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  • Stefanie Oberhansley wrote "Shadows in the Window" and that! is a great psychological thriller ;) available on Amazon.com!

  • is the beginning of this video,screenshots from the 1st metal gear video game?

  • thy should give him a free dinner at shenanigans for free advertising!

  • i never read twilight nor am i interested in reading it from what i've been told. i've been told not to waste my life on them. what blew my mind was when twilight fans screamed how anne rice and stephen king are jealous of myers when rice and king commented that myer's books suck and "are a failure of the imagination". what does stephen king and anne rice have to be jealous of? absolutely nothing.

  • Once one of my moms friend sai do you like twilight and i said no twilight sucks vampires dont sparkle and its full of posers and than she said its a love story sweety and i said no it isnt underworld is a love story and they dont sparkle

  • CITY OF BONES IT WAY BETTER BOOK THEN TWILIGHT!! the writer really tells believable story in that book and twilight is just KISSING!!! T.T

  • Kill twilight hehe

  • These Paper Shredder reviews are so cool! You really need to make more of them.

    I still hope that you will.

  • I love you xD

  • The Grammer and Sentancing In This Review Was Clearly Much Better then Any used in the Entire Book of Twighlight, The Review Was Clearly More Entertaining then Any Part Of Twilight, Infact this review is so Good and exact that im Sure Edward would be sparkling with joy if he ever watched it.

  • Lol! I love this *SO* much! And you for making this. Although I think there's more I would have added regarding the inconsistencies an all that. But it's so nice hearing people point out stuff other than "he's a sparkly vampire!"

  • 17 people missed the like button.....

    This has to be one of the best reviews of Twishit on Youtube. It's funny and cutting at the same time, and only a very talented reviewer can do that. And that talented reviewer, is you. Thank you!!!! =D

  • No no no no HELL no

    XD 4:00

  • This is the BEST review of Twilight I have ever read er..watched! You had me laughing the entire time! Thank you so much for covering all the points of the book that sucked, I agree wholeheartedly with you!

  • This 100% true I didn't even have to read the book I read the back and saw that it was going to be a SUCKY book so I just sold it to get more money than it's really worth

  • @AkatsukiCynthia In Walmart when it first came out I looked at the back. I love reading and often look for new books to read, but the synophosis on the back of Twilight let me know immediately that nothing was gonna happen and the plot was gonna have me shaking my head. (I hate romance novels BTW).

  • Hahaha I am sooo glad I found this!!

  • Twilight was a major headache.

  • i have a feeling that you're a 4channer.

    amirite?

  • Dude this is great. This is kind of like zero punctuation for books.

  • wow....youre good

  • Twilight has actually furthered my belief that Idocracy was right and we should all be very affraid for the human race. SMeyer has not only effortlessly destroyed vampire literature but the hope that decent writers will eventually be viewed as highly as they once were. We have no more room for the authors who may not be as famous, but are deffiently note worthy, all of our attention has sadly gone to Twilight.

    Kudos on your review. Although the volume was to low on the spoken parts.

  • Wo-hoo! Awesome video! You are my idol :)

  • The Twilight Saga was hearty ! I found it as a freebie at ** twilight-now . com **

  • Thank you for coming up with actual arguments instead of running around yelling "twilightsux!" it really helps our cause...that being said I could barely hear you. I had to turn my speakers up all the way, which was just lovely when your normal-volume ending music came back on...I nearly pissed my pants.

  • Amen to that.

  • Lemon wedges, LOL

  • You, sir, are my newest hero.

  • Twilight is perfectly summed up in two words: HURP DURP.

  • If I ever found myself in Room 101, I'd see a copy of Twilight on the table.

  • Notice how the writer of this comment manages to spell the most simple words wrong, yet then spells the bigger words right, i mean twilight was originally just another love story, yet stephanie realised that it was actually a piece of garbage so she added vampires and later werewolves, which made it even worse and pretended like it fixed everything.

  • Dag yo. In a good way.

