@imafuckingmuffinx3 It's like Edmund brought her what he promised through her neighbor (that little kid) to fulfill his promise to bring her that candy he gave her years ago on that same day. And the incident only reminded her of him more that's why she cried. That even in death, Edmund will always be around and will always keep his promise.
hmm. it's fiction. all of my story-vids are. geez, i'm damn happy this story was viewed. i thought it'd be so lame nobody would leave a comment. xD thanks <3
wow.... just wow... this is amazing! .. i've got my heart in my throat, and no idea what to say, but had to say SOMEthing
MikeYeataMyname 6 months ago
hahahahahaha he died on my birthday
generallyricki 7 months ago
omg this story actually made me cry it breaks my heart
956LOWRIDER 10 months ago
soooo sad!!!
jamyjam321 1 year ago
OMG it's reallly sad
animelover45234 1 year ago
thats really sad
CrazyRockr 1 year ago
i guess she really did get her gift from edmund because the little boy like edmund knew he was going to die. had me in tears... ONCE AGAIN
AlyssaBieberLOOVER1 1 year ago
awww thats really sweet xx sooo sad xxx
pach500 1 year ago
well wrighten
icookfood1 1 year ago
Wow. This really bring me the tears. Nice one. ^ v ^ b
keitolover 1 year ago
Gave me goosebumps....Beautiful story,Well done dear!!!!
xXxIMissUXxX 1 year ago
i really dont understand the end
imafuckingmuffinx3 1 year ago
@imafuckingmuffinx3 It's like Edmund brought her what he promised through her neighbor (that little kid) to fulfill his promise to bring her that candy he gave her years ago on that same day. And the incident only reminded her of him more that's why she cried. That even in death, Edmund will always be around and will always keep his promise.
yootyoob101 1 year ago
1,000th viewer!
Andy2x4 1 year ago
thats really sad
zabba101 1 year ago
:'( thats is very sad
jerrycentifanti 1 year ago
it was a great story :D
although, it went a little too fast.
still good :)
creativelymorgan 1 year ago
This is fiction isn't it? Because as soon as I saw the ending it sent me to tears.... I really do hope that this doesn't happen to anyone
hoiyeeanita 2 years ago
hmm. it's fiction. all of my story-vids are. geez, i'm damn happy this story was viewed. i thought it'd be so lame nobody would leave a comment. xD thanks <3
yootyoob101 2 years ago
@hoiyeeanita yeah I cryed too and the end!
brooklin652 1 year ago
Great Vid! i give you two thumbs up. i just wonder if this did happen... its so sad...
richmondk20 2 years ago 2