Death 101

[cooksterz]

i was afraid something was gonna jump out at me!! Nice pace

[LeonShnider]

I like it!

[LordTempist]

Thank you, it was originally for Lil Rich's halloween contest but I moved it here because she needed some company:)

[culverlocal]

excellent poem! Love ur style :-)

Cheers! 5starz*****

GB

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:) It was for LilRich's Halloween contest originally but then I moved it over here:)

[wdciii]

Interesting! I wish I had clicked over here sooner. I see some kindred spirit here and look forward to getting to know you. -Dennis

[LordTempist]

Thank you:)

[HeadlessFatLady]

OMG! That is awesome :D

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:)

[MelodyElize]

Aha! I just found this. I knew it wasnt' the image of the Lady Mary on your Claylavl video response. I think I understand what you were saying in that a little more now.

LT, this is hauntingly beautiful, the prose and the imagery was a perfect combination. Hugs for you and Lady Riddle....

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:) I really enjoyed making this:)

[LordTempist]

Excellent:)

[LordTempist]

I was trully trying for the haunting. I have been haunted by real ghosts so I know how it feels. The ghosts were respectful for the most part but they had a message. I cannot deny them their voice here.

[MelodyElize]

So, I am not alone. I have encountered spirits, not always respectful I am sad to say. They want to be heard, true. It has taken me years to pay attention. I didn't want to hear.

[LordTempist]

I am not sure of the exact nature of all of those things which want to speak to us. I know most people block out what they don't want to see or hear rather than be forced to deal with them. I've seen them but I try not too anymore.

[NiteBlogger]

AWESOME!

Thank for for responding...

and sharing this delightful poem.

[LordTempist]

Thank you:)

[OrangeCaesar]

This was a little over my head, I think. The writing was more distracting to me than anything...maybe it was the font? Great imagery, though.

~OrangeCaesar (Jules)

[LordTempist]

I tried to fade the font but it was too blurry on my comp. Posting it to YouTube made the font pixelated. I was pissed off and I apologize for it sucking.

[NiteBlogger]

sometimes pixelated can work...esp with this subject matter...

and although the font is nice - hard to read with busy background...

Great job though...LOVE the poem, visuals & music...

[LordTempist]

No, really:)

[eaglecrowowl]

beautiful!  (In a creepy way)

[LordTempist]

Dark Delights:)

[pinklantana]

Eerie poem and vid. Good Halloween entry! Thanks for sharing your poetry with us. :)

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much for coming to see it:)

[PragueVlogg]

Boo!

[LordTempist]

EEEEEEEeeeeekkkkk!!!!!

[plainolderica]

That is a great Halloween video! Dark, cold, without cliches or the usual imagery! I think you should get the prize!

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:) I appreciate your belief in my work:)

[CultOfTinkerlove13]

nice conversation yer havin' there.

[LordTempist]

Hiya COT:)

[LordTempist]

You get your 500 when I get mine:)

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much sir:)

[timido66]

Most excellent.

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:)

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

That was wicked awesome!! Love Love Love the poetry! You're not a fan of the Shakespearean era are you?! LOL This poem reminds me of the witches in Macbeth. Weirdly, it also reminds me of peanut M and M's and those black and orange generic chewy Halloween candies. It's almost like the angel of death has pulled up a bar stool and is trying to coach a near death experience! LOL

[LordTempist]

I think I know the connection here that pulls all that together. Halloween candy and old Vincent Price horror movies:)

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

Vincent Price. Totally classic. Can't stand him. But totally classic! LOL

Now, would you like Zen Armpit Gardens for 400 or Dudes in Drag for 1000???? LOL

[LordTempist]

Zen Armpit Gardens for 1000! I have this category all cupped in my wee little hands:)

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

Dude!! You've chosen the DAILY DOUBLE!! (The armpit hair that is!) LOL To sheer or not to sheer is the answer. What is the question? lol

[LordTempist]

What is,"I have mountain goats living in my armpits."

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

LMAO!!! You soo couldn't have chosen a better response!! You crack my ass up!! (Well, it already had a crack, but oh.....never mind. lol)

[LordTempist]

I'd like to take "Zen Armpit Gardens for 900" now Alex!

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

This famous armpit Zenist is known to have spawned with a famous satirical arachnid.

