Alan I would echo David's comments. I did really like the 7 points you made and they were well made.
It was the second title, with your objectives that passed too quickly.
You did appear a liitle lost in the background AND I found your voice to be very quiet. Also agree re the reflection.
If you want to borrow a Video to Digital coverter I have one you can use!
Gerry
gerryprewett 1 year ago
I enjoyed this speech Alan. It is relevant my shopping needs and interests. It is clearly structured and well articulated. I have a few suggestions.
The Titles at the beginning were too short in time for me to read them through.
I would like your head and shoulder to be higher on the screen and closer. You were very small in the total space.
There is significant reflection off your specs.
It was easy to watch, to follow you material and to enjoy it.
David
davidatshelley 1 year ago
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Alan I would echo David's comments. I did really like the 7 points you made and they were well made.
It was the second title, with your objectives that passed too quickly.
You did appear a liitle lost in the background AND I found your voice to be very quiet. Also agree re the reflection.
If you want to borrow a Video to Digital coverter I have one you can use!
Gerry
gerryprewett 1 year ago
I enjoyed this speech Alan. It is relevant my shopping needs and interests. It is clearly structured and well articulated. I have a few suggestions.
The Titles at the beginning were too short in time for me to read them through.
I would like your head and shoulder to be higher on the screen and closer. You were very small in the total space.
There is significant reflection off your specs.
It was easy to watch, to follow you material and to enjoy it.
David
davidatshelley 1 year ago