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  • cant stand the ladies, riding in mercedes, throwin the bomb like its a katy, screwin these bitches actin like their stitches, people tryin to jump me, shoot them in their face like theres no end to this trend and no end to makin a bend.. im evil, im the squequal, you cant stop me from being me, like ice tea, or mike bean.

  • Great Job;)

  • Rollin windows down, rollin doobies up, gotta chill with her if she gotta fat but, you no that she a straight slut, with no make up, wake up, gotta smoke that blunt,imma baked fuck, straight up, u know that bein high just aint enough, sittin here got some purple drank in my cup, bitches complainin tell they ass to shut the fuck up

  • Nobody can touch me. Think you can? lets battle

  • Dun beat you up made it hard to see, quick glitch, quick kick, get off ya knees. small nigga, got a big chain n a big name, big house, big cars, n a little big thang, in it. Now its hard to see, tinted, Black eye, bloody nose, gotta speak slurred, wake up thinkin you can see, but everythings blurred. tricks cant talk shit n they bit that spiff, now everybody's a lil bit diff', when ya fall on the ground its like ya fell off a cliff, now ya down on ya knees, praying, hoping you can get lift, ted.
  • Sometimes things are just so hard for me, then people wanna make it worst, it hurts awfully, Hurt, at the sickest times so I merk, with the twisted rhymes, go back to where you were, someone make this sickness go without return, this quick shit makes me wanna leave Earth, just to quick pitch and turn down burnps. yes, i mean the birds, high-pitch voices, understand my words? cant read my writing must be some dyslexic kids, i see through their hearts, as if their anorexic kids. -Robin Hood.
  • 216 in this bitch for we the creators u can not touch our style evry body wanna sound like bone get of their dick and do ur own style

  • fl studio pads. orchastal strings fruity kick aquistic guitar, sickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

  • sick beat yeah this a bomb ass track

    but it aint as sick as me ill inject ya mom with smack

    infact you talk smack you retards just posting 3 bars

    you looking stupid and wierd like dudes in leotards

    you homos suck id beat ya if ya black or white

    i dont know how you dudes think ya raps are tight

    in a freestyle you'd getbeaten by gladys knight

    im not even jokin i believe this shit would happen man

    fuck it im'a leave this bitch talk smack again

  • Fucking VW

  • hahah using stock sounds, get some vsts man..

  • What u think? This music is worst than blink you stink 

  • @snip3r95 just like you

  • First, what's up with the car in the video? 2nd- I definitely wouldn't call it a rap beat...sounds like a dance beat to me...and the kick and snares are definitely not hip-hop... I'll say it sounds more of a hip pop beat. But, if you're a novice at making hip-hop beats, keep listening to "REAL" hip-hop and continue to perfect your craft.

  • OK,MAN,DAMN,THIS BEAT IS THA SHIT,MAN THAT RAP SHOE FITS,FLOW WIT ALL MY WIT,U KNOW I GOTTA GET.U NOT CLOSE HOMIE,U FAVRE LIKE BRET,UR BITCH STAYS I KEEP HER WET,JUS GOT OUT THA JET,FROM NY LIKE THA METS,NEVER,U KNOW THA FLOW STAYS CLEVER,NOT MY BEST ENDEAVOR GET AT ME BEATS 2 SHORT DETROIT RAP HOMIE 313 GET @ ME IF U THINK U FUKIN WIT ME,NEVER MIND,CUZ U AINT

  • @MiNiKiDxLx2010 haha thanks bro ;)

  • nice good for what I need

  • not bad but simple made on fl... anybody should can made such a simple beat...:/

  • even you are a beginner you can use hip hop kicks and snares,not dance;))

  • Dats sick I like dis beat nice taste do sum more

    Dats Sumthin drake would sing to

  • nicht schlecht

  • HAHAHAHAHAHA THE FUCKIN 650 horse v-dubz

    course thing song is good you got good taste

  • cool where i can download mp3??