[LordTempist]

Those rumors can neither be confirmed nor denied:)

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

Are you saying you don't know the answer!!??? LOL Would this be a classic example of mistaken scientific classification!!?? You do know the category was not Conspiracy in Denmark, right?!? LOL

[LordTempist]

Alex,"Who is LordTempist."  Zen Armpit Gardens for 800 please Alex:)

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

I'm sorry to say you have been disqualified LT. Answers must be in the form of a question....to include proper punctuation since this is the written game! Please try again next week! LOL

[LordTempist]

Noooo!!!!!!!!

[13thDimension]

interesting

[LordTempist]

Thank you:)

[13thDimension]

I've always been intrigued by the phrase "mortal coil"...

[LordTempist]

Wikipedia says;

Derived from 16th Century English, "coil" refers to tumults or troubles. Used idiomatically, the phrase means "the bustle and turmoil of this mortal life."

[LordTempist]

[1] "Coil" has an unusual etymological history. It was coined repeatedly; at one time people used it as a verb to mean "to cull," "to thrash," "to lay in rings or spirals," "to turn," "to mound hay" and "to stir." As a noun it has meant "a selection," "a spiral," "the breech of a gun," "a mound of hay", "a pen for hens", and "noisy disturbance, fuss, ado."[2] It is in this last sense, which became popular in the 16th century, that Shakespeare used the word.

[richw4]

Great to see a poetic entry and with brilliant visuals! Good luck in the competition ☺

[LordTempist]

Thank you:)

[blackturtleus]

I really like the poem, especially the last line! Great work... I'm thinking a dramatic reading may have worked well too!

[LordTempist]

I couldn't get the microphone to work... And if you have ever heard me speak, I am terrible at dramatic speaking but it is a good thought:)

[txnrobin]

excellent!! the poetry, imagery, music are all woven together perfectly.

[LordTempist]

Yea I did this before I got drunk last night and shook my booty on Stikam.

[txnrobin]

i don't think it was a coincidence that as you started workin' it the stickam server went down.....

[LordTempist]

My booty kilt stickam!

[bowlingballout]

Nice Poem, good imagery.

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:)

[SindySigh321]

awesome vid !!

5 stars

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:)

[danbergam]

The words, pronounced one after the other, sounds creepy and sinister by themselves!

It has a tension, growing more and more, while the reader realizes that the dark fate narrated... is his own fate!

Very dark.

Now, for to save myself from such a dark and terrible fate, I feel the need to do something.

Hm.

Maybe, voting for a friend's video may help... ;-D

[LordTempist]

Nope, this is the final curtain call. There are no encores. Now bow to the audience, and take your turn...

[diezynueve69]

Ironically, this seems like Life 101.

[LordTempist]

True.

[diezynueve69]

Powerful figures of speech...paradoxes, metaphors, whatever they are called...they sting, very crisp.

[LordTempist]

Thank you very much:)

[RiddleSpider]

Must get some sleep now...will chat here later. Love you

[LordTempist]

Love you too:)

[RiddleSpider]

The things you do when we are not home. ;)

[LordTempist]

But... We are home?

[RiddleSpider]

Love you and love this!!!!!!

[LordTempist]

Wench:)

[LordTempist]

I Love you and I love you:)

[RiddleSpider]

Sorry I am late....

[LordTempist]

Betta l8 than nvr:)

[RadicalComedy]

OK, gotta go...kiddos calling me....talk to you later LordTempist...Thanks for chatting with me. ~Raven

[LordTempist]

Love ye:)

[RadicalComedy]

Besides The Exocist, the other movie that scared the crap out of me was with Vincent Price...He was this magician who selectively killed all of his critics who ruined his career. One scene, was this guy who had 2 white poodles. He put a funnel in his mouth, and forced fed him his 2 dogs. I couldnt eat oatmeal for years. ~Raven

[LordTempist]

Omg. Theatre of Blood?

[RadicalComedy]

LordTempist....Yah....thats it...how did you remember that?....geese, I wish I had a brain for those details..but yah, that movie freaked me out...~Raven

[LordTempist]

The poodles was the part that disturbed me:) Isn't it wierd that we both didn't give a shit about the evil people he killed, but the dogs were innocent?