  • @twilightedward09 way to be a hypocrite, i don't care what you do but don't do this or this. fucking fail

  • bram stoker must turn himself in his grave

    SHAME ON YOU TWILIGHT

  • This is the most educated (and funny. let's not forget funny.) Twilight bashing on youtube. 5 Mother fucking stars, dude.

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  • 7:15 She's firing her lazar, very good review 5/5

  • The 9 minutes and 29 seconds it took me to watch this totally made my day. 8D

  • Some books strive for that extra level and become genuine crap. As a note, though, "incandescent" actually makes perfect sense as a descriptor, since it means "a hot body glowing white" (which fits perfectly with Edward as "a cool hottie!!!1"); and the "verbose" bit is clearly intended as understatement, the same way "you're not the smartest of people" is code for "moron".

  • thumbs up X 9001

  • I saw the movie back in my high school, and the only thing that I actually remembered was the hottie who played Edward's sister, Alice.

  • awesome!!!

  • Translators are often very bad and yours is no exception. That Spanish phrases were awfully written. How do I know? Because Spanish is my mother tongue, and a language that you don't have the right to insult when you, obviously, don't know it

  • The sound is too low.

  • I luv this review!

    Twilight sucks!

    Down with gay fairies!

    I mean vampires!

    wait, in twililight, its the SAME THING!

  • tru that.

  • Good review.

    But there's a major problem with the video. The spoken portions are WAY too quiet, especially compared with the intro and outro music. I had normal volume for the intro, had to dial it way up to actually listen to the comentary, then rush to turn the volume back town when the end titles hit.

  • Preach.

  • HE SPEAKS THE TRUTH! FINALLY, SOMEONE WHO SPEAKS THE LOGICAL TRUTH.

    I picked up that book on the recommendation of a friend and I'm still blasting her for it.

    BEST REVIEW EVER. Have you gotten a medal yet? Seriously, you deserve one.

  • Truly an excellent vid.

  • You sir are truly the king, of kings.

    Best. Review. Ever.

  • I'm sorry but how does shit like twilight become popular? I've got way more imaginative ideas for books! How did this happen? Did one girl who read it just suddenly group together with others on the internet and hype it up? Seriously, the book is crap, and so is the movie.

  • In answer to your question MaguireMart,Twishite became popular because there are more retarded, stupid people in this world than you think. 'Nough said.

    As for my comment, yea, I'm a girl...who's 13 years old. This video was awesome! Really good points narrowed down into ten minutes. PS: Damn! Why can't I double-subscribe?

  • And here is the second part of Twilight we hate, the fandom.

  • IMO, if you replace any instance of "vampire" with "fae" (not the Tinkerbell and fairy godmother type, but the classic scare-the-kids-into-obedience stuff) everything makes so much more sense.

  • Awe-Some. This is, by far, the best review of Twilight I've seen yet. I dunno if you've already decided to do your series yet, but if you haven't, I strongly sugest you do.

    Just as a sidenote, your speaking (Or whatever it's called, I can't think of anything intellegent to say) itself was rather low volume in contrast to the music and the video clip proclaming (I think) "He's DANGEROUS!"

  • This is the best review of it sinces the invention of slice bread. You sir, deserve a fucking metal.

  • Thank you, oh thank you! I'm reading the books myself right now.. But mostly so I can abuse myself everytime someone hot enters the story.

  • If the cake wasnt a lie i'd give it to you.

  • CrownedDaemon... Have my babies you made a 10 minute review saying all the truth.

  • for the ones who read the above message, mrs... XAllenX just wrote in horrible spanish: "I twilight hate a lot . Edward is a big bitch. thanks for your very kind-s- comments. eat shit and -diead- now please.

    Im sorry, I don't talk the penis language."

    so I believe she, he, it, is just a troll...

    and btw, allen, if for some reason, by this... "And people say you don't learn things in school. " you are refering ironically to learn spanish, sorry... but you fail at it.

  • ...how many books have you read besides Twilight, exactly? That book (oh, my mistake, horrendously long FANFIC) was absolutely PAINFUL to read. Personally, I found Clifford to be much more influential than that piece of insufferable crap. Try reading something that's ACTUALLY good and I can guarantee you will see Twilight for the worthless waste of perfectly good paper that it is (Personally, I find it quite insulting that trees had to die for copies of it to be made in the first place).