  • no weed equals no high equals livin life with stress, just one hit from that icky sticky cess,got my room cleaned up from a dirty mess, goddamn i mean god bless, bless god for the creation of this herb, got me feelin so superb/ she keeps me calm and layd back, tell everyone im done hittin it then i relax,but then i relapse, her smoke so smooth so silver so good, lungs cough feel bitter wish i could, smoke a bowl and just stare into space, realize that thc is the asnwer to ending hatebetween race

  • smoking da weed just 2 get me high 1 of da ways 2 make my days go by snortin da cocain lines so much stress u can tell by da look in my eyes i aint gotta lie, i cant wait 4 death 2 come put an end 2 my life cuz its just a rollercoaster ride, wat goes up must come down, back down 2 da ground shhh... evrythings quiet theres no sound da world has stopped spinnin, cuz evrybodys sinnin cant u see da devil grinin, waitin 4 me cuz da shit dat iv bin in, da crazy life im livin aint no joke

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  • nice!

  • When i spit i spit litterly, I spit bitterly, all the verses under-the, Say-Rip U bitches look like the last PICKED Come lick the drips outta satans DICK Rockn likea Swingin Ship More Big Things Poppin Than TIP Born constrewing plans of sin Got more Fitteds in my collection Than the stores got in Couple boys Grabbin couple packsa noise Send a Couple playboys, If they wanna play i got a couple toys datll make more noise
  • How does this get 150,000+ views and an instrumental like Blue Sky Black Death - Audiobography gets fuck all?? It's ridiculous..

  • ill rip this beat 4 you...i like it lol.....

  • not bad bro.

  • less "click" on kick. (Yeah I know it is hard to avoid, but it sounds better) . . . . how about Fl 9 better basses?! Nice melody

  • I'm Slim-T the 17 Year Old producer that is seeking for Fame, Fans and Respect. I would appriciate it if you could just spare couple minutes of your time and listen to my inspiring music and leave positive feedbacks.

    please no innapropriate comments as i am just looking for ways to promote my music.

    if you have any questions about my beats or anything you can simply contact me on Youtube, Facebook: Tolgabey Gol Or Email: Tolgabey_Gol@hotmail.com

    (Not A Spam)

    Thank You For Your time.

  • ill give you yummy dick in my jeep

    go in and out that pussy nice and deep

    i hear you weep, so i ask why

    you say you want a girl, youre secretly bi no problemo ill get a bitch

    watch u eat out her fish sandwich

    im so horny and turned on

    you making a bitches pussy turn into a pond

  • better than some i give you that boy

  • Dude I want to download this!

  • yea i came at call me a maverick

    adventurous type everyone on my dick

    sorry if its tragic but bitch i really had it

    but all these haters always try and grab it

    fuck them cuz they aint got real rhymes

    they report news sideways readin fuck new york times

    i see shit that they dont see i guess them niggas are just blind

    cuz u dont gotta look to hard to see what they gotta find

  • This instrumental was massively insane; I dare any1 to call it lame; I bet they all lyrically suck when it comes 2 this rap game; They all rap the same, drugs, alcohol, and scarring people up; But this is my teacup; I take a sip on this track & never pee it back; Fake rappers quack more than the duck from "Aflack" ;; But You Know What I Can't Evn Say Nothing 'Cuz This Was half Whack ; But I Promise U Tht I Throw Up Fire; Fake Rappers Bow 2 Me Like Some Kind Of Messiah; Good Rap Is What I Desire

  • @iAreDead

    If you think your hot your sadly mistakin, im tired off your shit like i was wakin and bakin, instead of being sneaky yo ass snakin, you on this trap im fuckin rapin, uAreDead because i fucking killed you, people pay for my time and i could of billed you, instead of taking your cash with bullets i filled you, call me george foreman cause i just grilled you, like a rollar coaster to the people cause i just thrilled you, call me the general of corporal cause i just drilled you...

  • same fuckin routine, day after day. this untamed world corruptedly disarrayed, I await for the day, constantine to dismay these astrayed demons, leave em bodies to decay. bitch i rap about real issues, pursued to reveal the truth, building recruits to refute against those who seek power, 13 above 33 they climbin the heighest tower, fuck we can go higher and higher, rain nuclear showers till they cower below us at our forthcoming hour.... nigga believe me when i say, i ain't no coward.

  • @rkocenarules you weeent haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaard! swear down you wrote this!!!

  • @rkocenarules Was that rap really serious?/ ill be damned to call you a lyricist/ i leave faggot rappers on the street delirious/ YOU MUST BE A BITCH CAUSE I SWEAR YOU'RE ON YOUR PERIOD/ at least my lyrics have a point like the top of a pyramid/ my lyrics so evil im a lyrical demon/ dude your lyrics have no freakin meanin/ i swear your drowning in your own semen/ Catch my rhymes on the cover of New York Times/ believe ME when i say, READ BETWEEN THE LINES!!!

