Wag The Dog (Show Me Your Glory)

[baconboi10]

I was looking for show me your genitals and this shit comes up

[Creepyshmeegs]

Wow...

[TheUnitedFreak]

tee hee ^_^ thank you!

[utunderground]

WOW! so emotionaly discriptive, fantastic 5/5

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

glad you enjoyed it!

[cvillemag]

Very nice.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[RaxxieSpeaks]

wow.. 2 snaps hun, 2 snaps!

[TheUnitedFreak]

wow! ^_^ thank you!

i'm flattered! ^_^

[RICKNASTE]

wow. this is a nice piece of poetry. thanks for posting!

[Escagedo3rd]

Thought provoking.

Five stars......Eloy

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you Eloy! ^_^

that's just what i wanted to provoke ^_^

[dudeanwalker]

very cool and dark!!!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you!  ^_^

glad you liked it!

[cardellacole1]

if you ever feel this lonly think of the archityple psychomotor ,and at night we will go on an electron ride and like lovers we will dissapear into the storm

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you Bill! ^_^

i enjoy you thoroughly!! ^_^

[TheUnitedFreak]

idk, i give up...  how?

^_^

[MomoDelicious]

dig the poetry, nice reading as well

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

glad you enjoyed it!

[smartbluecat]

Wow! This is so good. Great pacing! Fantastic imagery!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

i am so honored by your comments!

[mantisofgold]

I just got back from grocery shopping. Wandering the aisles, feeling lost and lonely. Pointless existance crumbling away as I scan the aisles for sale ticket items. Occasionally smileing at a pretty face.

This video was medicine for me. It even tasted alright going down. Peace

[TheUnitedFreak]

such sweet words ^_^ thank you!

i am tickled a the thought!! ^_^

[colamoonpig]

Brilliant poem Anne ! I love you're voice !

5/5

Hans :o)

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you Hans! ^_^

you are such a sweetheart!

[philipsmovies]

Excellent poetry,i had to watch it twice as i didn't get it the first time! I particularly liked the last verse.They should show this to that stupid Palin woman and that McCain gadgy and then someone could explain to them what a cunt is!

[TheUnitedFreak]

LOL ^_^

destined to become a classic huh? i think it will always bare some similarity around election time  ^_^

^_^ thank you!

[mft1234]

Well done.  Excellent sound.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you!  ^_^

[Kabuki0009]

A very dark poem filled with all manner of tragedies, how deliciously morbid *****stars;)

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you darlin' ^_^

so glad you dig the flavor!

[bootleggersouth]

Contemplative eroticism of the spiritual realm. Brutal, beautiful, and honest.*****

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

so glad my words could fall on kindred ears ^_^

[christopherinsc1981]

Cool this was great! I do have to say you gave me a bit of a chuckle when you said Would a smarter dog not have chewed off his own genitals to be free from the desire to lick them?

[TheUnitedFreak]

right on! ^_^ thanx!

glad it tickled you!

[DJNUMBERNINE]

I neva wana cum back eva. Let's hope we don't. Big Love. 9

[TheUnitedFreak]

always hope my friend ^_^

[darrendwightswanson]

I wish I could make a video for you girl... Blessings... ENTICIA send me an invite will you please!!!

[TheUnitedFreak]

oh yes my friend! ^_^ i am honored!

let's do be in touch! ^_^

look at me, you got me all smiles ^_^

[Tressco]

Now, that's deep!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[rickdav79]

relaxing..5*****

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

glad you enjoyed it!

[missgriffin77]

All I can say is "Wow"!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you so much! ^_^

[marcellaboccia]

LOVE*****

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[CommentSense]

Enough of this ... Shouldn't I give someone else a turn? No bared soul exists and refuse to learn. No worship. No Constance. No thing. Here.

