Melody was simple yet the lyrics were straight from the heart.. put some bridges and refrain in your song and presto your composition surely a hit love song someday... keep it up man!..
Hey Jerry, you have done a very good Job!!! Very nice Song you wrote!!! Sorry when my english is not so good, i´m from Austria and I´m learning now when I sing also song´s in English.
hey as always great job.
Thanks Jim Weese
jimweesesr 3 months ago
this my friend is without a doubt excellent love all your music keep the music rolling respect from joe
weejoeshadows 3 months ago
Excellent lyrics. I agree with nieer2007, melody needs some attention.
qas2011 3 months ago
Melody was simple yet the lyrics were straight from the heart.. put some bridges and refrain in your song and presto your composition surely a hit love song someday... keep it up man!..
nieer2007 3 months ago
Beautiful song Jerry! Thank you!
Veolette100 3 months ago
This is an excellent original! And a wonderful job of singing it my friend!!Lee
oscarshwartz 3 months ago
Wonderful song and performance Jerry!!!!!
Have a wonderful weekend!
annemaree 3 months ago
Really nice buddy! Have a great weekend! TCB, Marty
martian953 3 months ago
Hey Jerry, you have done a very good Job!!! Very nice Song you wrote!!! Sorry when my english is not so good, i´m from Austria and I´m learning now when I sing also song´s in English.
MiggiMusikInfo 3 months ago
This just keeps getting better and better!
DesertRatDan 3 months ago
Wonderful song you wrote Jerry and a wonderful job singing it!!!!!
jtls8 3 months ago
Oh man, this is good stuff! I'd like to blow a little harp to this if it's okay with you?
DesertRatDan 3 months ago