  • Hey man, Don't be comparing Clifford the Big Red Dog to Twilight, I grew up on that shit.

  • This is great! I love how you tackled every absurd detail this moron's "work" if it can even be called as such. You also managed to squeeze in some humor and creativity with the pictures and comments XD I also loved how you used your Halo character rather than just recording yourself. Your ranting tone of voice also contributed the video's allure. The only suggestion I could make is if you give more time to read the comments on the pictures. Other than that it was a great video and I enjoyed it

  • KrisAllen, please. Go. Die. Twilight was a piece of literature in the sense that an ice-cold cup of piss is lemonade.

  • Go listen to your silly American Idol winner who makes "JIZZ IN MY PANTS" expressions.

  • Oh Kate you silly sow!

  • so very funny it was worth watching

  • You are the reason why youtube is awesome and should have more people like you on the Internet.

    Thanks for telling how it is and for giving us an awesome video. :D

    You fucking rock! <3

  • i heavily second and support your opinion :D and yes THANK YOU!! for finally speaking up against this crap that is twilight (more like twifag amirite?) you completely read my mind about my opinion of it, couldn't say it better :) please do go ahead and review the second movie for more of its senselessness

  • Too quiet dude, I actually can't hear you

  • @hopey50 OMG, WE HAVE MORE FANZ AND DAT MEANS QUALITY111!

    Seriously, do you have any idea how fucking stupid you are? Popularity does not equal quality

    and most games have better storylines than Twatlight

  • 33 billion fans <- *sigh*

    This is representative of the overall twi-fag intelligence.

    (God I hope you're a troll)

  • Fail troll.

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  • Twilight is the McDonalds of the literature world. Just because it is popular, doesn't mean it is good.

  • McDonalds is fucking good! (just not for your health)

  • @Hopey50

    You fail due to your excessive amount of stupidity.

  • Over 33 billion.... there is only six billion people on the planet :|. i will tell you this, pong has a better story than twilight, and pong has no story at all, also you can call gamers losers as much as you want, yet there is probably more people who have played a video game than read a twilight book.

  • Thank you so very much for this review. I fully agree on your points and honestly, I have read through to the end of the third one and nearly died in the attempt. The books are horrid and honestly deserve every bit of hate that people give to them. I can't wait for your next review.

  • Two thumbs way up! Keep these reviews rolling!

  • Speak louder!

  • Ah, this is amazing.

    Will you marry me? =D hahaha.

  • Great video. =) I can't wait to see more from you.

  • Just a suggestion: The intro and ending sound is much louder then the sound in the middle, thats not good to make viewers adjust the sound multiple times for your video.

  • awesome review ^^

  • thats so disgusting how bella is like 16 or whatever and EDWARD IS FREAKIN 172 YEARS OLD WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!vampires do not fall in love with people and have sex with them but they rape them and kill them and also make them there minions what ever happened to the real vampire movies like van helsen or blade that was kick ass because there was killing and action ya thats what we want GOD DAME ACTION

    why couldn't edward like kill some one an and then make the victim his minion

  • lol

  • ZOMG Jesus Christ Superstar.

    Epic.

  • If it's not blatantly obvious from my other post, this is probably one of the best Twilight reviews I've read, and I've read a good many Twilight reviews.

  • THANK YOU I'm off to show this to all my stupid Twi-tard friends xD

  • I love you. THANK YOU for making this video. I work in a bookstore and it scares me how many people like this book. I can take Tweens coming in for it. I tell myself that they just don't know any better; that they are more than likely following the crowd, will wake up in a few years and learn what real literature is. It's the adult women that come in asking for it that make me sick. I'm a young (24) woman, but I honestly just DO NOT see the attraction. How she ever got published is beyond me.

  • @MelPo85

    Stephanie Meyer probably had a blind editor 0.o ...If she actually had one at all.

  • @DaCapoFan  I say the editors really didn't give a fuck. After the umpteenth error in the first paragraph, just gave up.

