ago
not bad at all
joedirt2020 4 years ago
wow that wuz really good!
great voice!!
i try 2 write songs and try 2 sing lol but im still tryin 2 find the courage to put mine on youtube. hehe
but love urz!
musicismylifestory30 4 years ago
You blew my socks off.Keep writing.
hoturtu87 4 years ago
wow.
Great voice.
Greets fromm Holland
SHARrockerx 4 years ago
beautufull voice!! you really have!! maybe you wanna have a look at my channel too?
itsmerockypuk 4 years ago
sucha beautiful girl. Tha lyrics didn't make sense buh afta listening to it alot of tyms yhoo realise that theres a meaning to these lyrics so well done chick!
Cassie
DarkCassie2 4 years ago
its like christina aguilera.. wooow!!!
melly1995 4 years ago
nice voice. now try to amagine that your voice is a paint brush. octives,notes, soft,
hard, flowy, chopy, are paints. try to paint a decorative picture. :)
afslack 4 years ago
u have suchh an amazin voice...but sing sumthin like..hmm irreplaceable...lol jus thought of that off of the top of my head..but stilll...get those songs that are sung by many youtube singers..like unwritten or sumthin..but SERIUOSLY GIRRRRLl u have an amazinnn voice :P:P:P...
angel0092 4 years ago
Your voice is so cool, you don't have such a irritating hard voice, but softer..
Loveit.
Moeikbenkoe 4 years ago
you have an amazing voice, and i like your song :)
polkadothot1 4 years ago
Its about life and how it passes us by and sometimes the things we see as beautiful like cars and fashion and things like that are not true beauty... but when this girl is with the guy she loves she sees everything around her through his eyes and finaly sees the true beauty in things.....
elise12348 4 years ago
the lyrics dnt seem 2 mke sense 2 me lyk wun min yuur tlkin bout a boi or sumink nd den yuur tlkin bout waves nd stuff bit confusing but on the positive side yu sing it brilliantlyy yuur a reli guud singa nd hope yuu mke it 2 fam x
sexceestevie 4 years ago
nice voice.
Great that you made your own song.
Now just wait until you finished the whole song.
Greetings from Holland
tomwolthuis 4 years ago
that was really good
cutepuppy091795 4 years ago
wow i love you're voice
and i really love the lyrics
great job
unexpected02 4 years ago
Dont take this the wrong way but if you keep practicing you are gonna make that a number one on all the country stations. lol
joe101joe101 4 years ago
really like your voice :D
neenoz 4 years ago
beautiful
rcsi1 4 years ago
wow...ur voice is soo pretty..and i love the song..
almonde101 4 years ago
i love the song and your voice you are definelty amazing i would so listen to ya album you rawk
HALLA25 4 years ago
I love to see original content. This makes a nice addition to your videos. Very pretty song of yours. Can't wait till you finish it.
Gnomemercy22 4 years ago
You can sing and your pretty hot....nice combo!
Scottdog187 4 years ago
i like ur singing alot very strong voice check out my vids if ya can
itsonlyapplepie 4 years ago
nice song
sickofbullshit07 4 years ago
You have a good voice.
and your song sounds like it comes from the heart which is good.
but i know you might have been nervous, but try to figit as much. it is distrating from your beautiful voice (which you want heard) and how meaningful the song is. you can practice by holding something that might be akward to move. like a baseball bat, or posterboard. weights work too.
jewwbby 4 years ago
omigosh!
LOVE your voice
it's so powerful, and you write some good lyrics too
=]
myscreenname411 4 years ago
nice! great voice and lyrics!
marine9191 4 years ago
wounderful voice!
7thchilddevin 4 years ago
wow great voice and you are stunning x
kelpinktink 4 years ago