  • @Pr0t0type3 think your so hard, capitalizing each word like you so diehard? these rhymes i'll fuckin' bombard on you fuckin' retard, give me regards, or i'll leave you scarred and bloody, layin' in my backyard, another body to discard in this personal graveyard of mine, i read between the lines, my own rhymes put the New York Times outta line.. i design these rhymes before any deadline, blow ur fuckin head with this carbine, shootin rhymes heard on every hotline

  • @rkocenarules

    You may not be coward but frankly you lack the power to reach the top of the tower I stand alone imortal u creep slowly like a turtle you cant touch my rhymes you fade with time I last forever leaving relics from my endeavor you try reach where i stand but there is only room for one man i am the best ive been put thro the test i know what it is to be stressed and stretched i always come out ahead you shud give up and go to bed everyone will remember wat i said long after i am dead

  • @KiLoCanon yo, listen up, spray this bitch with crimson, fuck

    immortal hero? i'm your villian bud, i'ma ravage your asshole better stiffen up, run laps around you.. i won the piston cup. These rhymes mantain my stability, i keep my reign with this ability, see i attain credibilty, cuz nigga i'm the game's artillary, rap runs thru these arteries, i accelerate past u till my heart pounds with harder beats, made it to the top aint no harder feat, got so high i can see holes in the ozones sheet

  • @rkocenarules wow gud shit

    im not a hero, but they say good triumphs over evil,

    and you aint touchin my asshole, back up NO HOMO,

    your swag so low, dont make me let tha tech go,

    you won the piston cup,but your girl rode me like one and licked my nuts

    you like to stunt,act all hard but its a front,

    instead of gettin a girl to marry, your butt-fuccin wit Garry,u rap very well its scary, since its comin from a fairy,i didnt do that gud this time,still managed to rhyme,

    ya u won lol need 2 be hgih

  • @rkocenarules your good

  • Dont had a easy life, come from a broken home, since i was 6 years old always home alone,

    livin in a zone, you can call it danger, Snitches talk to the popo, i give them my finger

    im gettin stressed and paranoid, from the weed and alcohol, this is how the dutch boys ball!

    blowin up banks, that is what we do, get a bottle of gas, put it in the money machine and blow it up fast.

  • pretty good

  • CHECK OUT MY BEATS

    :SCAM:

  • when i rap/ ill tap, you out in a second/ like faster then the speed of light/ im ready to fight/ then later fly a kite/ with my daughter/ thats right im a daddy/ i roll in my caddy/ like a pimp with the tint. on my windows it glows like hoes/ wearin fake ass bling/

  • a little bit faster...

  • GARBAGE!!!!!

  • its ok i hope you way better now

    cause the beat is all stock sound aye man i make beats to check em out on my channel i use FL8 XXL

    i make all diferen kinds of geners please listen to them and if you like them ubscribe aye ill do the same to you

    and add as friend kk peace

  • Freestyle: Life is a game and we all wanna win some/Every time we play it's a competition/It seems no one can satisfy fastidious ways/Can't we just enjoy ourselves while we play/I fluctuate my lyrics in a flow all my own/I live inside the music like it's my happy home/I don't take shit from haters or criticize the unknown/Cause I was once the new girl in the game, now I'm grown/Can you hear the pain in my vocal tone/Can you hear the strain comin from my veins as I flow

  • bet you can't make that w12 corner fast.

  • HA!

  • A wide body kit is custom yo but i think that car'd look better if it was a 4 do'. VW is the sign that i'm throwin up Cause Daewoo is the car i drove growin up But now i'm a balla, I drive wide body kits I drive with fat rims, when i turn- my tire splits. This car's as fast as the beat, its lunch for other cars to eat If you disagree then come line up with me, i'll show you what my twin turbo's do they'll take ur pinks and turn your face blue. lol i'm just bored and felt like spittin
  • lets hit up with a free diss?

    you wana spit first?

  • @0l3l3yk1lla lol challenger first ha.

  • it looks like someone sat on that GTI.

  • haha dont be so modest on your beats. Act like they sick and people will sometimes be more likely to think they are. Its a good one,

  • gay as hell

    lol im playin its sick

  • @shamin312 gay bro gay!

  • AMAZING!!!