  • Wait...so you're claiming that I have poor reasons for disliking Twilight, after I made a nine minute video explicitly stating what I disliked about it? Are you for real? I dislike Twilight for every reason I posted in the video. Maybe you should actually watch it, you might learn something. While you're at it, learn to increase your repertoire of insults beyond 'retarded' and 'kill yourself'.

  • Curious as to what response this fellow could muster to such a fantastic review, I decided to check his channel for the promised "last video". Considering his intellectual debate appears to be giving a finger to the camera, then gyrating at the air, I'm not sure he has the intellectual capacity to increase his repertoire of insults beyond 'retarded' on account of being so himself.

    Of course, this is a Twilight fanboy, so I was not particularly surprised.

  • FanBOY?

    *Quickly watches video in question*

    ...

    BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA

    HAHAHAHAHA

    AHAHAHAHA

    OH WOW.

  • Indeed.

  • pffft. you seem SO intelligent yourself, what with your gooder grammars. lol

  • A Twitard calling others trash when they read a book with no plot, characterisation or anything decent?

  • Stop assuming that people are retarded because they think that something sucks and don't have a reason behind it. Obviously every person has a reason for not liking the books.

    I hate Twilight because of the fact that it's a pile of rotting garbage that a shit ton of people seem to be in love with. It has no actual plot, no real characters and is a mary sue fanfiction that miraculously got published.

  • @VCG

    Did you get dropped on the head as a young one?

  • What I like MOST about your video is that not only do you have legitimate reasons for your beliefs but you also explain them very clearly. The pictures and little text is a major plus by the way. Though I agree you might want to raise your voice volume a bit :] 5/5 from me...

  • THIS IS AMAZING. you should TOTALLY review the whole series. for the lulz.

  • i agree with you i think it is crap

  • Congratulation on having the best review on Twilight.

    You should do New Moon, because I actually think that book is the best of them (Because that book had Jacob while he was a decent interesting character, at least compared to other main characters in this series)

  • I torrented the e-book, figuring that having Microsoft Sam read the book to me would be more tolerable then having to read it.

    Even with that I still only got through the first two chapters before closing the program, backing up my files and wiping my hard drive to purge the sin from my computer.

  • That was beautiful.

  • That's a much better alternative to seeing the movies. I'm sure Microsoft Sam can deliver much more emotion to the dialogue than Kristen Stewart.

    Assuming Microsoft Sam can stomach hundreds of pages worth of it.

  • Raise your fucking volume when you are talking. The song in the intro was about 10x louder.

  • I agree that he should raise the volume, but don't you think you could have said that without giving off that attitude?

  • Finally someone o thinks alike. I was starting to believe I was alone in the world.

  • Shakespeare and Edgar Allan Poe ftw!!!

  • I like you

  • 1. Fuck The Sea Kittens.

    2. You deserve 1337 internets.

    3. Have a cookie.

  • CrownedDaemon, I don't know who you are, but I think you're the tightest mother fucker I know of.

  • @fwirl102 i 100% fckn agree

    a rant with facts!

  • In a way, the romantic outcome is worse than Romeo and Juliet. After a few months of knowing each other, they will end up having to spend eternity with each other. Yeah, didn't think that through too well huh?

  • bravo

  • Hilarious.  Great review.

  • Edward Cullen is not a vampire; because HE'S A FUCKING BLOOD SUCKING PIXIE

  • The fucker doesn't even drink human blood.

  • Exactly! He's a pussy.

  • @Chitsurine in fact, he's a leech- it explains everything perfectly: Shiny bodies (because of slime), they have venom (to prevent blood from clotting), they actually suck blood (from other animals and humans, if they so wish). And leeches could totally use catapults to fly through the air. xD

  • Bitch killed Bambi's mom.

  • What plot? What romance? I believe you mean 'lust'. Everything you said... you took the words right out of my mouth. 5 stars! I REALLY hate the series. And this video narrows everything about it down into nine minutes.

  • I thought this is a video involved the Twilight books..and a paper shredder..

  • In a way it is, but it's more in a metaphorical way then anything else.

  • Anyway, the books sucks..