[TheUnitedFreak]

it was a long time ago...

i'm greatful for much since...

but there is truth there still...

is there not? ^_^

[janeczka]

The music fits the piece perfectly. Well done.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you so much! ^_^

[paddycake5201]

i have heard alot of poets on youtube,but that just blew me away.5*****,i wish it was 10....later...patrick

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you Patrick! ^_^

i am honored by your compliment! ^_^

[mkuebler5]

Brilliant piece of writing and wonderful to listen to.

peace

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

i'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[AcidEntertainment]

Wow! I LOVE this presentation. I've seen some of the poetry channels, and this is very unique. It wasn't on purpose, but somehow I always find myself drawn to all the poets! I am one myself, maybe that's why! You all so inspiring. Well, well done!

Brandi Lynn Borgia

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you so much! ^_^

i would love to encourage you to post your poetry! i'm so glad you were drawn to me ^_^

[spiderskull999]

5/5

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

you rock cheesemonkey!

[oneangryspirit]

your Fabulous !!! 5 stars and 1 wonder

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

so glad you took the time to listen! ^_^

[hummiemd]

hmm very interesting work. it brings me to a time when i was in a similar mood and writing poems (now lost since i have moved). brilliant work, dear. very intriguing way of delivering your piece with music to enhance the mood.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^ so glad you enjoyed it!

sorry to hear about your lost poetry...

i know how it felt to loose some of mine...

i hope that you can be inspired to write more ^_^

[katybrewer1]

I just LOVE it.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[mesmoland]

I hear this maybe a bit different,it sounds so wonderfully soft...like you are patting a cloud for me to rest my head on,its the way the sound hits me.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

i love the way you hear it...

it was quite comforting to me at the time when i wrote and performed it...

i'm glad you got something out of it ^_^

[grumpgus]

HEAVY!! An apocalyptic metal tune if I ever imagined one.. done with a soft pleasant voice and beautiful guitar line.. interesting contrast there. Love it! Thanks for sharing Cerebral D. !

[TheUnitedFreak]

now that you mention it... i would be curious to see what that might sound like...

thank you for the compliment and the interesting thought!  ^_^

[leftysergeant]

You are very challenging. I shall probably not have understood all of this until I have read it a time or two and listened to your inflections. I think it would be worth the time to ponder.

[TheUnitedFreak]

wow ^_^  i am honored by your comment!

thank you for taking the time to listen ^_^

[reverendgisher]

powerful,angry, and brilliant.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank YOU! ^_^

[reverendgisher]

not blowing smoke. you deserve it. you do know that right?

[TheUnitedFreak]

from some i wonder...

from you there's no doubt ^_^

my thanx are sincere and i'm so glad you took the time to listen! ^_^

[Rhonda9]

Well done.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[A2GVB]

That's One for My Youtube members Playlist No 15 . A Selection of Members ideas Music and singers, who are easy on the ear. A Selection of Videos I think you might find interesting

[TheUnitedFreak]

wow, i'm honored ^_^ thank you!

i will have to check that out ^_^

[A2GVB]

Your welcome I belive you are one of a kind Gerry :O)

[TheUnitedFreak]

so are you! ^_^

[jasmine1960]

wow love this love the words fab video thanks for sharing

[TheUnitedFreak]

oh no, thank YOU! ^_^

it is my pleasure, i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[PoohBear02003]

WOW! That was great. You are very good. Love to see you vlog your work. I just love the words.

Hope to see you soon? Maybe? :)

Pººhßear

[TheUnitedFreak]

soon... maybe? ^_^

and thank you again!

"The suspense is terrible... I hope it'll last!" ~ Willy Wonka ~

[Proshka]

Bravo, it's so lovely to meet you my new found friend on the tube....

proshka

[TheUnitedFreak]

gracias mi diosa-artista! ^_^

[Thalysiakeuh]

great one !

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[FreakMindZero]

Just brilliant!!!

You shocked me...

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you my fellow freak ^_^

i'm so glad you enjoyed it!

[RobsStudio]

I don't know what to say, just so good!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

that is a true compliment!