[RadicalComedy]

LordTempist...well, that scene just screams cruelty....Like the movie The Saw series that has come out...Have you seen those?...They are gross but they dont hit me the same...I am not afraid of death and been tested through life that way anyway...I would never kill someone to live, so that movie and its "survival" principle doesnt intrigue me BUT, to eat your pet...WOW....that is disturbing..~Raven

[LordTempist]

I study horror to get my bearings:)

[RadicalComedy]

So, LordTempist...what is the scariest movie you ever saw?...Ladypn...what is yours? ~Raven

[LordTempist]

Food of the Gods. I was a child of 10 or so and it made me leave the theatre and throw up on the concrete outside.

[RadicalComedy]

LordTempist...lol...I have never seen that one before...I will have to rent it...~Raven

[LordTempist]

It is really old and hokey:) But hey, I was ten or so and the thought of something eating a human being revolted me.

[RadicalComedy]

Ladypn...You would think the answers to the universe...relationships...cou­ld have been solved on a wider scale by now...Hell, I am ready to go back to riding horses, and fighting T-Rex,lol. At least then, they didnt have self help books to utilize, or TV, or education to fall back on for their ignorance. ~Raven

[LordTempist]

I really wish I could help. I have the answers, but I am commited to one woman.

[ladypn]

I was going to say something, but don't want to interrupt you two. Have a wonderful, um, time!

[RadicalComedy]

Ladypn..Hey you...sorry...do I sound like a venter tonight? ~Raven

[ladypn]

Uhm, I don't think I'd describe it quite that way. But vent all you like! :)

[RadicalComedy]

Loved the eerrie music....I want to do a really scary vid next week....see if I can get my brain focused...What are you doing besides engaging the dark tonight, Mr. daredevil?...~Raven

[LordTempist]

I will do whatever you want as long as it doesnt get me divorced.

[ladypn]

Oooh, now you're just downright creepy. Great vid and poetry, Lady T.

[LordTempist]

Thank you My Love:)

[LatteSue]

Ohh scary. Excellent poetry!

[LordTempist]

Thank you Sue:)

[lolaknows]

Emo LT

5*'s and a shiver

[LordTempist]

Thank you:)

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

I'm tellin' ya!! Emo is totally contagious!! I can't wait to see Emo Lola!! LOL LOL

[LordTempist]

Lola is gunna do Emo?

[BitterSweetSuperstar]

Lola has decided to go EMO?!?! Awesome!!!! (I think this is how rumors get started!! LOL) She is already flirting with gay men!! I hear that is half of the battle for becoming an EMO girl!!! lol lol lol lol

[LordTempist]

I gotta see this:)

[LordTempist]

If you have Stickcam, my wife and I are over on it at Luka's show. Search on RiddleSpider and join us:)

[Pippilly]

You have finally succumbed to the "other side" Welcome my'Lord. I am the living dead. I see dead people. I see you my'Lord. I give you 5 rickety bones Mwaahhhhhhhhhhh

[LordTempist]

Thank you. I was very dark before I met my wife. She lightened me up a lot:)

[RadicalComedy]

Hi Pippilly...girl, I think I see your comments as much as mine,lol...SO, what is your daily youtube hour addiction?...mine is bad..I have issues,lol. ~Raven

[trillian57]

Excellent! You are an all around renaissance type guy! ♥

[LordTempist]

Always the Renaissance Man. Thank you for rooting me out:)

[batatakley]

LT... guess what!? I am just uploading mY video response for this very same conest! We are going to be enemies !?

[LordTempist]

I trully wish you had said this sooner I would have voted for you:)

[batatakley]

I knew about the contest yesterday night..and today I did the idea, shooting, editing. I think the three of us should considering to live together... to avoid this delate in information.

[LordTempist]

I did mine already.

[LordTempist]

I agree:)

[RiddleSpider]

You wanna live in Iowa? Or should we move?

[LordTempist]

We should all move to Italy and stay at Danbergam's house:)

[goodpeeper]

Excellent LT.

Good luck and ya get my vote!

5 stars and to my favorites it goes.

Great job.

Nancy

[LordTempist]

Thank you Nancy:)

[Illuminatta]

Well, I voted for ya...but with 108 entries...YIKES.

[LordTempist]

Yea I am doing this more out of inspiration than any hope of winning:)

[LordTempist]

Thank you:)

[Illuminatta]

Ooooo...creeeeepy! :)

[sillyputtytastesgood]

This is like an episode of "Insane Thoughts, by Jack Handey's Brother"...

[Illuminatta]

LMAO!!!

[LordTempist]

LOL!