  • Hate stephanie Meyer

    Hate the books

    Hate the acclaim

    but most of all hate the ignorant fan girls.

    In the year 2010, stupid teen mothers will name their chilren Bella or Edward after that shitty book Twilight

  • You forgot one thing: Edward's a pedo.

  • absolutely brilliant. you get a gold star :o

  • When I gave twilight a try, I felt like I was reading a fanfic too! Could not agree with this video anymore.

  • Someone needs to do a word count on the word "glowering" in twilight. I swear it was in the book at least 7 times.

  • 3:06 Kyon knows that Twilight sucks too XD

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  • What's sad is, this book is only SLIGHTLY better from Ed's point of view.

  • Alucard FTW!!!

    Al would probably just eat Ed at first glance.

  • Alucard would dark metamorphosis into pedocullen's kidneys and destroy it completely.

  • Chuck Norris once read this book, it took the team Mr. T, Jack Bouer, and, Vin Diesel to get him out from under his bed

    oh yeah ITS THAT BAD

    I read it on a bus to North Carolina (Church trip) and I read it I forgot who gave it to me my first thought did my Language Arts teacher wrote it this there where so many pointless big words in there and I was just waiting and waiting for the plot for a long time (and im a pretty fast reader so it shouldnt take that long) I died a little inside

  • I agree with everything you said but I do like the books.The books are REALLY unoriginal!

  • Well said!

  • That is exactly what I said

  • One day i'm going to have to suck it up and read the whole stupid Saga. Twatlight, Suck moon, Relapse, and Breaking Logic.

    Before it got popular I read up till the second chapter before I was bored out of my mind. I had an easier time reading The Great Gatsby or Ferinheight451.

  • I wish you luck on that; I could barely get past the first book (ok, so I admit... I may have skipped a few pages here and there). XDD

  • I can't even get past the title page!

  • 3:33 lol kitty

  • Oedipus style, ftw. <3

    Also, the reason they sparkle, that she actually stated in an interview, is that she had a "dream" about sparkling beings and she thought it was cool.

    Also, why her vampire ideas are so off and contradicting is also in an interview she stated that she had NEVER READ or WATCHED a VAMPIRE BOOK/FILM. She watched half of "interview with a Vampire" after Twilight became popular.

  • "she had NEVER READ or WATCHED a VAMPIRE BOOK/FILM."

    You know, that's what I never understood... If she's never read/watched anything about vamps, why call the creatures in her books vampires? It really doesn't make sense.

  • Love your rant. It was informitave and true while being hilarious at the same! Well done,my man! Also, I like how you used Halo as a "stage". Very creative.

  • I love Twilight but seriously this was Hilarius!! So funny!

  • OOH! Plot twist idea. Bella's father finds out and tries to get her away. And succeeds. Making Ed have to actually attempt to prove himself rather than just stand there and look pretty.

    Bigger plot twist, her father gets turned into a vampire and she has to kill him. See I'm having ideas pop into my head. I'd bet money that I could take this series, apply the changes and rename the characters; and no one would even know I'd done it.

  • Dude. You are my new hero. This review put into words what I've been trying to say.

    I would also like to point out that this book has no deep level of reason why it's good. Harry Potter has that. Pendragon has that. Even Eragon has that.

    When I ask people why they like these books their answer is never: OMG HARRY IS SO HOT!!! OMFG I WANT TO MARRY HIM!!! Granted this isn't the response I get from every Twilight fan but the fact that I get it MOST of the time says a lot.

  • What about the land sharks? Do we need to save them, too?

  • YESYESYES!

    I could cry from the sheer win and truth coming from your mouth. 1,000 internets to you my good sir. :)

  • That was incredible! Really. That was pretty damn awesome.

  • I. Love. You.

    Really. I love you now for making this XD

  • what was 7:44 from?

  • That's a theme, not symbolism, and in either case it was poorly explored.

  • Bless you, sir, bless you!

    I hated Twilight too. It was so bad it made me cringe.

  • Win. Just win. Lots of win. Lots and lots of win. Thank you sir.

  • Edward is basically a better looking version of Count Duckula (an old British TV show featuring a veggie vampire).