[JPaulDiLucci]

just brilliant writing, great reading voice too, I'm a fan -jPaul

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you!

i'm honored  ^_^

[tps607]

Anne,I am a wag.......

[TheUnitedFreak]

^_^

pleased to meet you...

[tps607]

...and I have been wagged...........

[TheUnitedFreak]

me too  ^_^

[tps607]

...life...

[TheUnitedFreak]

indeed  ^_^

[tps607]

in every thing....

[TheUnitedFreak]

if we're lucky  ^_^

[tps607]

remember,there are both kinds...........

[TheUnitedFreak]

you are going to be fun ^_^

[tps607]

said the cat to the mouse.....

[TheUnitedFreak]

we shall see said the blind ^_^

[tps607]

you have to have a feel for it......

[TheUnitedFreak]

ok, you win ^_^

you have tickled my fancy...

[tjkoz22]

I really like your edgy style! Pleased to meet you, Ann.

Tom Kozlowski

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

i am equally pleased to meet you Tom  ^_^

[joey0028]

beautiful words my friend! xjoeyx

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^ my friend!

^_^

[ashtray999]

wow...

[TheUnitedFreak]

^_^

[twdmusic]

Exceptionally written and read :)

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[wolfgang8u]

great poem. I got my own perception of what it means but i wont disclose that for it is for he that have an ear to dicipher. may also lite shine for you which it has. Your really talented.

[TheUnitedFreak]

it delights me to imagine ^_^

thank you for your blessings and compliments!

[TonyFernandez456]

wow your getting 154 views in like how many hours??dude your gonna get popular real fast =)

[TheUnitedFreak]

we shall see said the blind ^_^

thanx for noticeing ^_^

[RedRej]

It's a dark place we all inhabit. Great poem!

[TheUnitedFreak]

so true... ^_^

thank you!

[natdog225]

this is a real thinker =) keep them poem coming. good job!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

i definately will ^_^

[Cheesemonkey6699]

you have a great voice . your poems make me think.5/5

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you so much ^_^  i'm so glad!

[mattskool69]

i like it

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you ^_^

[TheUnitedFreak]

LOL ^_^

i know it looks like i'm talking to myself...

but i'm not ^_^

i do talk to myself, but...

just push the view all comments button...

^_^

[max202012]

Omg this is so going in the favorites

[TheUnitedFreak]

wow ^_^ that made me smile!

thank you! ^_^

[ferdinand31388]

This is the best poem i've ever heard since the day of my existence in 1988. LOL. Well Done!

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you so much! ^_^

i am touched...

what a beautiful compliment!

[TailstheGuardian]

omg! I love this poem! 5/5

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[tashicutz]

your really talented this poem is amazing...

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[leontimmermans]

a serene gloom

of dark water

rising

i love it

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

my desires of serenity have always led me to the only waters they have ever know... dark ^_^

[wTARTZAw]

I personally think this is your best poem till now.. somehow I really really liked it from the first line to the last..

I really love this kind of poetry ♥

(..dark... but still clever)

[TheUnitedFreak]

i'm so glad it tickles you in just the right way! ^_^

i have a bunch more to post before we even get to the stuff i'm writing today...

bright and sunshiney i am not, but clever i pull off at times ^_^

thank you so much! ^_^

[KaizerSS22]

Great poem.

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[selvojr]

Very Nice ! ! !

*****

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[Cinzia7]

Very nice, keep going ^_^

[TheUnitedFreak]

thank you! ^_^

[CommentSense]

IF YOU ended up HERE, you'd never want to GO back! ;=] I bet you my insanity tho not tradeable could be compareable... hahaaaaa...

Your accompaniest must know you well. Safe passageways safe havens taking the low road in the subliminal terrain to a naked lunch.

[TheUnitedFreak]

^_^ you're the best!

... even this is a road well traveled when in good company! ^_^

[tzruo]

and behind this... silence,

what a flow... whow great.

greez

wiesel

[TheUnitedFreak]

you are so sweet ^_^

thank you! (hugs)