You have great creativity. I wouldn't change a joke. Avoid stage sheets and memorize. I was lost in your awesome show when you stopped to find your place. Besides that, actually very funny. Keep writing, you're good at it.
I like a lot of your jokes. Sometimes you stutter which hurts the delivery. But hey you have the balls to say a lot of stuff that a lot of people, me included, couldn't do. It only gets easier. Keep up the great work.
Great stuff man my favorite joke was the one about the porta potty filled with placenta LOL
Dwhales4 5 months ago
ahhaha ur hilarious
ceresWar 11 months ago
japanese bombed the ppearl harbour dumb asss
estorcospencer 11 months ago
Good stuff.
Dogney 1 year ago
woah this is great
christianethic 1 year ago
You have great creativity. I wouldn't change a joke. Avoid stage sheets and memorize. I was lost in your awesome show when you stopped to find your place. Besides that, actually very funny. Keep writing, you're good at it.
fdmipgo 1 year ago
sara palin joke, thank you
MuKappa220 1 year ago 2
I like a lot of your jokes. Sometimes you stutter which hurts the delivery. But hey you have the balls to say a lot of stuff that a lot of people, me included, couldn't do. It only gets easier. Keep up the great work.
TR1GG3RSERIOUS 1 year ago 2
The hoover line is great. Even some not so funny jokes were funnier due to delivery.
evilgrayson79 1 year ago 3
@evilgrayson79 Thanks a lot, sir. Any specific material I should improve or entirely abandon?
ThePruneBrothers 1 year ago
@ThePruneBrothers I think it all has potential. I'm no critic, but I know what makes me laugh. I respect you for having the balls to get up there.
evilgrayson79 1 year ago
@ThePruneBrothers I know stand up comedy is hard but perhaps try to be a little less nervous :)
boganking1 1 year ago 3
@boganking1 I think that comes with time.
newrealization12 1 year ago