  • this will be the last breath you take / so hold it cuz i gurantee it will be your last fate/

  • it be da man spittin biological warfare everbody sickend teeth cringin by the way i be dispersin all these verses have u trippin yo ego stricken.. now u notice who really be da dopest reakin havoc on all u soljas thugs nd gangstas leavin a blood wake behind me as i pass ya aint no chance u can surpass the masta juss split chu lyk ma swisha twist u up nd flick u wit ma bic bring da flame nd ash ya let u wither away lyk a stain on a white tee eventually you'll fade

  • nice beat songs really good !!!!!!

  • i must have this beat

  • yo fists let me use this track on my album?

  • and i rekon if u give me a second youll get brashed by the man from peckham kick off ya head like my name was beckham wen im in ya endz betta stay in ya section rollin thru with my mans hard vexions got harder kickz dan lethal weapon see i will join ya team and i will merk every body in the scene and leave i will punch you in the face and make you start to sweat lke keith i am a millitant mover blacked out cougar stab up you and ya boiz like my name is freddie krugar

  • I drop bombs on these snitches, getting stitches

    Riding down i-75 hitting switches with the bitches

    Never know whats round the corner, baby im a soulja....

    So just sit in the corner get to jerkin nigga.

    when i ride i get that purp nigga. your bout to get hurt-

    red stains on your shirt. eyes black and blue but i aint talking

    colors, get you hurt. I dont mean to offend, please just comprehend

    that im the real mother fucking G.

  • @SuperchargedStyle your gay

  • @SuperchargedStyle reply to this and you get ful of stitches/ kill you so quick that your screams will be distant/ im evil cant you tell i was born to be sent to hell/ hang your self with a belt holding a bell/ killin this flowe like nightmare on elm street/ pumpin lead like pornstars do skeet/ try me and get rolled ovcer with a boulder/ breakin you up and only leavin your shoulder/im colder/ your hoe comes to me so i can fold her/ im mean bullyin rappers like a rodeo/ just blow me hoe
  • eyo eyo eyo son dun buddy & god whatup ese. cat boss pops dude ma moms no sence pepe. ha ha checkout some ill music at myspace/spawkwon

  • i only got a minute

    to make a quick sly point

    words flow like liquid

    go ahead and lick my loins

    fool you can just blow me

    i dont need your recompense

    that cuz the dude two below me

    just simply dont make sense

  • is thier a way to get this beat so i can rip a track

  • puffin n passin the kush n the cronic smoke, we ashen,blunts we twist, throw yo motherfuckin hands up, get to the dance floor shaken wats given wake up in the evening, with a bloody vision, in the kitchen cutting flesh, lost my self to the one and only baby ur never lonely, only faithful to u shes fresh, she takes my breath. im lifted gifted i am. with thees hands. no wounder my lyrics burn you germs . now a days i just want no pain, lost to much but i still be ballin in

  • nice beat...

    anyone fancy checkin out my homie freestylin high as fuck??

    check my uploads...

    the locals love him at the moment..

    safe

  • its brilliant maan!!

    see my beats !!

  • car changin colors like a box of crayolas, you know im big so lil nigga scoot ova, when i hit the place hatin niggas get mad, dis bitch said i got a baby and maury said i aint the dad

  • tu magh string wil pi normal es no bad

  • i come from the cold .. mr cant touch me im raw , lil pussy's dont like the blood on there palms..allways relieing on the king o tha lions the most feairce , gotta catch them a deer ...

  • im flowin & blazin no hesitation i know im in probation so hoez no mo questions its da Mexican flowin out Mesa man so i guess u can call me MesaCan! know wat im sayin if u dont den fuck u wanna know wat i rep i stay true blue High ass fuck on da Kush flowin on YouTube!
  • Good beat ma man could be a bit faster but good beat..

    Check out my instrumentals on my channel!

