I do believe you have another hit on your hands with this one. It's a great song. I'd be surprised if it is not recorded by a major artist. I just wish you'd show your fingers forming the chords more. Chord progressions are my main problem and seeing a pro do it really helps.
I really like this song, the story line and simple progression. It's great how you incorporated the title line in the last sentence of each verse...as it works so well by itself.. without finding a rhyme (love is a hard one)...
I do believe you have another hit on your hands with this one. It's a great song. I'd be surprised if it is not recorded by a major artist. I just wish you'd show your fingers forming the chords more. Chord progressions are my main problem and seeing a pro do it really helps.
cracks21229 2 months ago
I really like this song, the story line and simple progression. It's great how you incorporated the title line in the last sentence of each verse...as it works so well by itself.. without finding a rhyme (love is a hard one)...
steelyfun1 1 year ago
Great song! Liked seeing how the B section lyric has evolved from how you posted it.
SteveProbstMusic 1 year ago