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  • so...this film is about a retarted girl??

    i'm just kidding! good job! i really enjoyed it!

    those pop ups kept scaring me though.. lol

  • 16 dislikes....i'd like to see you make something better : )

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  • dang some girls are waaayy to curious..hahahaha

  • i loved it. sounds like so many people hate it. i thought it was great. good editing. and how the cycle just goes on? i just thought it was really good (:

  • Kind of weird . Every day something is hanging from the same tree? Like that's not crepe inoughf , but let's just follow the trail to some weird house in my pretty little dress. GET REAL ? Lol

  • brilliant!

  • well those random black and white snap shots creeped me outt...

  • I just...don't understand...

  • He lures girls with items. Bacelets, necklaces Ect. And keps the girl in the house then he drowns the girls he takes items off her and hangs them on the trees for the next girl to take interest and the cycle goes on and on.

  • i love the second dress she was wearing

  • scared me a lot...sudden attacks.......nice work.

  • I LIKED IT BUT I WOULDNT JUST WALK INTO A STRANGERS HOUSE TO GET TEDDYBEARS

  • who the hell would go inside's some stranger's house though?! lol

  • does this girl love dresses or what.

  • stupid ass bitch lol

    good film tho

  • its a really good film but I was so scared :)

  • Awesome idea, camera could use a little work, another thing is that the point was kinda vague, I wish it had more of an impact, but besides that I really enjoyed the film!

  • Intro of darkness!

  • that god damn random bath-drowning screamns gave me freakin' heart attacs >.< specially the one at 5:17!! but a good movie, well done:D!!

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  • That was so creepy i almost didn't want to finish it. Great Job!!

  • How freaking stupid is she, Am I the only that would run?

  • @withinXmyXdreams NO I WOULD TO

  • @shawnsgirl27 good someone that has not totally lots there Mind!! lol

  • Uhm... why the fuck would she be standing playing with teddy bears in a creepy fucking room with lights set up on the floor... I found this entertaining to some extent, but not believable at all, unless everyone who walks that way on the sidewalk is fucking retarded. But it was well put together. :) And creepy. (:

  • Thanks for scaring the shit outta me.... bitch.

  • That is one dumb bitch.

  • creepy!

  • wow its really kewl!!!!! how he kills little girls , lloved it

  • WHy would she go inside the house? That's just plain stupidity.

  • awesome film, it upsets me how she would go inside the house though..

  • Greedy little bitch e-e

  • ah, this is so sad. & i bet this does happen to teenage girls. just, just aww. :C.

  • @janeypotter haha forgot that bit. You did a really great job I can't wait to watch all of them.

  • @adameverill and to others thar have asks the film is about this creepy killer guy, how has watched this girl go past his house everyday. He then lures her closer to the house everyday by tying stuff to the tree and then he gets her and drowns her. I hope that helps I got all of these shorts films in a bit more detail because my friend brother go to school were this was a yr 12 project.

  • @CutieliciousCoco That's basically the idea, however the concept was that the things he was using to lure the girl had been taken from other girls - which is why you see the bracelet hanging on the tree for the next girl. 

  • i dont get it, someone explain it to me?

  • great work man : ) the music help keep the story flowing and i really enjoyed the camera angles.

  • AMAZING!

  • This is amazing!

  • The whole entire time I was like, "DON'T DO IT. DON'T TAKE IT."

    Great concept!

  • Fantastic job

  • 5:17 D:

  • Beautiful. :) Love this so much, inspired me in many ways.

  • hi, i love making short films but my biggest battle is the music, where do you get yours? the instrumental stuff? is it free?

  • Sorry buti dont understand that short film o.O BUT ITS VERY NICE *_* ♥

  • SHOCKED !!! xD

  • oh eww what a creepy concept. awesome video, amazing music. but that just creeps me out. a serial killer who lures girls in with the objects owned by the last girl he killed....wouldnt you find that a little sketchy though? finding objects everyday in the same spot..bleh

  • it was good, but why would she go in their in teh first place? She must be retarted. which means she deserved it.

  • OMFG SCARY!!!!!!!! 5:17 gave me a heart attack!!

  • josh made the music!! awesome! you know each other? wow, he's really talented at this.

  • @makaloglog123 yeah he's a friend of mine, we go to the same school (:

  • this was reallly good, dumb little girl, if there were candles around a abondon house, then i would have ran, not plyed with stuffed bears. lol

  • HOLY MOLY. That was creepy as, but a freaking awesome loop idea :)

  • love that house:]

    5:17 scared the living SHIT out of me{;

    sorry for language!

  • whoa whoa whoa! well, it was really great but i just wanna clear something up. the girl at the end. is it the same girl or a different one? if its the same, then she dies over and over again, but if its a different one, then theres a serial killer on the loose? dont get me wrong, i LOVED this video. uber creepy:P

  • @prettyroses89 it is infact a new girl, and the cycle continues....

  • @janeypotter holy shit. what an impressive idea:P super creepy:)

  • ...wow. but seriously, who would pick things from trees? and wouldnt you be suspicious if there were to be lots of them hanging around?

  • Wow, great film

  • that was super creepy! ! ! i love it ! ! this video teaches a lesson . . . . . very amazing video!

  • Lol. thats a HORRIBLE film!!!

    Im never picking up things from trees again. Ever.

  • Really impressive!

  • JANE THAT'S SO CREEPY!!

    I'm proud of you :) :)

  • that was really good! but could you explain it a little?

  • wow that was awesome! really creepy

    was it for a project or something?

  • @flynro Thanks! It was for my final school project in film. It's worth 50% of my mark for IB Higher Level Film so here's hoping it gets a good mark!

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