  • fuck ill spit a little rhyme

    you want beef well its dinnertime

    im so in my prime

    look at the ladder how for ive climbed

    im nearly at the top

    lookin up at pac

    thinkin how the fuck

    can i do this shit

    had to improve my hits

    crazy how this music is

  • when i throw done my shit sometimes i slow down my shit im so pro with the flow now im sick im worth gold you worth nothin you sound old and my shit is bumping me im something else i gotta admit rapping ive been thru a lotta of this shit and being real your bars are wack you talking you a star on ya raps talk about your cars and ya gats hows about you a fraud not a fact cmon now you cant afford none of that!!
  • *you know..wack*

  • Again Pretty Nice For Your First Rap Beat Its A Slow Beat So Imma Slow My Rap Speed See Me In Tha Club With My Cherry Red Nikes Someone got shot and they became Blood Red Tragically Oh What A Castraphy But iDid This Magically iTouched him on the forehead and he gave money to me Today is my Birthday and today the rhymes are phat And iHave received no diss comments, Look At That He Just Got Hit With A Bat Oh Snap -Yung Drizzle, 10 yrs old (Well 11 today :P) the last part was kinda..ykno
  • that's actually a pretty good beat....How hard was it for you to finalize it??

  • and dats all mine yeah 10mins fink power all u needs a heavier beat n sum more drops buts its alrite

  • first i was cautious nautious lookin back/neva fort my big head would get distract/full contact no lookin back/looked back stood back & den i blacked out/black hubby cab car to a hotel/werent a fivestar more like motel/wernt greeted wid a butler but a doorbell/busted up da front door i was greeted wid hell/bodies on da shelves blood in da pipelines/worst site id eva seen on life of grime/i dont wann lose my life dis da end of da rhyme i wann go home 2nite c my kids n wife/

  • be protected walkin around me like you aint seen me

    well wear a vest and some more protection my shit harder than erection

    take a second to listen im dissin all yall fakes and wanna be's

    rest in peace

    you no longer hard to go on this beat cuz i rule the rap kingdom

    bring some son

    and we'll talk but if you cant walk or pull a trigga then bye bye niqqa

    i cant stay low i bust open with a mack and spray a couple shots to ya back

  • yeah, it's a good start though. :]

  • Pretty Nice For Your First Rap Beat!

  • what a sadness.

  • dope shit my nig keep it up!

    ONE

  • I've adapted to this rap shit As soon as the beat hit Them wigs get split And the mic get lit from my lyrical construction I will bring destruction punction So hear my assumption when you see that pumpkin its me the headless horseman lookin for a corpse man with my theme song with no fuckin organ have a nice rainy day and its fuckin pourin ya pen pal was lyrically killed and no one is fuckin mournin
  • lol

  • ok sidwell190 im nt sure wat u sed but it gt removed so i gess it was gay well heres a lil reply for u

    ok m8 ive had enuf of lil tolls like u man u need 2 go bck 2 scool u aint gt shit against me im by far da best mc pussy write sum rhymes bfre u fuck wiv me learn nt 2 fuck wiv a lad frm scunny

  • nice shit dude

  • tuff beat

  • I like this beat man. Is there anyway I can get it? I need it for a cypher going down this monday.

  • @Loligager989

    GL at your battle

  • ok man u all gt no rhymes go back 2 doing crimes n do sum time n write a few lines u lil pricks are tryn 2 mc muthafucker u aint gt shit against me so ill get inside me fuckin scooby run over u fuckin noobies u rly think that u can rap muthafuker ur rhymers are crap

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  • lol, ur using the most stock sounds ever. needs alot of work.

  • this was when i first started using fruity loops and was getting familiar with the programe. every1 starts somewhere.

    check my more recent instrumentals to see how i've improved

  • reminds me of the Hustlin' instrumental by Rick Ross. pretty good beat tho

  • yo it aint bad good beat, my rapin styles a lil faster tho, dats just ma style tho u know, got any others?

  • yo son, if this is one of ya first inst. then its pretty ill, keep at it, i make rap, and i could use beats like this, DW out boi 5*

  • OMG.... tht is theee beat why is it short tho?

  • yessssssss iiiiiiiiii iiiiiiii iiiiii wont not play dis game i aint in need of fame i shoot up pavement like an all time great my shyt dnt need to rhyme my shyt all ready throwing up quater half dimez 10 times x got big size S on my chest jst 2 flex

  • yuh...im comin' outta/ chankaga/ otina mutha fawkaz/ looky look/ a lyric bitta/ from slim shady/ so he aint got no rythem latly/ so something wrong wit em/ like ur crupted toe/ so rip off hydro/ aint got nothing from niffy yayo/ so everything ready to go/ n yew know where the door iz/ yew came in so log out/ fawk the talk/ i bit these beats/ n aint got nothing left/

  • oochie wallie chi bang bang

    str8 4m tha gangland where we get yo bitch and gangbang

    act a monkey, thinkin you Tarzan

    Im Bam Bam

    hit you till you die man

    cast u to the sky man with my club in hand man

    more animal than human inside this skull

    before i kill you i say hello, gimme one reason to spare yo soul

  • shit nice .i aint gona try n rap to it rite now..gota wait to get fukd up n let it go

  • you mother fuckers are tight but it doesnt take a white to know your all as big as my big toe so go back to your book and take a look kill it fill it do something with it cuz your rhymes like dying in my sleep i don't feel it and yes that was from eminem and if you dnt get it the first time fuck you again
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  • that is just a lil sick

  • This beat would be sick if it were more better quality with different kicks and snares and hi hats... not the default club basic. Sick beat though I can hear what you're trying to do. Also, make sure its in bars...

    ...God Bless...

  • rapping in text on youtube is the gayest shit ever

  • Agree

  • haha

  • its not that sick, infact its weak. i make one better in one day, i bet you were making it for one week. Shit... im corrupted, mind focus busted, but compared to you im god, man your rusted.What ? you confused ? man reckognize my eyes see and belive me my ideology can be thrusted, i cant loose... stay away from booz before you get short-fused and unadjusted. im disgusted this is instrumental abuse... ect. ;)

  • DANG THIS BEAT HARD

  • Im tha tightest on this beat, and if you fuck with me... Then you will see my hands comin in a frenzy knockin out ya teeth and I wont cease till your deceased then im pleased.

    I might not have a record deal but try to find anyone more real or mabye even more chill? You cant do it, now step to it and yo girl, I'll run through it.

  • blunt smoke fillin the ceilin while we just chillin with caucasion women, bowl stay cherried so i jst keep hittin, got me a bottle o drank so i jst keep sippin, while im huggin up 2 lanes them polices keep trippin, im the hottest rapper on this comment list, such fire that people gonna end up commentin this, i stay rollin on E and i dont mean on empty, pockets aint fat but nigga i got plenty, verbally commit homicide to u drama guys, im ridin a stallion while you're just on the llama ride

  • not bad , not bad

  • Cause Im too sick Beatin you girl rinsed her out quick On her back quick Givin her the big bangs of the big dick Beat smooth beat slick She was breathin like someone whod been runnin quick Moanin and screamin passionate shit Not gentle ile penetrate it Suckin mans dick like a ice on a wooden stick Raggin so hard i broke her coxix Leavin dat pussy wit brok lips Shes wit you but still i meet it Chat for a while then i beat it Get to my yard on my cock the yatty will sit
  • yo yo when i get to clappin I get to rappin lisenin to dope beats in the back seat of my granny's volkswagon sittin low with my pants saggin have ur girl sittin next to me touch my balls an all over my dick grabbin she said enuff with da talkin an thats when the boots got ta knockin car started rockin granny got in and started it but i didnt notice i was busy pussy poppin she said drew get the fuck outta my car an it was back to walkin...
  • im the sickest when it comes to rapping yes i think im the badest chilling in a custumated volswagen with my chick on my lap we steady dipping iff it aint a bout money then dont ask me i be rolling in them streets with ak's wach your bodie drop you drawning in your own blood soaked push it to tha limite
  • look at that volkswagen on the vid-e-o

    makes me wanna .... on an or-e-o ;)

    Im so straight thuggin on this beat

    thats why my shit smells like a bus seat

    dont like me?

    I DONT CARE

    Steady rappin, im prepared

    if u dont like it then go. hoe

    peace

  • ok viski lets goo

  • i love this beat , its like making love to your woman at some beach, from mexico city , and im here to teach,, got "white" skin , i think i am black ,and my excuse is i got sprayed with bleach, while endless wars started at iraq... (it sounds better if i say it)lol

  • what's " FL " ?

  • Fruity Loops

  • i thought it was fruity looms?

  • Nice job bro...Keep it up. Please rate and comment my beat, thanks...

  • nightmares haunt me at night, from the beggining i thought i was right but the dream came true fell thru the dark hole like a 3rd dimension it didnt hurt cuz i cut the tension,if i was so strong i'd be benchin, i for got to mention try to diss me ill give you detention so sit down, and listen to my ryhmes that willmake you drown get high off it andbe surrounded by clowns laughing in a circle of flames, but hey dont do the crime,or fuck it ur less than nothin but a dime that i could flip anyday.

  • im boricaking n imma tell u something.. who is grimmjowproduction u whacc ur flow needs some construction while mines is straight destruction destroyin every mc on sight heart darker den midnight u could call me mr. call of duty this glocc would put u in a deep sleep like sleepin beauty 2 wake up u need more den a kiss battlin me is more like a death wish ill kill u den dump ur body in the ocean with the rest of the fish(tell me what ya think)

  • Nice rhymes u got somethin there... im the grim reaper when i get on the track, bitches like u i everyday slap, dont come here and fuck with grimmjow, cause ima gonna buster ur jaw, my lyrics are hard and raw, made out of solid steel, and im going for the kill, ima slap tha shit outta you dont be a stupid fool, dont go in the lions cave, dont come here and play brave, cause u will end up like trash, lookin like somethin in a car crash
  • talkin bout u goin 2 slap me the only 1 doin the slapin is me im the nigga u tryin 2 be thats real faltering i kept produtcion verse like a factory my pocket change is more den ur salry im ballin im flyin while u still crawing u a baby jus hate me cuz im hotter den the oven my flow is superbad call me mc lovin im buggin im wildin out im wining this battle n theres no doubt im sorry if u feelin are hurt but go pratice ur rhymz need some work

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  • diz beat is live still, i like da riddim

  • dont be writing lyrics u heard on rap battles and putting it on youtube as ur own -_- come up with original words of your own if u want to leave rap lyrics

  • Thiz iz one awezume instrumental.

  • dont waste my muthafukin time

  • nice yea..

  • someone need to tell grim reaper that i lost ma soul

    im cliffhangiin, barely danglin bout to lose ma hold

    Its hard to run this city, think im gon need dr. scholes

    i explode wit sum new shit

    thats so subliminal it get all in ya head like a q-tip

    Im too sick

    jus tryin to share ma two cents.

  • this is called beefin u have 2 cent i got 2 million dollars make yo bitch wanna holla fo a dolla let em flow to mexico im sick like a puppy with rabies imma mutha fucka trey D's im still in the 80's m80's ready to blom imma stow yo ass get tore up till the floor up and the ground down to hell the devil dont want cha cuz u suck im like chuck i fuck

  • if like chuck you fuck then like a vacuum you suck Nigga, we will neva kick it work on ya punts I stay high, you so underground work on ya blunts spray ya house up, have you missin work for a month im too clean like a laundry machine you a dumdum fuck wit me get beat up like a drumdrum none son spary ya girl face up wit ma cumgun IM done
  • haha ur not done im still here ya queer make niqqas in fear of the Mc Rear mutha fucka no mo tears

    just drink beers

    cheers

    fo all the ded hommies

    lost and found and turned around

    from the ground im spittin this shit aint writtin cuz i aint got time

    my rhyme is sick on this flow

    u gotta hoe letta go

    if she gotta go then she gotta go

    cumgun i make niqqaz run from the face of the earth since birth ive been a bad niqqa so let me show u what im worth mor then a stelf bomma i cause drama

  • If its beefin you want, then you bound to get beatin

    Im freddy kruger in the game, hope you aint sleepin.

    but if you tryin to get on ma level betta keep dreamin

    it seems like we at odds, so im bout to get even

    Ima bout to take you out quicka than fast food

    wit yo big man boobs

    yo hair look  like ma pubes

  • pubes haha

    im startin a new saga fight fo whats right tonite we fight in the octogan

    its fun big man boobs? u a pussy yo raps aint shit like post cards discard ya i can buy yo brains fo a bargin like a bought it from target miss the shot got pot fuck around u get shot

    im to hot

    fo this beat

    im from the street

    u from a suburban area

    where yo raps is nuthin my raps is bumppin get ready to start krumpin

  • ♪♫ ♪♫ ♪♫ ♪I GOT dem BEATs ♪♫ ♪♫ ♪♫ ♪ coustomize ur beat for $20

  • sick beat fam i wish lloyd banks would rap 2 dis!!

  • DUDE, this is one the hardest beats ever. 30 mins, 30 days, whatever. keep it up. please get better. and i'll be on the look out for u. good job.

  • omg i totally love this beat i wanna make a rap/song with it i already have ideaaaa omg so niceee!!!!!!!!!! might do a video response or something....maybe

  • if that is your first go, im impressed..i give you about 10 - 12months and you'll be making fire with some tight sounds.

  • kik ass trak! keep it up ya hear